The Beginning
About the book
Cloe thought her life was ordinary—until the night everything was taken from her. Kidnapped and thrown into a world where time fractures and pain becomes survival, she begins to awaken something buried deep within her: strange memories, inner voices, and a power she cannot control. Driven by guilt, Ethan will stop at nothing to find her. But this is no simple rescue. As ancient forces rise and forbidden truths surface, both are pulled into a conflict far greater than they imagined. Because Cloe was never meant to be just human… and some destinies cannot be escaped.
Abstract of the book "The Beginning"
Cloe thought her life was ordinary—until the night everything was taken from her. Kidnapped and thrown into a world where time fractures and pain becomes survival, she begins to awaken something buried deep within her: strange memories, inner voices, and a power she cannot control. Driven by guilt, Ethan will stop at nothing to find her. But this is no simple rescue. As ancient forces rise and forbidden truths surface, both are pulled into a conflict far greater than they imagined. Because Cloe was never meant to be just human… and some destinies cannot be escaped.
83 comments
evee-snow09.01.2026, 22:18There is a quiet brilliance here. You don't just tell a story, you let it breathe. Every emotion lingers just beneath the surface, waiting to be seen. I could instantly imagine it as a visual work: the light, the framing, the tone... everything is there, waiting for the screen.
nelia-abv04.02.2026, 17:06Evee Snow, https://www.instagram.com/neliaa.b.v/?next=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.instagram.com%2Faccounts%2Fonetap%2F%3F__coig_login%3D1#
lrmedina13.01.2024, 19:56I would like to know why they repeat everything that already happened in the previous chapter; it annoys me to read the same thing and waste time.
esther-bertha-cortes-castro12.06.2021, 20:03I loved it, congratulations, I hope there is a 2nd part.
jesica-ortiz14.05.2021, 03:33Hello, I love the story. When does the second part come out?
july-sand13.01.2021, 00:21I loved it
amparo-sandy21.11.2020, 00:40Hello, sorry, what is the name of the second part?
kimberly27.09.2020, 22:11IS THERE A SECOND PART?????
luci-camino22.08.2020, 19:50Excellent
linette-del-carmen-hernandez-v07.06.2020, 05:26Does this book have a 2nd part?
connie-castro12.05.2020, 14:37Hey friend, when are you going to update your story?
mariela-de-icaza08.05.2020, 19:23My first reading on Booknet started with your book @Nelia. I randomly chose the book "Comienzo," and it was so good that I wanted to read the next part after the first book. Keep it up and move forward, dear author, with more books! Regards
killa17.04.2020, 20:19I really liked the book, I hope the sequel comes out soon.
paola-ramirez14.04.2020, 22:56I loved it
melanie-solanghe-poma-villegas28.03.2020, 07:00I loved the plot, I'm eagerly waiting for the second part.
- cintia-tejrina01.02.2020, 19:30
Very good, I loved it, now I'm starting to read the second part
nelia-abv02.02.2020, 18:04Thank you so much for the good wishes and for supporting my stories. I hope you enjoy reading their conclusion. A big hug and blessings ♡♡♡