Abstract of the book "Seriously, a Darken?"
She was living a carefree life, until one unfortunate accident. Why are these so-called darkens so careless with their blood? And why do they get to have magic? The whole idea of their "unique abilities" is completely unbelievable. But there's only one way to know for sure... and now, she's a Darken herself.
32 comments
kv-kv-julia-lime17.01.2024, 21:13Oh, somehow it didn't click with me(( it feels like I was reading a fragmented text. Good idea, but it needs a bit more work))))
sofiia-viterec17.01.2024, 22:39Kv Kv (Julia Lime), ahhh)))) Why be upset)))) When shortcomings are pointed out, it’s even inspiring. At least to fix the mistakes))) Thank you for mentioning it))) Transitions between chapters are something that’s hard to master even in three years)) But I’ll see what I can do and tweak the picture a bit)
liliia-mandarinka25.10.2023, 11:10Not a bad work, but in some moments it wasn't interesting. However, considering that I'm not a fan of the genre, it's still a very cool piece. I generally don't like stories with schools or academies. But honestly, your work impressed me. Thank you for writing this piece.
sofiia-viterec25.10.2023, 12:16Liliya Mandarynka, Thank you)))
liana-mixaliuk-zaikina25.08.2023, 06:53A bit chaotic and unclear. The characters are flat, the main heroine is somehow one-sidedly "convex-concave" :) Sorry. But it seems that one thing was intended, and then either the desire or the time was lacking to develop the characters. And the relationships, the events too. But the idea is interesting.
sofiia-viterec25.08.2023, 08:51Liana Mykhaliuk Zaikina, Interesting description))) I intended to tell about a unique academy without repeating others' plot twists) But in the end, I just decided to write a short diary of Charlene about how she became a darkena and the most interesting days of her new life) Maybe that's why it turned out this way) Thank you)))
anni-ksandr24.08.2023, 08:55Congratulations on finishing!! I hope the continuation will show what happens next in their adventures and life))) Wishing you inspiration for your future books, but for now, give yourself to Tim and Valera!))))
anni-ksandr24.08.2023, 09:59Sofia Viterets, Just in case, I'll be waiting)))
- anni-ksandr24.08.2023, 08:53
Caesar's kiss was a surprise)) For some reason, I kept thinking she had some special feelings for Parki))) So, how did he find her, where was he? Will there be a continuation with them as adults, not young anymore?)
sofiia-viterec24.08.2023, 09:20Anni Ksandr, She has some special feelings for everyone because of her passion for drawing)))) But as practice has shown, her feelings for Caesar are the "real" ones))) Because if she didn’t kill him once, it means there’s something there)))) And where was Parki? He slipped through the barrier and was hiding from the hunters near their "lair") That was their last test, so he managed to cross the barrier even before the academy was captured) But getting back... It’s not that simple) Sigh..))) I don’t know, I don’t know)))
- anni-ksandr20.08.2023, 09:43
Drake is a vivid example of why you shouldn't judge a person by their appearance)))
sofiia-viterec20.08.2023, 10:26Anni Ksandr, Oh yes))))
- anni-ksandr19.08.2023, 22:56
With such an attitude, she'll remain unkissed)))) But the diaper on the flag surprised me)) A real diaper? Why exactly that?))
anni-ksandr20.08.2023, 00:57Sofia Viterets, Sometimes it really happens like that))
- anni-ksandr16.08.2023, 09:22
So why did she faint? If she's not supposed to. Is it someone's sneaky game?
nina-vivtonenko16.08.2023, 10:01Good morning. I still don’t understand two points. 1. The assassination attempt on the teacher and why only the girl was able to neutralize the killers? And why, on the same day, does she save someone again while the other teachers don’t notice anything? Does this mean the teaching staff is veeery weak if an uneducated girl is the one saving them? 2. Why are adepts being expelled if they haven’t learned anything and there’s danger on the streets? Even though it was said that they need to study!
sofiia-viterec16.08.2023, 10:24Nina Vivtonenko, Good morning) Answers to these questions are a bit behind the scenes) They will appear a little later, when Charlene finally fully reveals her own powers) One thing I can say for sure - she is not like everyone else, and her past will soon make itself felt) And they expel the adepts to identify the impostors, but they themselves will be surprised at how late they already are. So all hope lies with those who pass the test)
- nina-vivtonenko15.08.2023, 20:23
Good evening. I just finished reading up to chapter 7. The girl is an orphan, but she has a sister? Did she finish university or just school? I'm a bit confused here.
sofiia-viterec15.08.2023, 22:14Nina Vivtonenko, Hello) She is not an orphan) It's just that her relatives were never close to her or cared for her in any way. Often, the girl ran away from home, and no one waited for her to return. And she did finish university) Both bachelor's and master's degrees) It's just that her flashbacks are sometimes about school times, sometimes about university times)
- anni-ksandr14.08.2023, 09:46
Will train until the last drop of sweat to get a hundred percent going?)))
anni-ksandr14.08.2023, 10:42Sofia Viterets, Oh, I love intrigues))
- anni-ksandr13.08.2023, 18:53
Until someone asks about it, it seems like fearlessness))) Although in reality, losing loved ones is the scariest thing...
anni-ksandr13.08.2023, 20:18Sofia Viterets, As an option))
- anni-ksandr10.08.2023, 10:05
What is so special about that night from Wednesday to Thursday? Are those real hunters who hunt darkens, or is it an illusion for their test?
alisa-valadje09.08.2023, 00:31Hello from mutual reading) The idea of this story is not bad, it intrigued me from the first chapters, so I want to finish reading it )). And it reads clearly.
sofiia-viterec09.08.2023, 00:37Alice Valadie, Thank you)))
- anni-ksandr08.08.2023, 09:32
So, Kesi won't be with them anymore?
anni-ksandr08.08.2023, 09:52Sofia Viterets, Hmm, but if she gets expelled, how will she be with Bryce?
Seriously, a Darken?
About the book
She was living a carefree life, until one unfortunate accident. Why are these so-called darkens so careless with their blood? And why do they get to have magic? The whole idea of their "unique abilities" is completely unbelievable. But there's only one way to know for sure... and now, she's a Darken herself.
32 comments
- kv-kv-julia-lime17.01.2024, 21:13
Oh, somehow it didn't click with me(( it feels like I was reading a fragmented text. Good idea, but it needs a bit more work))))
sofiia-viterec17.01.2024, 22:39Kv Kv (Julia Lime), ahhh)))) Why be upset)))) When shortcomings are pointed out, it’s even inspiring. At least to fix the mistakes))) Thank you for mentioning it))) Transitions between chapters are something that’s hard to master even in three years)) But I’ll see what I can do and tweak the picture a bit)
- liliia-mandarinka25.10.2023, 11:10
Not a bad work, but in some moments it wasn't interesting. However, considering that I'm not a fan of the genre, it's still a very cool piece. I generally don't like stories with schools or academies. But honestly, your work impressed me. Thank you for writing this piece.
sofiia-viterec25.10.2023, 12:16Liliya Mandarynka, Thank you)))
- liana-mixaliuk-zaikina25.08.2023, 06:53
A bit chaotic and unclear. The characters are flat, the main heroine is somehow one-sidedly "convex-concave" :) Sorry. But it seems that one thing was intended, and then either the desire or the time was lacking to develop the characters. And the relationships, the events too. But the idea is interesting.
sofiia-viterec25.08.2023, 08:51Liana Mykhaliuk Zaikina, Interesting description))) I intended to tell about a unique academy without repeating others' plot twists) But in the end, I just decided to write a short diary of Charlene about how she became a darkena and the most interesting days of her new life) Maybe that's why it turned out this way) Thank you)))
- anni-ksandr24.08.2023, 08:55
Congratulations on finishing!! I hope the continuation will show what happens next in their adventures and life))) Wishing you inspiration for your future books, but for now, give yourself to Tim and Valera!))))
anni-ksandr24.08.2023, 09:59Sofia Viterets, Just in case, I'll be waiting)))
- anni-ksandr24.08.2023, 08:53
Caesar's kiss was a surprise)) For some reason, I kept thinking she had some special feelings for Parki))) So, how did he find her, where was he? Will there be a continuation with them as adults, not young anymore?)
sofiia-viterec24.08.2023, 09:20Anni Ksandr, She has some special feelings for everyone because of her passion for drawing)))) But as practice has shown, her feelings for Caesar are the "real" ones))) Because if she didn’t kill him once, it means there’s something there)))) And where was Parki? He slipped through the barrier and was hiding from the hunters near their "lair") That was their last test, so he managed to cross the barrier even before the academy was captured) But getting back... It’s not that simple) Sigh..))) I don’t know, I don’t know)))
- anni-ksandr20.08.2023, 09:43
Drake is a vivid example of why you shouldn't judge a person by their appearance)))
sofiia-viterec20.08.2023, 10:26Anni Ksandr, Oh yes))))
- anni-ksandr19.08.2023, 22:56
With such an attitude, she'll remain unkissed)))) But the diaper on the flag surprised me)) A real diaper? Why exactly that?))
anni-ksandr20.08.2023, 00:57Sofia Viterets, Sometimes it really happens like that))
- anni-ksandr16.08.2023, 09:22
So why did she faint? If she's not supposed to. Is it someone's sneaky game?
- nina-vivtonenko16.08.2023, 10:01
Good morning. I still don’t understand two points. 1. The assassination attempt on the teacher and why only the girl was able to neutralize the killers? And why, on the same day, does she save someone again while the other teachers don’t notice anything? Does this mean the teaching staff is veeery weak if an uneducated girl is the one saving them? 2. Why are adepts being expelled if they haven’t learned anything and there’s danger on the streets? Even though it was said that they need to study!
sofiia-viterec16.08.2023, 10:24Nina Vivtonenko, Good morning) Answers to these questions are a bit behind the scenes) They will appear a little later, when Charlene finally fully reveals her own powers) One thing I can say for sure - she is not like everyone else, and her past will soon make itself felt) And they expel the adepts to identify the impostors, but they themselves will be surprised at how late they already are. So all hope lies with those who pass the test)
- nina-vivtonenko15.08.2023, 20:23
Good evening. I just finished reading up to chapter 7. The girl is an orphan, but she has a sister? Did she finish university or just school? I'm a bit confused here.
sofiia-viterec15.08.2023, 22:14Nina Vivtonenko, Hello) She is not an orphan) It's just that her relatives were never close to her or cared for her in any way. Often, the girl ran away from home, and no one waited for her to return. And she did finish university) Both bachelor's and master's degrees) It's just that her flashbacks are sometimes about school times, sometimes about university times)
- anni-ksandr14.08.2023, 09:46
Will train until the last drop of sweat to get a hundred percent going?)))
anni-ksandr14.08.2023, 10:42Sofia Viterets, Oh, I love intrigues))
- anni-ksandr13.08.2023, 18:53
Until someone asks about it, it seems like fearlessness))) Although in reality, losing loved ones is the scariest thing...
anni-ksandr13.08.2023, 20:18Sofia Viterets, As an option))
- anni-ksandr10.08.2023, 10:05
What is so special about that night from Wednesday to Thursday? Are those real hunters who hunt darkens, or is it an illusion for their test?
- alisa-valadje09.08.2023, 00:31
Hello from mutual reading) The idea of this story is not bad, it intrigued me from the first chapters, so I want to finish reading it )). And it reads clearly.
sofiia-viterec09.08.2023, 00:37Alice Valadie, Thank you)))
- anni-ksandr08.08.2023, 09:32
So, Kesi won't be with them anymore?
anni-ksandr08.08.2023, 09:52Sofia Viterets, Hmm, but if she gets expelled, how will she be with Bryce?