zhanna-biller

13.04.2026, 00:22

God, what a handsome man. This is something.

roma-arivederciAuthor

13.04.2026, 09:34

Zhanna Biller, ☺️❤️☕️Thank you! It's incredibly nice to know that you like it)

zoia-braterska

24.03.2026, 18:57

The ideas were not bad, but the writing style is awful!!! Some moments are just dumb. How can someone drink a glass of cold vodka and not notice that it's alcohol? Especially a girl who doesn't drink. Then Kira first "passes out," and then, drunk, climbs a fire escape to the attic of a high-rise... And there are plenty of such moments. The main character looks completely stupid. The sentences are constructed with lexical incompetence. The dialogues are such that sometimes it's unclear who is speaking. There are a lot of spelling and punctuation errors in the text. This writing needs professional editing and correction to truly become a literary work! I wish the author inspiration and creative potential!

roma-arivederciAuthor

24.03.2026, 20:12

Zoya Braterska, an author's style is such a peculiar thing—some people like it, while others don’t connect with it. It happens sometimes that an author and a reader just don’t find each other. And for some things, experience is needed. The situation with such a drink is quite lifelike. Such alcohol is called a "screwdriver." And it’s often and effectively used for exactly that purpose. As for mistakes—unprepared readers often consider things to be errors when they aren’t. But I would be immensely grateful if you could write to me on Facebook with examples, including pages or chapters. I’ll take a look. Anything can happen—maybe an unedited draft did slip in somewhere. But just writing "illiterate" about anything and everything is something anyone can do. And if someone "doesn’t understand," that’s often their problem, not the text’s. ) And of course, thank you for your wishes. In turn, I wish you not to torment yourself and to read only what you enjoy. And before using meaningless phrases like "creative potential," consider their relevance with common sense. Because this phrase carries the vibe of some Soviet factory small-circulation newspaper, where a leading weaver with 8 years of education writes an article by assignment. And wants to add beauty to the style. But due to a lack of education and a sense of language, adds a cliché, popularly called a simulacrum. )

steisi-mur

15.10.2025, 01:33

I wish for the book to find its reader, and for the author—endless inspiration!

roma-arivederciAuthor

15.10.2025, 10:28

Stacey Moore, ☺️❤️☕️

mara-santarna

27.07.2025, 11:48

Thank you for the emotions your book gave me. It was interesting. And such a story is believable). Is the botanical garden with squirrels the one near the University?) It would be good to proofread for mistakes, and it will be perfect) because somewhere instead of Dym, it’s written as Denys). And somewhere there’s a repeated line.

roma-arivederciAuthor

27.07.2025, 20:49

Mara Santarna, Thank you☺️❤️☕️ Yes, it's the one opposite Volodymyrsky ) I'll check what's up with Denys, the repeated line has already been removed )

nadya

14.07.2025, 19:49

Thank you for the wonderful emotional book and I wish you inspiration

roma-arivederciAuthor

14.07.2025, 19:55

Nadya, ☺️❤️☕️ thank you!

svitlana-romaniuk

14.07.2025, 18:16

Congratulations on finishing the book ❤️❤️❤️ Wishing you success ❤️

roma-arivederciAuthor

14.07.2025, 18:29

Svitlana Romaniuk, ❤️❤️❤️Thank you!

nataliia-dizurko

14.07.2025, 16:54

Congratulations on completing another exciting book! I hope Marlboro and Kira have an unforgettable vacation. It doesn’t matter where, what matters is with whom! ❤️ I’m looking forward to new stories from you. You write very interestingly!

roma-arivederciAuthor

14.07.2025, 18:10

Nataliya Dizhurko, ☺️❤️☕️ thank you for the emotions while writing and the wonderful wishes!

olga-boiko

14.07.2025, 16:42

♥️♥️♥️

roma-arivederciAuthor

14.07.2025, 17:02

Olha Boyko, ♥️♥️♥️

lana-rei

14.07.2025, 09:28

Congratulations on finishing the book. Wishing you success, inspiration, and many grateful readers.

roma-arivederciAuthor

14.07.2025, 09:39

Lana Rey, ☺️❤️☕️Thank you, the feeling is mutual!

reader-lana

14.07.2025, 09:16

Congratulations on the completion! I hope that Kira's deal will hold, and Marlboro won't add to his list, and the third one will indeed be the only one! Thank you!)

roma-arivederciAuthor

14.07.2025, 09:38

Reader Lana, ☺️❤️☕️ Three is a lucky number ) Thank you!

svitlana-c

14.07.2025, 08:48

Thank you for the wonderful and interesting story!

roma-arivederciAuthor

14.07.2025, 09:03

Svitlana Ts, ☺️❤️☕️And I thank you for worrying about Kira and Marlboro and for supporting the author )

nataliya-parfenyuk

13.07.2025, 01:16

Hello! I'm glad I managed to read the book while it was being created! I'm happy for those who will be able to read it in one go without pauses, if such an opportunity exists. ) The story is wonderful! Thank you

roma-arivederciAuthor

13.07.2025, 19:14

Nataliya Parfenyuk, ☺️❤️☕️

tamara-sugailo

12.07.2025, 21:50

Thank you, Mr. Roma, for the original, interesting story! It's a pity that the hero is sitting on the motorcycle alone...

roma-arivederciAuthor

13.07.2025, 13:40

Tamara Shugaylo, ❤️❤️❤️

romaska

12.07.2025, 15:44

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I want a detective series from Kira or investigative reports from Svitlana. Or stories from Malboro or Dima about how Kira and Svitlana solve frauds and all sorts of other crimes.

vladimir-didux

11.07.2025, 19:06

++

roma-arivederciAuthor

12.07.2025, 14:51

Volodymyr Didukh, ☺️❤️☕️