The Commander’s Mistake
About the book
Krallel, the commander of the fleet, has longed for a mate — especially for the fleet’s chief healer, Anne. To win the impenetrable healer, who has turned down every male who’s ever confessed to her — including the commander himself — Krallel decides to use his dominant pheromones, a substance known to act as an irresistible aphrodisiac. But something goes wrong. By mistake, the one who receives the pheromones isn’t Anne… but Captain Veronica — a woman who shares nothing in common with him and who couldn’t be further from his idea of a perfect mate. His pheromones were supposed to affect only Anne. They weren’t supposed to work on Veronica… but they did.
Abstract of the book "The Commander’s Mistake"
Krallel, the commander of the fleet, has longed for a mate — especially for the fleet’s chief healer, Anne. To win the impenetrable healer, who has turned down every male who’s ever confessed to her — including the commander himself — Krallel decides to use his dominant pheromones, a substance known to act as an irresistible aphrodisiac. But something goes wrong. By mistake, the one who receives the pheromones isn’t Anne… but Captain Veronica — a woman who shares nothing in common with him and who couldn’t be further from his idea of a perfect mate. His pheromones were supposed to affect only Anne. They weren’t supposed to work on Veronica… but they did.
133 comments
rosaly-horna10.03.2025, 06:18Dear, your hormones are already out of control...
xristina-vilem25.12.2025, 18:05Nickname, He deserved it. Agreed❤️
evee-reid23.12.2025, 22:32Your writing style is impressive: so expressive and easy to visualize. Every word feels intentional, every scene is charged with emotion. It gave me so many ideas while reading. I would love to see this story turned into a visual work someday; it truly deserves it.
erika-paredes26.11.2025, 20:03I loved the story
tex-sanchez26.11.2025, 22:33erika paredes, Hi, thanks for the support. I'm glad you loved the story.
maju-cadavid-ocampo17.01.2025, 00:40Well, looking at it from Verónica's point of view, I would also have doubts about the commander's feelings. I hope he can go look for her soon and that she is waiting for him with a little commander. And that he shows her that he does love her, that it wasn't just by default. Needless to say, Aurora, I love the book and I hope to read your new story soon once it starts.
lara-rosa17.11.2025, 18:16Inna Turyanska, They'll get the Heart of the Demiurge - and they'll burn)) But it still needs to be obtained...
zita-francisco30.10.2025, 19:44What a beautiful story. Krallel is fantastic.
zita-francisco15.11.2025, 02:48Tex Sanchez, Of course, I already have the others in my library. Thanks
gloria-galvez-galvez11.10.2025, 20:39A different but intense story.
tex-sanchez15.11.2025, 00:30Gloria Galvez galvez, Thank you for your comment and support.
veronica-bahena09.11.2025, 16:51Lovely story.
tex-sanchez15.11.2025, 00:29Veronica Bahena, Thank you :3
saydel-ewens14.11.2025, 14:13I love it .... but give a little more, pleaseeee
tex-sanchez15.11.2025, 00:29Saydel Ewens, Thank you for the support. This is the end of “The Commander's Mistake,” but I invite you to keep reading my work. I have several free novels, including one in this same genre.
clau-alcazar05.12.2024, 15:09Another chapter, please
liia-tan26.10.2025, 09:07Oksana Mytchyk, Sincerely thank you!!!♥️♥️♥️
- maju-cadavid-ocampo27.11.2024, 01:15
No, beautiful author, I hope you are doing well. When you can, please gift us more chapters. A hug, and I send you super writer pheromones.
sofiia-caika11.10.2025, 09:33Nata Bond, ))) The stars have aligned!♥️
verillo-ramos05.11.2024, 13:25I have a feeling the commander is going to snap at the namesake again, he won't care that she's in pain hahaha. I'm waiting for more.
tanya23.09.2025, 18:09Kseniya Strilets, People are different, for some even setting the table is not their noble business)))
danilulii-kittyy16.09.2025, 00:56I loved it! I adored this couple!
tex-sanchez16.09.2025, 03:02Danilulii Kittyy, I'm glad you liked it, I hope to keep having you around here.
gisela-melgarejo09.09.2025, 19:07I loved it, I found it on TikTok, but it's a super good book, though it lacked an epilogue, maybe the birth of the baby or years later with several babies, haha. Super entertaining, your way of writing. It kept me hooked on the story, thanks!! for your story.
tex-sanchez10.09.2025, 17:11Gisela Melgarejo, Thank you for your comment. It's good to know you came from TikTok. I'll keep it in mind, but for now, it won't happen. I have another project from the same universe in the works. Thank you for the support :3
cristi-morales04.09.2025, 03:52I loved it, just missing an epilogue, I don't know about the baby's birth, and we wouldn't complain about a couple of extras.
tex-sanchez10.09.2025, 17:10Cristi Morales, I'm glad you liked the story. For now, it's not in my plans, but I have thought about it. I invite you to read another one of my books, thank you for the support.
lourdes-rodriguez16.10.2024, 11:00When she finds out that the culprit is the hahaha
lara-rosa06.09.2025, 10:30Marina Snizhna, (θ‿θ)