sol-plata

11.02.2026, 19:01

Beautiful writer, this story was very lovely, everything about them made me fall in love. Beautiful, the only thing I found were some flaws in the writing, but the story itself was nice. I hope to keep enjoying your books in the future.

maria-eugenia-fernandez-caullan

23.07.2024, 15:22

Hello, I started reading this story, it looks interesting but, if you allow me, Miss Author, there are some errors in the writing. I’m at the last chapter, 8, and in some chapters, the errors are noticeable.

emmi-bernAuthor

30.06.2025, 23:41

Anya Samson, It will be soon ❤❤❤

angeles-celeste

09.07.2024, 18:36

Congratulations, I loved it. Beautiful, this couple with their 3 little devils together and happy. 100% recommended.

steisi-braunAuthor

18.06.2025, 23:21

Dasha Rud, As it suits you) It can be separate too. "Mouse as a Deposit" and "Colonel of the Storm" - love stories of Makar's friends)

lizcitha

20.06.2024, 03:28

Helena, I hate you already. Alondra, please tell Apollo that they are his children.

olga-xristiiancukAuthor

01.06.2025, 11:26

(Ivanka), Cowards don't know any other way. Thank you for your attention ♥️

kattia-rodriguez

20.06.2024, 02:53

Please don't let anything happen to the girl, let it just be a bump, nothing more, and now let Apollo find out that those children are his and let that Helena pay for all the wrong she has done.

lara-rosaAuthor

01.06.2025, 08:40

Olena Kondak, Thank you for the review!

kattia-rodriguez

05.06.2024, 04:00

This got really complicated, what's going to happen with all of this?

lara-rosaAuthor

17.05.2025, 13:38

Olena Hushpyt, Now it will be even easier to convince her and, possibly, to fend off the mother-owner together))) Thank you!

felicita-benavides

03.06.2024, 21:38

These kids are going to drive Apollo crazy. hahaha

oresta-matviicukAuthor

16.05.2025, 09:35

Magical Dream, This was just a warm-up for me) Kaissa won't be a child forever) And soon we’ll be expecting new characters on the stage...

lizcitha

01.06.2024, 01:15

But they are your demons, Apollo, just like you haha

anna-liashhenkoAuthor

14.05.2025, 19:52

Oleksandra Novatska, Yes, she loves him, but she won't endure for long... Thank you!

roxxane-lara

09.05.2024, 22:11

Apollo saw them, what will he plan against them, and now what does the dad want?

ustina-calAuthor

21.04.2025, 12:12

Oleksandra Khalaim, Exactly, it seems simple now, but she will soon realize that everything is much harder... When they got married, they talked with Albort. But Tai was 23 back then, had been dating him since she was 18, and at that time she herself wasn’t thinking about children, didn’t want them, and only now understands that she wouldn’t mind becoming a mother.

katia-parra

09.04.2024, 12:37

Open Alondra...

lara-rosaAuthor

17.03.2025, 23:40

Larysa Bondarchuk, There's also a kiss with a secret there)))

laura-montes

20.12.2024, 12:20

Hello! I liked the story, but I must say it has quite a few spelling mistakes. Personally, it doesn't bother me when the story is free, but when it's paid, I would appreciate it if you paid more attention.

sasha

20.07.2024, 21:53

Ahhh, thank you for the opportunity to read you on this occasion, once again leaving an incredible desire to follow you in your upcoming projects.

sandra-bobadilla-torres

18.07.2024, 02:08

I liked it a lot...beautiful story

maria-dolores-peris

15.07.2024, 21:07

Hello, I just finished the book and what a beautiful story, congratulations, gorgeous, I loved it and now I'm going to choose another book of yours to see which one I read.

maria-dolores-peris

15.07.2024, 15:05

Hello Thamay, thanks for giving me the link. I'm already starting to listen to the book. A hug.