Abstract of the book "The Real Me"
I went to the city to find myself, but instead, a single event revealed a power I never knew I had. And with it, a destiny I couldn't escape. I wanted to run, to forget everything I had learned and everyone I had met. But we all know that the only way to survive is to finally come face to face with the person I was always meant to be.
38 comments
nina-vivtonenko04.08.2023, 18:49Is there a continuation?
sofiia-viterec27.08.2023, 22:02Nina Vivtonenko, I have already published it) It's an addition in the form of a few chapters on the pages of this same book)
galina-levter01.09.2022, 15:40Greetings from the marathon. This is truly urban fantasy. For those expecting other worlds and a lot of magic—this isn’t the place. At least the first chapters aren’t about that. There’s a lot of real, purely human stuff here. Probably that’s why I kept reading and reading. Your heroines are interesting, slightly funny girls with quirks. If it weren’t for that, this book wouldn’t be the same. Inspiration and further creative heights!
sofiia-viterec01.09.2022, 16:39Halyna Levter, Sincerely thank you for the warm comment))) It's nice to read such words))))
lola-kalver21.08.2022, 16:28From the marathon: It seems like my genre, and the topic is interesting, though not new. An explosion, a girl, it's clear that there will be consequences of the explosion on the girl. However, it somehow didn’t hook me. It’s written decently, but there’s too much unnecessary stuff; I wish the author would dive into the story more dynamically, but here everything feels quite slow. The university choice for the girl is unclear, even though we all understand why it happened, and the time jumps really throw me off. Thank you. I judged without offense, primarily as a reader. Wishing you success and inspiration!
sofiia-viterec21.08.2022, 17:20Lola Calver, And why not) No offense))) I understand your point of view) This is the storytelling style I’ve chosen - not everyone likes it))) Thank you for the wishes)))) All mutual))))
lara-rosa20.08.2022, 10:23Congratulations on the marathon! From the very beginning of the book, an intrigue is introduced that immediately captures interest. However, its development feels a bit drawn out. The time jumps, like flashbacks, are somewhat confusing. In my opinion, it would be better to highlight them somehow, for example, with italics. There’s a lot of detail, which could be trimmed down. Though, perhaps some might find the environment more realistic this way. The concept is interesting, and I really want to find out what abilities the heroine truly possesses and what lies behind their emergence in her, but it lacks a bit of drive. The language of the text is lively, as are the dialogues; the characters don’t feel like cardboard cutouts. I’m reading on)) Good luck!
lara-rosa20.08.2022, 11:51Sofia Viterets, I'll be waiting)) My daughter, who reads a lot and has seen something similar, suggested highlighting the flashbacks))
kseniia-demidenko16.08.2022, 23:58Good evening, I'm from the marathon! Cover: it matches the idea of the work, attracts attention, intrigues, so it fulfills its mission) Annotation: it intrigues, sets the tone for a story about a girl with superpowers, the reader is waiting. Plot: personally for me – it's dragged out, as a reader, I didn't get the promised satisfaction from the main character's superpowers. The chapters are short, they should be expanded, add dynamics, because the dialogues are often about nothing, and then in one or two sentences, there's a concentration of events. The heroine, who should be someone like Harry Potter, is just an ordinary girl for half of the story. Don't take it the wrong way, I enjoyed reading about her entering the educational institution, learning, I love realistic works. But yours is fantasy, so the reader expects something mysteriously incomprehensible, something that makes you go "ah!" – and takes your breath away. They expect the promised restoration of order in the metro from the beginning. The intrigue dissolves, and that's bad, the reader isn't retained. The style, however, is light, there aren't many mistakes, the conversations are realistic, not overly literary. Sorry for being picky, but you claimed ***. If you roll over my work with a harsh, heavy steamroller, I won't be offended. Inspiration and good luck!
sofiia-viterec17.08.2022, 11:58Ksenia Demidenko, As I understand)))) It will be soon))))
iuliia-boguta16.08.2022, 11:44Hello from the marathon) I read the beginning of the book. Among the positives, I can note the writing style - light, without cumbersome detailing. It reads easily and pleasantly. I also liked the names, especially Ada. As for the plot, I have a few questions. How did it happen that her documents ended up at a university she didn’t even know about? And such a prestigious one at that. Also, I didn’t quite understand the prologue. Ada talked about her childhood, and then about an accident in the subway. But in the first chapter, she’s just entering university, and the way there goes through that same subway. Is this a flashback to the past? Overall, I liked it. Added it to my library. Wishing success to the book)
sofiia-viterec16.08.2022, 13:24Yuliya Boguta, Thank you❤️ And to you too)))
marta-keis03.07.2021, 14:29Congratulations on finishing! I understand there will be a continuation since Vsevolod and the dean escaped? Should we expect a new book?
marta-keis04.07.2021, 11:05Sofia Viterets, :)
- sofiia-viterec21.05.2021, 19:31
Natalia Bibikova, thank you sincerely for the award)))) I'm glad you like my books)))
xolod-vlada03.05.2021, 12:21Hello from the marathon! I liked the title, it’s a bit philosophical)) The cover colors are pleasant, but for fantasy... well, I’m not sure, something feels a little missing)) Annotation. How can an explosion and a birthday be ambiguous concepts?)) I didn’t quite understand the phrase in general...)) Don’t take offense, please)) Though I like the ending)) Finishing the annotation with a question is cool)) Text. Conceptually interesting, though a bit of action at the beginning wouldn’t hurt =)) The style is light, the heroine feels alive, ordinary, but that’s what makes her charming) Good luck with your future writing!)) I’d be glad to hear your opinion about my novel https://booknet.com/uk/book/vsm-bazhan-b325569 if you haven’t read it yet))
sofiia-viterec03.05.2021, 15:33Holod Vlada, Thank you))) And have a nice day to you too))) I will definitely be there))))
- marta-keis02.05.2021, 15:49
Greetings from the marathon! Great cover and book title. When I read the title, I immediately understood that it would be a story about superpowers. Now, regarding the style. I don’t understand why everyone wants super action on the second page. Slow unfolding of events and character descriptions also have their place in literature. I’m probably a “wrong” author too)) I found it interesting. Interesting precisely because Adeline is an ordinary girl. Considering the genre (young adult fiction), you understand the logic behind the description of the main character. Later, she undergoes changes, transitioning from a sheltered life to the harsh reality of growing up. However, you need to understand and feel her inner world before that turning point. Not many people at eighteen are super interesting personalities. That all comes with time and experience. And if I understood correctly, that’s exactly what awaits Adeline in the plot. While reading the book, I was reminded a bit of my student life))) As for the language, it needs a little editing because the same words appear in neighboring sentences. But it’s not critical, it doesn’t distract from the plot. I’m confident that the story will find its readers. This is a good example of young adult fiction. Wishing you success!
sofiia-viterec02.05.2021, 18:25Marta Case, Thank you for such sound advice)))) You're right))) Only the author knows what the book should be like, and everyone has their own opinion, not everyone likes everything)
leksandra-slavic30.04.2021, 16:01Hello from the marathon! First of all, I looked at the cover, which turned out to be very successful, and decided that exciting adventures + magic awaited me, as was clear from the tags. Right away a question: did you choose the redhead from the cover as a prototype for the heroine? I watched a series, and this actress always reminds me of the heroine from Cassandra Clare's books))) I expected something interesting from your heroine)) But unfortunately, after reading two chapters, I can't grasp the essence. I can't imagine the heroine; I only read her thoughts, which are too long and boring (this information could have been presented in just two or three sentences). Also, the fact that the story starts in the third person and then switches to the first person is a bit concerning. The chapters are short, with no action or dialogue at all... I love dynamic stories))) It would also be fitting to end the chapters in a way that makes you want to keep reading, cutting off at an intriguing moment))) The annotation is good, though the title could use some experimentation))) Please don't take this as an offense❤️ Wishing you success!
sofiia-viterec30.04.2021, 17:02Leksandra Slavich, Thank you)))))
olena-blaskun30.04.2021, 15:55Hello from the marathon) The cover is nice, but the title rather suggests a different genre (to me, it feels like a contemporary romance where the heroine is searching for herself while fighting against someone who forces her to go against her own desires). The synopsis is interesting. What bothers me is that the heroine is almost invisible - there’s no character, just events that don’t define her. Also, the delayed event mentioned in the synopsis doesn’t create intrigue - on the contrary, it pushes the reader away because it’s unclear why one should read about the heroine’s ordinary daily routine at all. The writing style is pleasant, and the text is easy to read)
sofiia-viterec30.04.2021, 16:39Olena Blashkun, Thank you for your sincere comment)))) The character of the heroine, her feelings, and emotions will be revealed gradually, just like the plot))) That was the main idea of the work))) I know, it might not be very interesting to read ten chapters to find out the main intrigue, but trust me, if the first page really caught your interest and you are a fan of this genre, you’ll read the next chapters in a second) After all, no great works revealed everything at the beginning) For example, the same works by Arthur Conan Doyle. They probably wouldn’t have become so popular if they weren’t adorned with the real life of Sherlock Holmes, and the main intrigue didn’t stretch until the very last pages))) Yes, I know, mine isn’t a detective story) But I think this is a general pattern for books)))) I’ll drop by to see you soon)))
li-limonova30.04.2021, 15:40Hello, I came to you from the marathon. The title is interesting. At first, I thought it was a story about a person who can't find themselves. But then I noticed that the genre is fantasy and the heroine has superpowers. The cover is also nice. It reads quite easily, though I didn't quite grasp the essence of the work. I think fans of this genre should enjoy it! Thank you, and inspiration to you!
li-limonova30.04.2021, 15:57Sofia Viterets, I'm very glad that I didn't offend you. Thank you
lina-aleks30.04.2021, 15:12Marathon. The cover and title are well-suited. After the first two parts, nothing specific can be said about the heroine; she, excuse me, feels bland. From the description of where she went and how many suitcases she dragged, her character isn’t visible. In my subjective opinion, all of this could have been condensed into two paragraphs, and the text would only benefit from it. The first chapters should intrigue the reader, but here it’s not quite working. But don’t mind me, I’m an overly picky reader. I’m sure the events will get more interesting later on. Wishing you success!
sofiia-viterec30.04.2021, 15:17Lina Alex, Thank you for the sincere comment))) That's the idea - to gradually reveal the main character))) Probably, no one finds it interesting when everything is served on a plate right away))) And yes, there will be sharp plot twists ahead, so much so that I surprise myself with my imagination))) Thank you for the wishes))) And the same to you)))
kamila-dani30.04.2021, 11:07From the marathon) The title is nice, and the cover too, but I would rather choose based on the title. The annotation is spot-on, very well written, my compliments. Plot: interesting, I'm sure fans of this genre will appreciate it. I'm not a fantasy lover))). But I liked how you wrote "with a few moves, she put the metro back in place" (something like that). Wishing you success!
sofiia-viterec30.04.2021, 11:08Kamila Dani, Sincerely thank you)))) And the same to you))))
The Real Me
About the book
I went to the city to find myself, but instead, a single event revealed a power I never knew I had. And with it, a destiny I couldn't escape. I wanted to run, to forget everything I had learned and everyone I had met. But we all know that the only way to survive is to finally come face to face with the person I was always meant to be.
38 comments
- nina-vivtonenko04.08.2023, 18:49
Is there a continuation?
sofiia-viterec27.08.2023, 22:02Nina Vivtonenko, I have already published it) It's an addition in the form of a few chapters on the pages of this same book)
- galina-levter01.09.2022, 15:40
Greetings from the marathon. This is truly urban fantasy. For those expecting other worlds and a lot of magic—this isn’t the place. At least the first chapters aren’t about that. There’s a lot of real, purely human stuff here. Probably that’s why I kept reading and reading. Your heroines are interesting, slightly funny girls with quirks. If it weren’t for that, this book wouldn’t be the same. Inspiration and further creative heights!
sofiia-viterec01.09.2022, 16:39Halyna Levter, Sincerely thank you for the warm comment))) It's nice to read such words))))
- lola-kalver21.08.2022, 16:28
From the marathon: It seems like my genre, and the topic is interesting, though not new. An explosion, a girl, it's clear that there will be consequences of the explosion on the girl. However, it somehow didn’t hook me. It’s written decently, but there’s too much unnecessary stuff; I wish the author would dive into the story more dynamically, but here everything feels quite slow. The university choice for the girl is unclear, even though we all understand why it happened, and the time jumps really throw me off. Thank you. I judged without offense, primarily as a reader. Wishing you success and inspiration!
sofiia-viterec21.08.2022, 17:20Lola Calver, And why not) No offense))) I understand your point of view) This is the storytelling style I’ve chosen - not everyone likes it))) Thank you for the wishes)))) All mutual))))
- lara-rosa20.08.2022, 10:23
Congratulations on the marathon! From the very beginning of the book, an intrigue is introduced that immediately captures interest. However, its development feels a bit drawn out. The time jumps, like flashbacks, are somewhat confusing. In my opinion, it would be better to highlight them somehow, for example, with italics. There’s a lot of detail, which could be trimmed down. Though, perhaps some might find the environment more realistic this way. The concept is interesting, and I really want to find out what abilities the heroine truly possesses and what lies behind their emergence in her, but it lacks a bit of drive. The language of the text is lively, as are the dialogues; the characters don’t feel like cardboard cutouts. I’m reading on)) Good luck!
lara-rosa20.08.2022, 11:51Sofia Viterets, I'll be waiting)) My daughter, who reads a lot and has seen something similar, suggested highlighting the flashbacks))
- kseniia-demidenko16.08.2022, 23:58
Good evening, I'm from the marathon! Cover: it matches the idea of the work, attracts attention, intrigues, so it fulfills its mission) Annotation: it intrigues, sets the tone for a story about a girl with superpowers, the reader is waiting. Plot: personally for me – it's dragged out, as a reader, I didn't get the promised satisfaction from the main character's superpowers. The chapters are short, they should be expanded, add dynamics, because the dialogues are often about nothing, and then in one or two sentences, there's a concentration of events. The heroine, who should be someone like Harry Potter, is just an ordinary girl for half of the story. Don't take it the wrong way, I enjoyed reading about her entering the educational institution, learning, I love realistic works. But yours is fantasy, so the reader expects something mysteriously incomprehensible, something that makes you go "ah!" – and takes your breath away. They expect the promised restoration of order in the metro from the beginning. The intrigue dissolves, and that's bad, the reader isn't retained. The style, however, is light, there aren't many mistakes, the conversations are realistic, not overly literary. Sorry for being picky, but you claimed ***. If you roll over my work with a harsh, heavy steamroller, I won't be offended. Inspiration and good luck!
sofiia-viterec17.08.2022, 11:58Ksenia Demidenko, As I understand)))) It will be soon))))
- iuliia-boguta16.08.2022, 11:44
Hello from the marathon) I read the beginning of the book. Among the positives, I can note the writing style - light, without cumbersome detailing. It reads easily and pleasantly. I also liked the names, especially Ada. As for the plot, I have a few questions. How did it happen that her documents ended up at a university she didn’t even know about? And such a prestigious one at that. Also, I didn’t quite understand the prologue. Ada talked about her childhood, and then about an accident in the subway. But in the first chapter, she’s just entering university, and the way there goes through that same subway. Is this a flashback to the past? Overall, I liked it. Added it to my library. Wishing success to the book)
sofiia-viterec16.08.2022, 13:24Yuliya Boguta, Thank you❤️ And to you too)))
- marta-keis03.07.2021, 14:29
Congratulations on finishing! I understand there will be a continuation since Vsevolod and the dean escaped? Should we expect a new book?
marta-keis04.07.2021, 11:05Sofia Viterets, :)
- sofiia-viterec21.05.2021, 19:31
Natalia Bibikova, thank you sincerely for the award)))) I'm glad you like my books)))
- xolod-vlada03.05.2021, 12:21
Hello from the marathon! I liked the title, it’s a bit philosophical)) The cover colors are pleasant, but for fantasy... well, I’m not sure, something feels a little missing)) Annotation. How can an explosion and a birthday be ambiguous concepts?)) I didn’t quite understand the phrase in general...)) Don’t take offense, please)) Though I like the ending)) Finishing the annotation with a question is cool)) Text. Conceptually interesting, though a bit of action at the beginning wouldn’t hurt =)) The style is light, the heroine feels alive, ordinary, but that’s what makes her charming) Good luck with your future writing!)) I’d be glad to hear your opinion about my novel https://booknet.com/uk/book/vsm-bazhan-b325569 if you haven’t read it yet))
sofiia-viterec03.05.2021, 15:33Holod Vlada, Thank you))) And have a nice day to you too))) I will definitely be there))))
- marta-keis02.05.2021, 15:49
Greetings from the marathon! Great cover and book title. When I read the title, I immediately understood that it would be a story about superpowers. Now, regarding the style. I don’t understand why everyone wants super action on the second page. Slow unfolding of events and character descriptions also have their place in literature. I’m probably a “wrong” author too)) I found it interesting. Interesting precisely because Adeline is an ordinary girl. Considering the genre (young adult fiction), you understand the logic behind the description of the main character. Later, she undergoes changes, transitioning from a sheltered life to the harsh reality of growing up. However, you need to understand and feel her inner world before that turning point. Not many people at eighteen are super interesting personalities. That all comes with time and experience. And if I understood correctly, that’s exactly what awaits Adeline in the plot. While reading the book, I was reminded a bit of my student life))) As for the language, it needs a little editing because the same words appear in neighboring sentences. But it’s not critical, it doesn’t distract from the plot. I’m confident that the story will find its readers. This is a good example of young adult fiction. Wishing you success!
sofiia-viterec02.05.2021, 18:25Marta Case, Thank you for such sound advice)))) You're right))) Only the author knows what the book should be like, and everyone has their own opinion, not everyone likes everything)
- leksandra-slavic30.04.2021, 16:01
Hello from the marathon! First of all, I looked at the cover, which turned out to be very successful, and decided that exciting adventures + magic awaited me, as was clear from the tags. Right away a question: did you choose the redhead from the cover as a prototype for the heroine? I watched a series, and this actress always reminds me of the heroine from Cassandra Clare's books))) I expected something interesting from your heroine)) But unfortunately, after reading two chapters, I can't grasp the essence. I can't imagine the heroine; I only read her thoughts, which are too long and boring (this information could have been presented in just two or three sentences). Also, the fact that the story starts in the third person and then switches to the first person is a bit concerning. The chapters are short, with no action or dialogue at all... I love dynamic stories))) It would also be fitting to end the chapters in a way that makes you want to keep reading, cutting off at an intriguing moment))) The annotation is good, though the title could use some experimentation))) Please don't take this as an offense❤️ Wishing you success!
sofiia-viterec30.04.2021, 17:02Leksandra Slavich, Thank you)))))
- olena-blaskun30.04.2021, 15:55
Hello from the marathon) The cover is nice, but the title rather suggests a different genre (to me, it feels like a contemporary romance where the heroine is searching for herself while fighting against someone who forces her to go against her own desires). The synopsis is interesting. What bothers me is that the heroine is almost invisible - there’s no character, just events that don’t define her. Also, the delayed event mentioned in the synopsis doesn’t create intrigue - on the contrary, it pushes the reader away because it’s unclear why one should read about the heroine’s ordinary daily routine at all. The writing style is pleasant, and the text is easy to read)
sofiia-viterec30.04.2021, 16:39Olena Blashkun, Thank you for your sincere comment)))) The character of the heroine, her feelings, and emotions will be revealed gradually, just like the plot))) That was the main idea of the work))) I know, it might not be very interesting to read ten chapters to find out the main intrigue, but trust me, if the first page really caught your interest and you are a fan of this genre, you’ll read the next chapters in a second) After all, no great works revealed everything at the beginning) For example, the same works by Arthur Conan Doyle. They probably wouldn’t have become so popular if they weren’t adorned with the real life of Sherlock Holmes, and the main intrigue didn’t stretch until the very last pages))) Yes, I know, mine isn’t a detective story) But I think this is a general pattern for books)))) I’ll drop by to see you soon)))
- li-limonova30.04.2021, 15:40
Hello, I came to you from the marathon. The title is interesting. At first, I thought it was a story about a person who can't find themselves. But then I noticed that the genre is fantasy and the heroine has superpowers. The cover is also nice. It reads quite easily, though I didn't quite grasp the essence of the work. I think fans of this genre should enjoy it! Thank you, and inspiration to you!
li-limonova30.04.2021, 15:57Sofia Viterets, I'm very glad that I didn't offend you. Thank you
- lina-aleks30.04.2021, 15:12
Marathon. The cover and title are well-suited. After the first two parts, nothing specific can be said about the heroine; she, excuse me, feels bland. From the description of where she went and how many suitcases she dragged, her character isn’t visible. In my subjective opinion, all of this could have been condensed into two paragraphs, and the text would only benefit from it. The first chapters should intrigue the reader, but here it’s not quite working. But don’t mind me, I’m an overly picky reader. I’m sure the events will get more interesting later on. Wishing you success!
sofiia-viterec30.04.2021, 15:17Lina Alex, Thank you for the sincere comment))) That's the idea - to gradually reveal the main character))) Probably, no one finds it interesting when everything is served on a plate right away))) And yes, there will be sharp plot twists ahead, so much so that I surprise myself with my imagination))) Thank you for the wishes))) And the same to you)))
- kamila-dani30.04.2021, 11:07
From the marathon) The title is nice, and the cover too, but I would rather choose based on the title. The annotation is spot-on, very well written, my compliments. Plot: interesting, I'm sure fans of this genre will appreciate it. I'm not a fantasy lover))). But I liked how you wrote "with a few moves, she put the metro back in place" (something like that). Wishing you success!
sofiia-viterec30.04.2021, 11:08Kamila Dani, Sincerely thank you)))) And the same to you))))