38 comments

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  maria-luisa-cascan

  20.12.2024, 22:13

  I loved your story. The alternative ending is great. Thanks for sharing your story.

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  merci-diaz

  18.12.2024, 18:32

  Beautiful story, thank you

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  sandra-alfageme

  06.11.2024, 22:43

  I loved it and adored the alternative ending, a thousand thanks

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  sandra-alfageme

  10.12.2024, 12:36

  K MENDOZA, to you for writing this kind of stories, truly a thousand thanks

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  leonor-ortiz

  29.10.2024, 20:31

  I loved it!!!!... I recommend it 100%

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  leonor-ortiz

  03.12.2024, 21:50

  K MENDOZA, ❤️❤️❤️

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  claudia-parra-torres

  24.10.2024, 12:04

  I really liked it, excellent alternative ending... the other ending also has its charm, you can't always have love.

  

  k-mendozaAuthor

  03.12.2024, 21:35

  Claudia Parra Torres, hello Claudia, of course, it's the same as what I think

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  jenna

  24.10.2024, 19:55

  Definitely, we all liked the alternative ending haha, I love it, your narrative is beautiful and I loved this book

  

  k-mendozaAuthor

  03.12.2024, 21:35

  JENNA, hi Jenna, thanks for reading, and I think you've already read my other novels, thanks for that.

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  venus-iris-moreno-brena

  24.10.2024, 22:22

  Aww, 100% the alternative, even though I know it's cliché, it's sad to think that there are loves of your life and there are loves for a lifetime. I prefer to dream that both can come together. Excellent story, congratulations.

  

  k-mendozaAuthor

  03.12.2024, 21:34

  Venus Iris Moreno Brena, hello Venus, I'm glad you liked it, although for me Harald was just like her, the personality I gave to Aslan is what makes you fall in love.

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  olga-servin-talavera

  25.10.2024, 11:15

  I like this ending much more, even though the investigator got lost along the way.

  

  k-mendozaAuthor

  03.12.2024, 21:33

  Olga Servin Talavera, Hi Olga, I'm glad you liked it, I have more novels, I invite you to read them.

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  ana-cosman

  25.10.2024, 21:04

  You write wonderfully... it's a luxury to find a writer of your caliber.

  

  k-mendozaAuthor

  03.12.2024, 21:32

  Ana Cosman, Hi Ana, your comment brings me so much joy, it makes me want to write more, I hope you read my other novels :)

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  monica

  27.10.2024, 21:13

  I loved the second ending. What can I say, happy romance is my thing.

  

  k-mendozaAuthor

  03.12.2024, 21:31

  Monica, hello Monica, of course, romance and drama above all, haha

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  linda-diaz

  28.10.2024, 03:05

  I like it better that she ends up with the adventurer. More similar to her.

  

  k-mendozaAuthor

  03.12.2024, 21:29

  Linda DIAZ, hello Linda, I agree with you, even though Aslan can make you fall in love, Harald was definitely just like her.

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  estela-rodriguez

  28.10.2024, 10:54

  Beautiful story, congratulations to the writer, just like all the ones I've read of yours, I loved them.

  

  k-mendozaAuthor

  03.12.2024, 21:29

  Estela Rodriguez, hello Estela, I'm so glad you like my novels, you have no idea how happy that makes me, I hope to upload more ;)

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  sandra-noemi-morales-venegas

  28.10.2024, 13:37

  A different story, I loved it, congratulations!!!

  

  k-mendozaAuthor

  03.12.2024, 21:28

  Sandra Noemi Morales Venegas, hello Sandra, I'm so glad you loved it, I have more novels and I invite you to read them :)

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  estela-rodriguez

  28.10.2024, 20:54

  I loved the alternative ending as it is the culmination of the great love between Akira and Aslan, such a beautiful couple, a very lovely story.

  

  k-mendozaAuthor

  03.12.2024, 21:27

  Estela Rodriguez, Hi Estela, I'm so glad you enjoyed my novel.

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  fuenmayor-ingrid

  29.10.2024, 13:16

  beautiful beautiful

  

  k-mendozaAuthor

  03.12.2024, 21:25

  Fuenmayor Ingrid, hello Ingrid, if you liked this novel, you might like the others I have :)