andrii-serstiuk

28.02.2026, 20:04

Hello, Ms. Eva! Your work "Why Do You Need Me?" reads easily, with an understanding of the characters' psychology, and it feels like you know your audience well — this is the strongest aspect. Many comments confirm: you hit the mark, touching those for whom you wrote. At the same time, I must share a man's perspective. The story of the main heroine evoked empathy, but the hero did not. His behavior, decisions, and sexual interactions do not align with realistic male logic. Maksym feels more like a female fantasy, which is completely fair for the "women's romance" genre. Women have every right in literature to fantasize about any kind of men. However, when it comes to erotic literature aimed at men, different "strings" need to be touched: actions, reactions, and sexual chemistry should resonate with male perception. I see your skill in the text, your sense of rhythm, emotions, and the inner world of the characters. And that’s the main thing. The question is only about who the work is intended for. For the women's romance genre, it works excellently; for erotica aimed at a male audience — less so. Thanks to this text, I am once again convinced: you know what you’re doing and feel your world. Thank you for the opportunity to experience it.

liia-lisova

22.02.2026, 14:41

A very emotional and touching story❤️❤️❤️

jeva-sovaAuthor

22.02.2026, 15:08

Liya Lisova, Thank you very much for your feedback!

lilia-stefanyshyn

15.02.2026, 00:49

An incredibly touching book, thank you for the wave of tender and gentle emotions, the 18+ scenes are just wow, I read it in one breath, good luck and inspiration!!!

jeva-sovaAuthor

15.02.2026, 12:14

Lilia Stefanyshyn, Extremely grateful for your feedback! )

anastasiia-dniprovska

28.08.2025, 12:38

Cool! Wishing success to the book!

jeva-sovaAuthor

15.02.2026, 12:13

Anastasia Dniprovska, Thank you very much!

marry

26.01.2026, 17:31

Hi wonderful author, your book has incredible potential and deserves even more readers. Many authors like you have reached millions of readers with our assistance, and I would love to help you too. If it's okay with you, let's talk on Discord at @marry_445

teia-kalinovska

14.08.2025, 23:05

It feels like I didn’t just read, but lived through every emotion of Kira and Max. I really loved the story: it’s alive, engaging, and makes you feel and worry. At some moments, my eyes were teary. Your characters turned out so real, and the feelings between them are so genuine! And a special thanks for the ending❤️❤️❤️

teia-kalinovska

13.08.2025, 20:31

Wow, everything was turning upside down inside me when Kira was driving Max away. And then there was that fight. I don’t know how Timur will show himself later, but in this situation, well done for not hurting the guy.

teia-kalinovska

12.08.2025, 22:20

I read seven chapters without even noticing, the emotions of Max and Kira are conveyed so wonderfully. I worried along with the guy whether Kira would come, got angry that she was pushing him away, felt sad over the mother's thoughts about the one true love for a lifetime, and that orchid in his hands! And of course, the masterful love scenes! I really liked these chapters❤️

anzelika-goran

04.08.2025, 17:34

So, I’ve read four chapters and I’m completely satisfied)) The story is interesting, the plot is logical. Therefore, I recommend it for reading)) And I wish the author inspiration and success with the book)))

anzelika-goran

04.08.2025, 17:33

Marathon. Chapter 4. Max ended up at Kira's place) The boy's biggest dream came true) First, strong alcohol, and then... Well, I won't spoil it here. Let everyone who’s curious take a peek at the pages of this book. And what can I say? It’s passionate and hot here))) For now, Kira doesn’t want to get attached to the guy, but something tells me that won’t last long)))

anzelika-goran

03.08.2025, 13:55

Marathon. Chapter 1. The story begins in a café, where we meet the main character named Max, who becomes infatuated with one of the visitors. Quite an interesting start to the book and an intriguing ending to the chapter. The story is not clichéd and reads easily. The only downside I would note is the presence of Russianisms (but there aren't many, so it's not critical: "upwards" instead of "up").

anzelika-goran

03.08.2025, 16:02

Eva Sova, Sorry, I didn't know. I hope that this horror will end someday and Mariupol will return to Ukraine. And you're doing great for trying to write in Ukrainian)) I believe that you will succeed because the book is really interesting)))

anzelika-goran

03.08.2025, 14:20

Marathon. Chapter 3. Max turned out to be quite a sensitive guy. He covered for his colleague, even though it might cause him trouble. However, life rewarded him)) The girl who captured his heart appeared and even more — she invited him over))) The story is picking up pace)))

jeva-sovaAuthor

03.08.2025, 14:30

Angelika Horan, "Oh, yes! It’s going to get hot!"

anzelika-goran

03.08.2025, 14:10

Marathon. Chapter 2. The author introduces us to another heroine — Kira. The girl is in love with Artur and wants to please him, so she goes to a salon and buys seductive lingerie. However, happiness did not come. The girl caught her beloved cheating... In this chapter, the pain of the main heroine is well described. It’s interesting to follow her. On the downside, there are some Russianisms: "pogruzivshis" instead of "porynuvshy," "prizhav" instead of "prytys"... And I would also replace the word "povalyalasya" with "ponizhylasya." P.S. I don’t mean to offend. The chapter is interesting)))

jeva-sovaAuthor

03.08.2025, 14:29

Angelika Horan, Someday I will take the time to edit the text. I wrote it with my heart, I love these characters very much.

tania-taim

25.07.2025, 21:45

The book was read in a day) Sometimes one decision is fateful, and the future shows it was a mistake. The characters went through trials but stayed together. I liked the characters; the relationships, interactions, and feelings of the heroes are described very sincerely and emotionally. Thank you, Eva, for the pleasant reading. Wishing you success in your creativity.

jeva-sovaAuthor

25.07.2025, 21:54

Tanya Time, I'm very glad that you liked it! Thank you for your kind comments.

tania-taim

25.07.2025, 18:39

Oh, these men, adrenaline, testosterone. We women are made differently. Very sweet Max, my heart longs to help him.

jeva-sovaAuthor

25.07.2025, 20:41

Tanya Time, Yes, we tend to feel sorry for and comfort.