Abstract of the book "Spokusa: Temptation"
My senses are fully alert; I lose awareness of my own breathing. I remain in anticipation as his gaze pierces through me with a hint of curiosity. I'm caught between passion and uncertainty upon meeting Oliver — my attractive boss and the mysterious man who once made me “see the stars without a telescope” in a bar. I find myself constantly torn between what’s allowed and what’s forbidden in a relationship with my superior, but the story may take an unexpected turn as I begin to uncover who Oliver really is — and that we share much more than I ever imagined. And Mike, my longtime partner, is willing to do something so inhuman...
94 comments
chelsy-uziel-perez-linarez03.05.2025, 19:54I loved this story so much.
mirna-gonzalez13.02.2025, 13:52Thank you for sharing this story
mariana-d-vera26.01.2024, 13:26Friend, it's a pleasure to greet you. I'm just starting with the novel and I like it. I know there are always people who think they have the right to be more of a critic than to give an opinion, and to criticize, one must be better at it to make those criticisms.
graciela-cocuzza16.11.2023, 23:22Oh Oliver!!! How little character you have!! I hope you don't let yourself be manipulated, are you a teenager or what???
- graciela-cocuzza16.11.2023, 18:03
For now, I’m still reading, but there are so many inconsistencies in the story... for example, at what point did she get soaked by the rain??? If when she left her job, she met him in his car and the rain started when they were already driving... ummm. I also hope a bit more of both of their stories is revealed, especially Alicia’s.... does she live with her boyfriend??? How old are the protagonists?? If I have to rate it based on what I’ve read so far, it’s at least Confusing....
elena-hernandez18.10.2023, 19:58Thank you for this story full of nuances. I admit that I gave in to the temptation to read it and I loved its variety of nuances. I confess that I’m like a spectator at a soccer match who thinks they’re a coach; I say this because I would have liked to know that Mark and Leo were severely punished, and I feel that Octavus was left as a loose end. But it’s just a whimsical desire to have everything resolved without room for speculation. May your own inspiring muse always accompany you and be prolific. Congratulations.
elena-hernandez18.10.2023, 19:51Temptation is present at all levels and spheres of life, it permeates absolutely everything, and it is not easy to refrain from succumbing to it. All that remains is to weigh the consequences that giving in to temptation entails before acting impulsively.
elena-hernandez18.10.2023, 19:17Will Alicia be the bride?
elena-hernandez18.10.2023, 19:12Poor Ana, she paid dearly for the mistake she made
elena-hernandez18.10.2023, 18:51Mark and Leo got what they deserved. There will always be someone more evil, more cunning, or with a greater thirst for revenge.
yuri-acosta18.10.2023, 18:32I really liked the way you write. A great story. Hugs from Colombia.
elena-hernandez18.10.2023, 18:21Poor Alicia. I don't understand if Mark's enemy was going to thwart the robbery, why did it happen anyway? Or did he just get ahead of Mark and take the loot for himself?
elena-hernandez18.10.2023, 18:10This story has a variety of nuances and emotions; it has passion, evil, and intrigue. What I have read so far is excellent. I hope to finish reading it today.
- rosa17.10.2023, 19:54
Congratulations, my esteemed writer, I liked the story.
- mary-palacios13.10.2023, 23:33
I'm really enjoying the plot of this novel, thank you
Spokusa: Temptation
About the book
My senses are fully alert; I lose awareness of my own breathing. I remain in anticipation as his gaze pierces through me with a hint of curiosity. I'm caught between passion and uncertainty upon meeting Oliver — my attractive boss and the mysterious man who once made me “see the stars without a telescope” in a bar. I find myself constantly torn between what’s allowed and what’s forbidden in a relationship with my superior, but the story may take an unexpected turn as I begin to uncover who Oliver really is — and that we share much more than I ever imagined. And Mike, my longtime partner, is willing to do something so inhuman...
94 comments
- chelsy-uziel-perez-linarez03.05.2025, 19:54
I loved this story so much.
- mirna-gonzalez13.02.2025, 13:52
Thank you for sharing this story
- mariana-d-vera26.01.2024, 13:26
Friend, it's a pleasure to greet you. I'm just starting with the novel and I like it. I know there are always people who think they have the right to be more of a critic than to give an opinion, and to criticize, one must be better at it to make those criticisms.
- graciela-cocuzza16.11.2023, 23:22
Oh Oliver!!! How little character you have!! I hope you don't let yourself be manipulated, are you a teenager or what???
- graciela-cocuzza16.11.2023, 18:03
For now, I’m still reading, but there are so many inconsistencies in the story... for example, at what point did she get soaked by the rain??? If when she left her job, she met him in his car and the rain started when they were already driving... ummm. I also hope a bit more of both of their stories is revealed, especially Alicia’s.... does she live with her boyfriend??? How old are the protagonists?? If I have to rate it based on what I’ve read so far, it’s at least Confusing....
- elena-hernandez18.10.2023, 19:58
Thank you for this story full of nuances. I admit that I gave in to the temptation to read it and I loved its variety of nuances. I confess that I’m like a spectator at a soccer match who thinks they’re a coach; I say this because I would have liked to know that Mark and Leo were severely punished, and I feel that Octavus was left as a loose end. But it’s just a whimsical desire to have everything resolved without room for speculation. May your own inspiring muse always accompany you and be prolific. Congratulations.
- elena-hernandez18.10.2023, 19:51
Temptation is present at all levels and spheres of life, it permeates absolutely everything, and it is not easy to refrain from succumbing to it. All that remains is to weigh the consequences that giving in to temptation entails before acting impulsively.
- elena-hernandez18.10.2023, 19:17
Will Alicia be the bride?
- elena-hernandez18.10.2023, 19:12
Poor Ana, she paid dearly for the mistake she made
- elena-hernandez18.10.2023, 18:51
Mark and Leo got what they deserved. There will always be someone more evil, more cunning, or with a greater thirst for revenge.
- yuri-acosta18.10.2023, 18:32
I really liked the way you write. A great story. Hugs from Colombia.
- elena-hernandez18.10.2023, 18:21
Poor Alicia. I don't understand if Mark's enemy was going to thwart the robbery, why did it happen anyway? Or did he just get ahead of Mark and take the loot for himself?
- elena-hernandez18.10.2023, 18:10
This story has a variety of nuances and emotions; it has passion, evil, and intrigue. What I have read so far is excellent. I hope to finish reading it today.
- rosa17.10.2023, 19:54
Congratulations, my esteemed writer, I liked the story.
- mary-palacios13.10.2023, 23:33
I'm really enjoying the plot of this novel, thank you