aby

27.05.2026, 18:55

It's a good book, it has potential for much more development, and a story about the sister where she meets the boy who saved her.

gabriela-llinas

08.05.2026, 08:15

The book is good, but it needs more plot development as there are many inconclusive details. From my point of view, with this book, you had the potential to create a trilogy and even a universe for the characters. You are good at writing, but you need to be more conclusive in the chapters and details of the book because the book hooks you from the first page. However, whenever you build suspense in the plot, it leaves you wondering about thousands of plot details. Blessings, and keep writing.

maria-elena-asprilla-velasquez

29.04.2026, 00:49

I loved it

eloisa-martinez

26.04.2026, 22:41

The story was very good but with many loose ends, and we missed the epilogue. What happened to that Michelle, to Tristan, and I don't know, two or three other kids running around the mansion?

yuvica-dubo

20.04.2026, 16:15

Second time reading it and I still love it, thanks for sharing

yadira-romero-gonzalez

31.08.2025, 13:14

Beautiful

dasa-amforaAuthor

15.04.2026, 05:30

Olena, Thank you ❤️✨✨❤️

domi-rosales

14.04.2026, 08:27

How exciting, I loved the novel, its development, and conclusion. Keep writing, you are very good at what you do.

gaby-aguilar

13.04.2026, 14:59

Is it already finished? Isn't something missing?

gaby-aguilar

13.04.2026, 14:24

I mean, I don't think Emily is ugly for him to say that he would only devour her for her body.

rocio-rubio-perez

12.04.2026, 22:21

Impressive everything except the last chapter, everything too fast... from a party to being in the clinic... endings are one of the most important things in a book because it hooks you from minute one, but the ending was lacking.

maria-ignacia-rivera

11.04.2026, 12:36

I read it and thank God, back then it was free and I loved it!!!! It's amazing!! It has everything!!! 1000/10

marianela-ramirez

11.04.2026, 06:59

The plot was amazing... excellent narration... I would have liked the protagonist to be more skilled... even though she grew up in that world, she was weak... a lot of talk, but no action... as I expected, I thought she would show her worth as a fighting woman, an equal... not that she would be a weakness... I don't know if I'm being too demanding, it's just my humble opinion... the narration is incredible... greetings

yulisa-avalos

08.04.2026, 05:48

Beautiful book, I loved it and had the privilege of reading it when it was free.

jade-perez

07.04.2026, 06:03

Hi, well, I had the chance to read this wonderful book when it was free, and without a doubt, it is a very good book. It has a great plot and such amazing scenes that you can even feel the tension between the characters yourself. While it was free, I read it about 4 times. It’s a very good book. If you can buy the book, buy it; you won’t regret it. Congratulations, writer!

evag

06.04.2026, 20:13

I read the book when it was free and I loved it! I'm buying it to keep enjoying it!

mayaflorAuthor

06.04.2026, 20:26

EvaG, Thank you so much for supporting me...(⁠｡⁠♡⁠‿⁠♡⁠｡⁠)