Abstract of the book "The Last Summoner"
Adalina Reinhard, at twenty-five, is the sole guardian of her younger sister. By chance, she glimpses a hidden world of mystical wonders—where countless real creatures have stepped straight out of storybooks into reality. Her sister is kidnapped. An old childhood friend reappears. A family grimoire surfaces. Full control over Koschei the Deathless, an encounter with Baba Yaga, and a cascade of strange adventures follow. Ancient secrets dating back to the times of Kyivan Rus and the first summoner must now be unraveled in the present day. Adalina will have to cast aside her conscience to save her sister—but fate doesn’t care for the wishes of the living. It has plans of its own.
63 comments
valentina-zaxarcenko01.04.2024, 21:56I liked your book. I would like a continuation of it. I'm curious about how the adventures of the characters will end.
alina-skintei01.04.2024, 22:30Valentyna Zaharchenko, Thank you for your comment ✨ Currently, I’m working on another text, but the second part will be released later.
irina-velicko10.04.2023, 22:37This is the second book of yours that I’ve read. To say that I’m impressed is an understatement. You are just an incredibly cool author. Such an interesting presentation. The uniqueness of the plot. I’m just thrilled reading your books. Sincere thanks to you for your creativity. Wishing you success, inspiration, and grateful readers. And I’m off to read your next book. Once again, a huge thank you for your work.
alina-skintei10.04.2023, 23:14Iryna Velychko, Thank you, thank you✨very nice✨
lesya-smyrnova10.04.2023, 00:03Very cool book, thank you!!!
alina-skintei10.04.2023, 09:44Lesya Smyrnova, Thank you for the feedback✨
roza-borysenko06.04.2023, 19:09Wonderful fantasy! It draws you in like a magnet - can't tear myself away! Thank you! I sincerely wish you, author, inspiration for the continuation!
alina-skintei06.04.2023, 19:59Roza Borysenko, Thank you for such a kind comment✨
ruslana-caika06.03.2023, 22:16A completely new perspective on Koschei, Yaga, and the serpent from the Garden of Eden. An interesting story. I want a continuation. Sorry, I’ll make a remark - "krapylos" is not a synonym for "trapylos," and it is used in this sense many times.
ruslana-caika07.03.2023, 07:56Alina Skintei, Thank you. I will be waiting.
alyonka-kravcuk21.02.2023, 10:08Will there be a continuation?)
alina-skintei21.02.2023, 10:59Alona Kravchuk, I will notify you))
natalka-ceresnia24.09.2022, 10:51Very cool annotation, it immediately makes you want to read the book. The cover is a bit dark, unfortunately, it blends together in a small format and doesn’t catch the eye. I would keep the font but change the visual. The book itself has a really cool concept, but it felt a bit uneven to me. For some reason, the first chapter didn’t grab me at all, but starting from the second, it got much more interesting. And then the events start unfolding rapidly. So, author, keep it up :) I’m not entirely sure why there’s an explanation about Koschei and Baba Yaga at the end of the chapter; everyone already knows about them, and there’s a lot about Koschei in the text itself. Also, Baba Yaga’s logic isn’t quite clear—she gave up too easily. However, the portrayal of Koschei is intriguing—how will things develop between him and Adalina? A proofread wouldn’t hurt either. By the way, I’ve already seen a few announcements in blogs—people are offering proofreading and editing services. In my opinion, you are talented and promising, so I wish you more readers and creative inspiration :)
alina-skintei24.09.2022, 12:37Natalka Chereshnya, Thank you for the feedback and advice) I’ll take it into account:) Mistakes are a very big problem for me, I’ll work on fixing them.
meri-malfo15.09.2022, 23:28I just started reading, and I was immediately greeted with interesting events. You described the childbirth decently, so there was no repulsive reaction. The beginning is packed with events: the birth of a child, a howl, a book, the grandmother's death, and Adalina becoming the guardian of her younger sister. Adalina is sensible, determined, ready to take responsibility for her sister, well done. I respect her. Quite a screamer in the form of the grandfather instead of the sister. At first, I thought it would be something like the sister staring at one point and muttering something. But the grandfather scared me just as much. Though later, I started to like Yakiv. As for Ivan's behavior, in my opinion, his reaction to the supernatural is too calm. Especially since the main character herself was even frightened. Moreover, it's unclear why the younger sister trusted a stranger and went with him, taking the book along. Overall, my impression of the book is pleasant. It's well-described, and the characters' emotions are clear. A special thank you for the Ukrainian mythology, it really touched my heart ♡
alina-skintei16.09.2022, 02:28Mary Malfoy, Thank you✨Your feedback also goes straight to the heart;)
al-bjelko14.09.2022, 21:01Sometimes there are repetitions here and there. There aren't many of them, and they don't harm the text. They will be fixed during editing. At times, I felt there was a lack of details, but that's just my personal opinion and a silly habit of fixating on those details. I think the reader will figure out everything necessary on their own. When everything is over-explained, it's also not good. I think you're very close to the golden mean. The intrigue is well-maintained. The missing girl is something you can't help but worry about one way or another. And I think there will be good growth for the heroine.
alina-skintei14.09.2022, 22:23Al Bielko, Likewise;)
- al-bjelko14.09.2022, 20:57
The main character seemed rational and determined from the start. A kind of girl who made herself on her own. But then, apparently due to stress, fatigue, and new powers, she started acting recklessly. However, who among us can always behave thoughtfully? It's probably natural to lose control in certain situations.
- al-bjelko14.09.2022, 20:57
Very cool start! I've read all sorts of things, but childbirth scenes—wow, that's something else! And most importantly, they’re presented in a way that’s not repulsive, without unnecessary physiological details, and they immediately grab your attention like a fishing hook. Overall, the first chapter is wonderful. Everything is clear, you feel sympathy for the main character, and it’s easy to guess what the story will be about. Ivan fits in perfectly here too. The character is incredibly likable, sensible, intelligent, and reliable. It’s great that the text touches on the theme of Ukrainian myths. It’s relevant, interesting, and familiar to many. Very fitting. If the text includes dog-headed creatures, hukh-mukh creatures, and lost children, I’ll be absolutely thrilled. But even without them, there are plenty of classic fairy-tale heroes. Kostiy is so vivid. Somewhat unusual. The new interpretation of the character fits into our world quite intriguingly. I would have made him a gloomy necromancer with skeletons in the closet))) and that’s probably a cliché association. But here, he’s just fire! I even feel sorry for the poor guy who was dragged out of his comfort zone and forced to dance to someone else’s tune.
anni-ksandr21.08.2022, 09:15I finished reading your book... What can I say... Unexpectedly, the fairy tales from my childhood seem to have grown up with me. Interesting intertwining of characters and events. The ending with Kostiy upset me. I kept waiting for him to fall in love with Adalina, and for her to fall for him too, and for the ending to be something like: and they lived happily ever after. But now, you'll have to write a sequel)))) Because I really want them to find a way to bring Kostiy back, and with some "bonuses." Honestly, I'm shocked by Kostiy. His character resonated with me more than the heroine)))) There are some minor typos, but I think you'll manage. In short, I'm thrilled! Looking forward to the sequel!)))
anni-ksandr21.08.2022, 22:21Skintey Alina, Waiting)))
- anni-ksandr16.08.2022, 19:49
The beginning intrigued me, but I didn't like Zmiyevsky. So far, I see the issue with the house. Moving on)))
alina-skintei16.08.2022, 20:26Anni Ksandr, thank you:)
natalia-kotiuk16.08.2022, 11:55It turns out I'm rereading your book for the second time, too bad I can't give it a high rating twice. I really liked your book. I'm thrilled with the characters and your writing style. It made me want to watch a series based on this plot. Very cool.
alina-skintei16.08.2022, 12:32Natalia Kotiuk, your comment warms my heart✨ Thank you, thank you✨
kseniia-demidenko15.08.2022, 00:37I read fairy tales a lot in my childhood, but I didn’t know so much about Koschei... until now. He wants to be angry and feared, but in reality, he’s different.
alina-skintei15.08.2022, 01:17Kseniia Demydenko, Yes, yes, it's very joyful that the story brings something new✨
The Last Summoner
About the book
Adalina Reinhard, at twenty-five, is the sole guardian of her younger sister. By chance, she glimpses a hidden world of mystical wonders—where countless real creatures have stepped straight out of storybooks into reality. Her sister is kidnapped. An old childhood friend reappears. A family grimoire surfaces. Full control over Koschei the Deathless, an encounter with Baba Yaga, and a cascade of strange adventures follow. Ancient secrets dating back to the times of Kyivan Rus and the first summoner must now be unraveled in the present day. Adalina will have to cast aside her conscience to save her sister—but fate doesn’t care for the wishes of the living. It has plans of its own.
63 comments
- valentina-zaxarcenko01.04.2024, 21:56
I liked your book. I would like a continuation of it. I'm curious about how the adventures of the characters will end.
alina-skintei01.04.2024, 22:30Valentyna Zaharchenko, Thank you for your comment ✨ Currently, I’m working on another text, but the second part will be released later.
- irina-velicko10.04.2023, 22:37
This is the second book of yours that I’ve read. To say that I’m impressed is an understatement. You are just an incredibly cool author. Such an interesting presentation. The uniqueness of the plot. I’m just thrilled reading your books. Sincere thanks to you for your creativity. Wishing you success, inspiration, and grateful readers. And I’m off to read your next book. Once again, a huge thank you for your work.
alina-skintei10.04.2023, 23:14Iryna Velychko, Thank you, thank you✨very nice✨
- lesya-smyrnova10.04.2023, 00:03
Very cool book, thank you!!!
alina-skintei10.04.2023, 09:44Lesya Smyrnova, Thank you for the feedback✨
- roza-borysenko06.04.2023, 19:09
Wonderful fantasy! It draws you in like a magnet - can't tear myself away! Thank you! I sincerely wish you, author, inspiration for the continuation!
alina-skintei06.04.2023, 19:59Roza Borysenko, Thank you for such a kind comment✨
- ruslana-caika06.03.2023, 22:16
A completely new perspective on Koschei, Yaga, and the serpent from the Garden of Eden. An interesting story. I want a continuation. Sorry, I’ll make a remark - "krapylos" is not a synonym for "trapylos," and it is used in this sense many times.
ruslana-caika07.03.2023, 07:56Alina Skintei, Thank you. I will be waiting.
- alyonka-kravcuk21.02.2023, 10:08
Will there be a continuation?)
alina-skintei21.02.2023, 10:59Alona Kravchuk, I will notify you))
- natalka-ceresnia24.09.2022, 10:51
Very cool annotation, it immediately makes you want to read the book. The cover is a bit dark, unfortunately, it blends together in a small format and doesn’t catch the eye. I would keep the font but change the visual. The book itself has a really cool concept, but it felt a bit uneven to me. For some reason, the first chapter didn’t grab me at all, but starting from the second, it got much more interesting. And then the events start unfolding rapidly. So, author, keep it up :) I’m not entirely sure why there’s an explanation about Koschei and Baba Yaga at the end of the chapter; everyone already knows about them, and there’s a lot about Koschei in the text itself. Also, Baba Yaga’s logic isn’t quite clear—she gave up too easily. However, the portrayal of Koschei is intriguing—how will things develop between him and Adalina? A proofread wouldn’t hurt either. By the way, I’ve already seen a few announcements in blogs—people are offering proofreading and editing services. In my opinion, you are talented and promising, so I wish you more readers and creative inspiration :)
alina-skintei24.09.2022, 12:37Natalka Chereshnya, Thank you for the feedback and advice) I’ll take it into account:) Mistakes are a very big problem for me, I’ll work on fixing them.
- meri-malfo15.09.2022, 23:28
I just started reading, and I was immediately greeted with interesting events. You described the childbirth decently, so there was no repulsive reaction. The beginning is packed with events: the birth of a child, a howl, a book, the grandmother's death, and Adalina becoming the guardian of her younger sister. Adalina is sensible, determined, ready to take responsibility for her sister, well done. I respect her. Quite a screamer in the form of the grandfather instead of the sister. At first, I thought it would be something like the sister staring at one point and muttering something. But the grandfather scared me just as much. Though later, I started to like Yakiv. As for Ivan's behavior, in my opinion, his reaction to the supernatural is too calm. Especially since the main character herself was even frightened. Moreover, it's unclear why the younger sister trusted a stranger and went with him, taking the book along. Overall, my impression of the book is pleasant. It's well-described, and the characters' emotions are clear. A special thank you for the Ukrainian mythology, it really touched my heart ♡
alina-skintei16.09.2022, 02:28Mary Malfoy, Thank you✨Your feedback also goes straight to the heart;)
- al-bjelko14.09.2022, 21:01
Sometimes there are repetitions here and there. There aren't many of them, and they don't harm the text. They will be fixed during editing. At times, I felt there was a lack of details, but that's just my personal opinion and a silly habit of fixating on those details. I think the reader will figure out everything necessary on their own. When everything is over-explained, it's also not good. I think you're very close to the golden mean. The intrigue is well-maintained. The missing girl is something you can't help but worry about one way or another. And I think there will be good growth for the heroine.
alina-skintei14.09.2022, 22:23Al Bielko, Likewise;)
- al-bjelko14.09.2022, 20:57
The main character seemed rational and determined from the start. A kind of girl who made herself on her own. But then, apparently due to stress, fatigue, and new powers, she started acting recklessly. However, who among us can always behave thoughtfully? It's probably natural to lose control in certain situations.
- al-bjelko14.09.2022, 20:57
Very cool start! I've read all sorts of things, but childbirth scenes—wow, that's something else! And most importantly, they’re presented in a way that’s not repulsive, without unnecessary physiological details, and they immediately grab your attention like a fishing hook. Overall, the first chapter is wonderful. Everything is clear, you feel sympathy for the main character, and it’s easy to guess what the story will be about. Ivan fits in perfectly here too. The character is incredibly likable, sensible, intelligent, and reliable. It’s great that the text touches on the theme of Ukrainian myths. It’s relevant, interesting, and familiar to many. Very fitting. If the text includes dog-headed creatures, hukh-mukh creatures, and lost children, I’ll be absolutely thrilled. But even without them, there are plenty of classic fairy-tale heroes. Kostiy is so vivid. Somewhat unusual. The new interpretation of the character fits into our world quite intriguingly. I would have made him a gloomy necromancer with skeletons in the closet))) and that’s probably a cliché association. But here, he’s just fire! I even feel sorry for the poor guy who was dragged out of his comfort zone and forced to dance to someone else’s tune.
- anni-ksandr21.08.2022, 09:15
I finished reading your book... What can I say... Unexpectedly, the fairy tales from my childhood seem to have grown up with me. Interesting intertwining of characters and events. The ending with Kostiy upset me. I kept waiting for him to fall in love with Adalina, and for her to fall for him too, and for the ending to be something like: and they lived happily ever after. But now, you'll have to write a sequel)))) Because I really want them to find a way to bring Kostiy back, and with some "bonuses." Honestly, I'm shocked by Kostiy. His character resonated with me more than the heroine)))) There are some minor typos, but I think you'll manage. In short, I'm thrilled! Looking forward to the sequel!)))
anni-ksandr21.08.2022, 22:21Skintey Alina, Waiting)))
- anni-ksandr16.08.2022, 19:49
The beginning intrigued me, but I didn't like Zmiyevsky. So far, I see the issue with the house. Moving on)))
alina-skintei16.08.2022, 20:26Anni Ksandr, thank you:)
- natalia-kotiuk16.08.2022, 11:55
It turns out I'm rereading your book for the second time, too bad I can't give it a high rating twice. I really liked your book. I'm thrilled with the characters and your writing style. It made me want to watch a series based on this plot. Very cool.
alina-skintei16.08.2022, 12:32Natalia Kotiuk, your comment warms my heart✨ Thank you, thank you✨
- kseniia-demidenko15.08.2022, 00:37
I read fairy tales a lot in my childhood, but I didn’t know so much about Koschei... until now. He wants to be angry and feared, but in reality, he’s different.
alina-skintei15.08.2022, 01:17Kseniia Demydenko, Yes, yes, it's very joyful that the story brings something new✨