Abstract of the book "The Thousand-Year Wolves"
What to do if your only close relative — your sister — is slowly dying and only a miracle can save her? What to do if miracles are rare, and magic itself is on the brink of extinction? An evil sorceress destroyed magic when she cursed an ancient tribe, turning them from humans into wolves. There is only one way out: to restore magic and break the curse. Only then can she save her sister from a quick death. And perhaps, she will gain something more as a reward.
6 comments
nataliia-sepel21.01.2025, 14:20I liked the book. Thank you.
mari-luna03.12.2024, 11:50Not my thing. Maybe it gets interesting later. I read the prologue and the first page of chapter 1 - it didn't hook me.
irina-bondar21.02.2023, 13:42Interesting idea and plot! But I have some remarks: the approximate age of the main character is unclear. There’s a mismatch between the world (description) and the realities of any journey (supplies in a bag, a roasted hare together with spare clothes is nonsense, all the clothes will stink). And thirdly, if the girl already has a weapon, she should know how to use it. Up to chapter 8, neither the bow nor the dagger has been used, so why are they even there, just for the atmosphere? I’ve only read 8 chapters so far, but it’s not bad. Overall, I’d give it 4 out of 5 points. With respect, Oleksa!
iana-osa13.11.2022, 13:42I agree with the previous commenters. It feels very much like a bedtime story told to children in the evening. With a happy ending.
pavlo-tulskii09.11.2022, 19:33The beginning is intriguing, adding it to my library)
vitalii-partickii19.07.2022, 11:45The names are nice) The only thing is that long paragraphs disrupt the beauty of the structure. The first chapter reminded me of creating a character in D&D, if you know what I mean; it’s hard to remember, perhaps if these characters are important, it would be better to add a few scenes with them. The second chapter feels like a classic fairy tale, for a few minutes I was taken back to childhood. In short, the idea is good, wishing you inspiration.
The Thousand-Year Wolves
About the book
What to do if your only close relative — your sister — is slowly dying and only a miracle can save her? What to do if miracles are rare, and magic itself is on the brink of extinction? An evil sorceress destroyed magic when she cursed an ancient tribe, turning them from humans into wolves. There is only one way out: to restore magic and break the curse. Only then can she save her sister from a quick death. And perhaps, she will gain something more as a reward.
6 comments
- nataliia-sepel21.01.2025, 14:20
I liked the book. Thank you.
- mari-luna03.12.2024, 11:50
Not my thing. Maybe it gets interesting later. I read the prologue and the first page of chapter 1 - it didn't hook me.
- irina-bondar21.02.2023, 13:42
Interesting idea and plot! But I have some remarks: the approximate age of the main character is unclear. There’s a mismatch between the world (description) and the realities of any journey (supplies in a bag, a roasted hare together with spare clothes is nonsense, all the clothes will stink). And thirdly, if the girl already has a weapon, she should know how to use it. Up to chapter 8, neither the bow nor the dagger has been used, so why are they even there, just for the atmosphere? I’ve only read 8 chapters so far, but it’s not bad. Overall, I’d give it 4 out of 5 points. With respect, Oleksa!
- iana-osa13.11.2022, 13:42
I agree with the previous commenters. It feels very much like a bedtime story told to children in the evening. With a happy ending.
- pavlo-tulskii09.11.2022, 19:33
The beginning is intriguing, adding it to my library)
- vitalii-partickii19.07.2022, 11:45
The names are nice) The only thing is that long paragraphs disrupt the beauty of the structure. The first chapter reminded me of creating a character in D&D, if you know what I mean; it’s hard to remember, perhaps if these characters are important, it would be better to add a few scenes with them. The second chapter feels like a classic fairy tale, for a few minutes I was taken back to childhood. In short, the idea is good, wishing you inspiration.