rebeca-vera

21.04.2026, 15:45

Dear writer, I really liked the story, although I would have loved to see the story of Leo and Micky fully concluded. They should have had a trial and we should know how long they would be imprisoned, if they repented or something like that. I think Octavios deserved a better ending, but the rest is wonderful. Highly recommended, congratulations.

fiona-brennan

16.04.2026, 23:39

I love the plot, congratulations. You are very good at writing.

patricia-juarez

07.04.2026, 09:06

Thank you for the story, very beautiful

chelsy-uziel-perez-linarez

03.05.2025, 19:54

I loved this story so much.

mirna-gonzalez

13.02.2025, 13:52

Thank you for sharing this story

mariana-d-vera

26.01.2024, 13:26

Friend, it's a pleasure to greet you. I'm just starting with the novel and I like it. I know there are always people who think they have the right to be more of a critic than to give an opinion, and to criticize, one must be better at it to make those criticisms.

graciela-cocuzza

16.11.2023, 23:22

Oh Oliver!!! How little character you have!! I hope you don't let yourself be manipulated, are you a teenager or what???

graciela-cocuzza

16.11.2023, 18:03

For now, I’m still reading, but there are so many inconsistencies in the story... for example, at what point did she get soaked by the rain??? If when she left her job, she met him in his car and the rain started when they were already driving... ummm. I also hope a bit more of both of their stories is revealed, especially Alicia’s.... does she live with her boyfriend??? How old are the protagonists?? If I have to rate it based on what I’ve read so far, it’s at least Confusing....

elena-hernandez

18.10.2023, 19:58

Thank you for this story full of nuances. I admit that I gave in to the temptation to read it and I loved its variety of nuances. I confess that I’m like a spectator at a soccer match who thinks they’re a coach; I say this because I would have liked to know that Mark and Leo were severely punished, and I feel that Octavus was left as a loose end. But it’s just a whimsical desire to have everything resolved without room for speculation. May your own inspiring muse always accompany you and be prolific. Congratulations.

elena-hernandez

18.10.2023, 19:51

Temptation is present at all levels and spheres of life, it permeates absolutely everything, and it is not easy to refrain from succumbing to it. All that remains is to weigh the consequences that giving in to temptation entails before acting impulsively.

elena-hernandez

18.10.2023, 19:17

Will Alicia be the bride?

elena-hernandez

18.10.2023, 19:12

Poor Ana, she paid dearly for the mistake she made

elena-hernandez

18.10.2023, 18:51

Mark and Leo got what they deserved. There will always be someone more evil, more cunning, or with a greater thirst for revenge.

yuri-acosta

18.10.2023, 18:32

I really liked the way you write. A great story. Hugs from Colombia.

elena-hernandez

18.10.2023, 18:21

Poor Alicia. I don't understand if Mark's enemy was going to thwart the robbery, why did it happen anyway? Or did he just get ahead of Mark and take the loot for himself?