kaila-brodi-terner

13.04.2026, 00:37

Wow! Ending at the most exciting part! What a very interesting, multifaceted story that includes a large number of fascinating characters whom I want to get to know better, which, as I understand, will be possible in the continuation. I will definitely follow the series, you've piqued my interest :) The author's language is very pleasant, vivid, with plenty of descriptions; everything feels very clear. The spicy scenes are unobtrusive and not overly detailed, which I, as a reader, appreciate. The main character evokes understanding and empathy. I haven't fully gotten to know Kaissa yet, but I think in the next parts, as an adult, she will be given more attention. Here, the story was more about her formation. In short, a very interesting fantasy, I will be looking forward to the continuation. Wishing you strength and inspiration!

oresta-matviicukAuthor

13.04.2026, 14:31

Kayla Brody-Turner, Thank you for the warm comment. I'm endlessly glad that you liked it)

viktoriia-berli

09.04.2026, 16:57

The book truly feels like it opens a portal to another world: everything is so meticulously thought out in detail (just consider the glossary of terms and the description of the six clans!), vividly described, that you involuntarily become, if not a participant in the events, then a close observer. The plot is not superficial, very much like a screenplay, with all characters having their own role, significance, and personality. And what impressed me the most is the dark heroes, the vampires, described in such a way that they don’t evoke the typical negative reaction in me personally. While reading the story, it seems that the alliance between a vampire and a witch’s daughter will benefit both clans, and feelings might spark between Kaissa and Patrick in the future. Perhaps we’ll be able to read about this in the book’s continuation, which will be out soon? Thank you for the story!

viktoriia-berli

12.04.2026, 16:34

Oresta Matviichuk, Definitely publish, you have wonderful stories!

kaila-brodi-terner

10.04.2026, 21:57

Meira is also an ambiguous figure, I'm curious about the purpose of her coming to Patrick. I really like the pair of Frank and Emily; his support for his wife, despite a truth that could confuse anyone, is very telling. And the appearance of Amata and Isaac was very pleasant. The characters are etched in memory. The dialogue between Kayden and Patrick is quite tense. The introduction to Etienne is unforgettable) You can immediately see the hero's character; I think it's quite hard to get through to him. So much mystery surrounds the other vampire and the dialogue with Meira, it’s getting more and more interesting) I’ll return to reading a bit later and leave feedback as soon as I gather more thoughts) Have a nice evening and inspiration!

oresta-matviicukAuthor

11.04.2026, 23:51

Kayla Brody-Turner, Étienne is one of my favorite characters, although the author shouldn’t have favorites like that))) Sincerely thank you for commenting and reading.

kaila-brodi-terner

10.04.2026, 21:55

Hello!) I started reading your book) The introduction to Patrick was interesting; the character obviously has a secret he’s not yet aware of, but he’s very eager to uncover it. Emily and Frank evoke very pleasant emotions; they are sincere in their feelings and were really looking forward to Kaissa. But Corlan raises questions; it seems he has a personal bitter story, and I have bad premonitions about him...

oresta-matviicukAuthor

11.04.2026, 23:49

Kayla Brody-Turner, Hello. Your intuition doesn’t fail you even a bit.

kaila-brodi-terner

10.04.2026, 21:55

Korlan surprised with inappropriate decisiveness, and Emily's response was even more confusing; now it's even more intriguing to find out what happened between them. The appearance of the stranger also caused concern; obviously, Emily has secrets too, which will gradually be revealed. Luka вызывает disgust with his tricks; I feel sorry for Kona, poor girl. No wonder they say that love is blind; in Korlan's case, it's not even love anymore, but some kind of obsession. A terrible act, and the only consolation is that nothing came of it.

kaila-brodi-terner

10.04.2026, 21:55

The author's terminology is also interesting, thank you for the notes, it was very engaging to read) The conversation with Katsuri is quite informative as well, the connection that is impossible to resist is complex in itself, and here it is at such a young age, time will tell how Patrick will get out of it.

tamara-iurova

09.03.2026, 23:06

Congratulations on finishing!

olxa-elder

09.03.2026, 12:23

Congratulations on finishing! ❤️❤️❤️

olena-guida

09.03.2026, 11:26

Congratulations on completing the work!

oresta-matviicukAuthor

09.03.2026, 11:44

Olena Huida, Thank you!

carivna-mriia

09.03.2026, 11:14

Congratulations on finishing)

carivna-mriia

07.03.2026, 22:06

Um... Well, this can't be the final episode)))

carivna-mriia

08.03.2026, 10:24

Oresta Matviichuk, Well, I get it. It literally ended with the setup.

carivna-mriia

04.03.2026, 12:51

For Amata, this is kind of bad news, I understand(((

carivna-mriia

01.03.2026, 13:58

Oh... An unexpected and sad turn...

irina-feniks

28.02.2026, 12:39

Very interesting and unexpected twist. I thought Korlan would manage to carry out the plan. Haha)

carivna-mriia

26.02.2026, 14:22

Uh... I feel like I missed something. Is everything okay with Amata? Why did she disappear? Does Kaissa's brother have no magical powers? Did they check?

oresta-matviicukAuthor

27.02.2026, 00:44

Magical Dream, If we explain where she disappeared to, the focus will shift too much to her. And that would be too much.