Abstract of the book "Warrior 1. Unexplored worlds"
Having served his military service and spent the time in hospital after being wounded, Vlad returned home, intending to have a good rest. But man plans, and the gods decide. Before he knew it, the soldier found himself in another world where human life was worthless, because the Emperor, in order to preserve peace, had given power over his subjects and their property to goblins and trolls. If the village has paid its tribute, live until the next term, and if you decide to resist, hire a Defender. That's it. What else can Vlad become if all he knows how to do is fight? But he knows how to do it well.
33 comments
olexandr-voitsekhovsky22.06.2024, 17:41Semantic error: it says "joking," but in context, it should be "don't joke like that."
- olexandr-voitsekhovsky22.06.2024, 17:36
Chapter 12. Not "fooling around," but "playing the fool." 2) The evening is not "languid," but rather dreamy or perhaps wistful.
- olexandr-voitsekhovsky20.06.2024, 22:15
Again, the wrong case: not "deceased creature" but "deceased creature's".
- olexandr-voitsekhovsky20.06.2024, 22:11
9.1 not "river pebble" but "river pebbles," incorrect case.
- olexandr-voitsekhovsky20.06.2024, 21:56
Chapter 9.1 error: not "tvaruk," but "tvaruky" in the singular genitive case.
- olexandr-voitsekhovsky20.06.2024, 21:52
Part 8.2 (beginning) "beast" - a Russicism. It could be beast, creature, brute, animal, and so on.
- olexandr-voitsekhovsky18.06.2024, 19:29
On page 2 of chapter 4, it's not "mastery" but skillfulness
- olexandr-voitsekhovsky13.06.2024, 21:51
On the second page, there is a mistake: not "realized," but "being realized" or "feasible."
ivanna-vatamaniuk21.04.2024, 12:43nice
oleg-govda21.04.2024, 14:12Ivanna Vatamaniuk, Thank you. Enjoy your reading.
marta-krecet01.01.2024, 06:06Hello. Nice book. But as I understand, this is just the beginning.
marta-krecet05.03.2024, 03:57Oleg Govda, Thank you. I will definitely read it.
- vadim-knazev21.01.2024, 22:04
so
oleksandr-taran28.12.2023, 19:05Thank you for the book. I haven’t finished reading it yet, but so far I like it. My only request is to remove the mention of the Fukushima disaster, then it might be possible to imagine that the beginning of the book was set in the 90s, and it would make sense how a young guy fought in Afghanistan and why he only has Soviet quotes in his thoughts. Or, if there will be many references to modern events later on, please explain how old the main character is (because everyone treats him as if he’s young, around 30, but logically he should be 40-45), and how a young guy from Lviv region (judging by the name of the river) from 2012 or later managed to fight in Afghanistan (judging by the phrase about good spirits, I can’t think of anything else), and why, apart from Soviet quotes, there’s nothing else left in his head.
oleg-govda28.12.2023, 22:00Oleksandr Taran, conditionally - 25) but the author is 60) so overlaps are inevitable.
hanna-wowk27.12.2023, 15:22Interesting, written in a lively language, so it's easy to read. Thank you! I wish there were more books like this, and not only about "zasvity."
oleg-govda27.12.2023, 16:13Hanna Wowk, Thank you. Enjoy your reading.
igor-molodyk17.12.2023, 08:42Somehow the book ended unclearly, or did I miss something? Please explain what that was.
igor-molodyk27.12.2023, 06:12Oleg Govda, thank you for the response
olga-basarab26.12.2023, 22:13Interesting. But I didn't quite understand the ending. They were heading to the goblins. So, did they win or not? What happens next?
oleg-govda26.12.2023, 22:23Olga Basarab, Read the continuation
Warrior 1. Unexplored worlds
About the book
Having served his military service and spent the time in hospital after being wounded, Vlad returned home, intending to have a good rest. But man plans, and the gods decide. Before he knew it, the soldier found himself in another world where human life was worthless, because the Emperor, in order to preserve peace, had given power over his subjects and their property to goblins and trolls. If the village has paid its tribute, live until the next term, and if you decide to resist, hire a Defender. That's it. What else can Vlad become if all he knows how to do is fight? But he knows how to do it well.
33 comments
- olexandr-voitsekhovsky22.06.2024, 17:41
Semantic error: it says "joking," but in context, it should be "don't joke like that."
- olexandr-voitsekhovsky22.06.2024, 17:36
Chapter 12. Not "fooling around," but "playing the fool." 2) The evening is not "languid," but rather dreamy or perhaps wistful.
- olexandr-voitsekhovsky20.06.2024, 22:15
Again, the wrong case: not "deceased creature" but "deceased creature's".
- olexandr-voitsekhovsky20.06.2024, 22:11
9.1 not "river pebble" but "river pebbles," incorrect case.
- olexandr-voitsekhovsky20.06.2024, 21:56
Chapter 9.1 error: not "tvaruk," but "tvaruky" in the singular genitive case.
- olexandr-voitsekhovsky20.06.2024, 21:52
Part 8.2 (beginning) "beast" - a Russicism. It could be beast, creature, brute, animal, and so on.
- olexandr-voitsekhovsky18.06.2024, 19:29
On page 2 of chapter 4, it's not "mastery" but skillfulness
- olexandr-voitsekhovsky13.06.2024, 21:51
On the second page, there is a mistake: not "realized," but "being realized" or "feasible."
- ivanna-vatamaniuk21.04.2024, 12:43
nice
oleg-govda21.04.2024, 14:12Ivanna Vatamaniuk, Thank you. Enjoy your reading.
- marta-krecet01.01.2024, 06:06
Hello. Nice book. But as I understand, this is just the beginning.
marta-krecet05.03.2024, 03:57Oleg Govda, Thank you. I will definitely read it.
- vadim-knazev21.01.2024, 22:04
so
- oleksandr-taran28.12.2023, 19:05
Thank you for the book. I haven’t finished reading it yet, but so far I like it. My only request is to remove the mention of the Fukushima disaster, then it might be possible to imagine that the beginning of the book was set in the 90s, and it would make sense how a young guy fought in Afghanistan and why he only has Soviet quotes in his thoughts. Or, if there will be many references to modern events later on, please explain how old the main character is (because everyone treats him as if he’s young, around 30, but logically he should be 40-45), and how a young guy from Lviv region (judging by the name of the river) from 2012 or later managed to fight in Afghanistan (judging by the phrase about good spirits, I can’t think of anything else), and why, apart from Soviet quotes, there’s nothing else left in his head.
oleg-govda28.12.2023, 22:00Oleksandr Taran, conditionally - 25) but the author is 60) so overlaps are inevitable.
- hanna-wowk27.12.2023, 15:22
Interesting, written in a lively language, so it's easy to read. Thank you! I wish there were more books like this, and not only about "zasvity."
oleg-govda27.12.2023, 16:13Hanna Wowk, Thank you. Enjoy your reading.
- igor-molodyk17.12.2023, 08:42
Somehow the book ended unclearly, or did I miss something? Please explain what that was.
igor-molodyk27.12.2023, 06:12Oleg Govda, thank you for the response
- olga-basarab26.12.2023, 22:13
Interesting. But I didn't quite understand the ending. They were heading to the goblins. So, did they win or not? What happens next?
oleg-govda26.12.2023, 22:23Olga Basarab, Read the continuation