nothile-memory

05.04.2026, 19:52

WHT a book, Amber is so smart for a victim in my pov, characters here are so smart this book was great, very educative to me. i really liked it

oksana-kazimirova

16.03.2026, 15:01

Drama, but with a good ending. Broken fates, broken people—this is about us. Wishing you success in your creativity.

dara-vaildAuthor

25.03.2026, 21:09

Oksana Kazymyrova, Broken fates, broken people — and you are among those who understand them. Thank you!!

carivna-mriia

22.03.2026, 09:36

Congratulations, your book is in the top)))

dara-vaildAuthor

25.03.2026, 21:09

Mriya Charivna, Top — that's you! Thank you for reading))

ruslana-lakuta

22.03.2026, 20:56

Nice. Thank you.))

dara-vaildAuthor

25.03.2026, 21:08

Ruslana Lakuta, Thank you ❤️ It's for feedback like this that I keep writing.

oksana-gaicenia

12.03.2026, 10:13

While reading, it feels like some parts of the text are missing. You read a sentence and don’t understand what it’s about because that event wasn’t mentioned in the text before.

dara-vaildAuthor

25.03.2026, 21:06

Oksana Haichenya, Thank you for writing! I understand this feeling, some transitions between scenes indeed turned out more abrupt than I had planned... This is my first book, and I already see what I want to improve in the next one. I'm glad that despite this, you finished reading)

alona-basanets

14.03.2026, 07:04

Something is wrong with the name of the city; it changes at every step, sometimes it's Williamsburg, sometimes Edinburgh, or something else. My personal feeling is that the book was written by artificial intelligence. Spelling mistakes can be understood, but for example, the moment when the heroine found a note in her ex's jacket, and in the next sentence, there's talk about a note and a flash drive she supposedly found, but there was no mention of that flash drive before, it feels like deception on the author's part. The story is good, but attention to detail is still needed. Thank you.

dara-vaildAuthor

25.03.2026, 21:04

Alona Basanets, Thank you for your attentive reading and such a detailed review — it is truly valuable. Regarding Williamsburg — Mari explained it correctly, it’s a neighborhood in Brooklyn where the heroine lives. As for the flash drive, I’ll take it into account; perhaps this moment does need a clearer transition. I write on my own and, like every novice author, I learn with each book. Your feedback is exactly what helps me grow!

kateryna-shepukhova

08.03.2026, 21:23

I really liked it. An interesting and original plot, unconventional characters. It captivates from the very first pages. The heartfelt and emotional epilogue added a special touch. Please accept my gratitude!

dara-vaildAuthor

09.03.2026, 20:53

Kateryna Shepukhova, Always grateful for the detailed description of your impressions ❤️ It helps me, you can’t even imagine how much)) If you enjoy unconventional plots, come to me! A new story is coming out now, see you there! ☺️

olena-misak

08.03.2026, 19:45

Deeply and truly ♥️

dara-vaildAuthor

09.03.2026, 20:51

Olena Mysak, Thank you, I’m very pleased ❤️ I’ll be glad to hear your impressions of the new book, I’m sure it will interest you)

nataliia-sitnik

05.03.2026, 18:56

Deep, truthful analysis and simply an interesting story.

dara-vaildAuthor

06.03.2026, 19:25

Natalia Sytnyk, Thank you! I'm glad you appreciated my first book ❤️ I invite you to check out my new work)) It's already on the page

iuliia-vasilkova

04.03.2026, 21:13

Thank you for the wonderful book

dara-vaildAuthor

04.03.2026, 22:42

Yuliya Vasylkova, I'm glad to hear your words) I invite you to the next book! No less interesting)

valentina-poddubniak

01.03.2026, 18:16

I really liked the work. Sincerely thank you.

dara-vaildAuthor

02.03.2026, 20:56

Valentyna Poddubnyak, Thank you! Read the next novelty)) I hope it will impress just as much ❤️

ariia-shhulc

27.02.2026, 23:28

My congratulations on the widget ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

dara-vaildAuthor

02.03.2026, 20:55

Aria Schulz, Thank you, it's very nice that you noticed ☺️

vitalii-p

26.02.2026, 22:38

Congratulations on completing your first book! Wishing you success in this field!)

dara-vaildAuthor

27.02.2026, 16:44

Vitalii P, Incredibly pleasant ❤️ Thank you!

romul-seridan

19.02.2026, 23:31

Congratulations on your first work ✨ Wishing you success on the platform and many readers ✨

dara-vaildAuthor

23.02.2026, 20:00

Romul Sheridan, Thank you - this word is not enough, but for now, it's the only one I have ✨ I'm glad you're here!!

svitlana-romaniuk

19.02.2026, 00:31

Wishing success to the book ❤️❤️❤️

dara-vaildAuthor

19.02.2026, 23:24

Svitlana Romaniuk, Sincerely thank you! ❤️❤️