91 comments

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  tena-ditna

  24.10.2025, 01:30

  Another cycle. Different speeds. Separately. In different ways, each in their own manner. He - away from her, she - towards herself. His path - bright towards a dream. Hers - still undiscovered. Their paths. I really want both of them to become happy. Ideally - together) Thank you for the story❤️ Off to read the continuation)

  

  melaniia-artAuthor

  26.10.2025, 20:18

  Tena Ditna, Yes) It's like landing a plane: sometimes you need to go for a second loop to land successfully on the ground) That's exactly what happened with Yan and Kira) Thank you for the feedback❤️

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  steisi-mur

  15.10.2025, 01:23

  I wish for the book to find its reader, and for the author—endless inspiration!

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  natalka-senik

  21.09.2025, 22:18

  No matter how you look at it, Kira made the right decision, but once again, a broken heart and so much pain, and once again, Yan decided everything for himself, not for them. Well, the intrigue is captivating. I wonder how much time it will take for their fate to bring them together again, if it will at all, and who will be the one hurt and who will be successful? There are many questions, but for some reason, it’s always Yan who fails these tests. This is my opinion. Thank you.

  

  melaniia-artAuthor

  06.10.2025, 18:02

  Natalka Senyk, They are both just searching for themselves) And Yan also tried, but unfortunately, it doesn't always work out to do everything right. But he will have time to rethink his actions) Thank you for the feedback!)

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  valentina-slobodniuk

  13.05.2025, 09:56

  Surprised that, after getting out of the car, he didn't throw a jacket over the girl's bare shoulders. Even if it's near the house. He could have done it in the car too.

  

  melaniia-artAuthor

  13.05.2025, 11:19

  Valentyna Slobodnyuk, In a confused state, it's not always possible to think rationally) At that moment, Yan was already completely focused on thoughts of how to cheer up and distract Kira. I'm not justifying him, because he really could have thrown something on, but ordinary people can make mistakes) And under stress - even more so)

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  tanya

  18.04.2025, 23:50

  Wow, I read it in one breath) Sometimes you need to let go in order not to lose yourself first in these relationships. After all, what would have happened later, and would they have had a future? Would there have been reproaches and resentments? Probably, some relationships need time to grow and mature. I'll keep my fingers crossed for them, because I so want them to be happy together)

  

  melaniia-artAuthor

  19.04.2025, 22:35

  Tanya, Thank you very much for your feedback)) And I agree with your thoughts. Indeed, sometimes no matter how hard it is, you need to let go. If it's meant to be together - it will definitely happen)) Even after something like this))

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  mariika-kozarik

  17.04.2025, 23:08

  The book is wonderful, easy to read. And I really like Yan and Kira as the main characters)

  

  melaniia-artAuthor

  18.04.2025, 19:02

  Mariyka Kozaryk, Sincerely grateful for the feedback)) Glad you liked it))

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  valentina-lizun

  16.04.2025, 08:56

  Life is unpredictable :)

  

  melaniia-artAuthor

  18.04.2025, 19:02

  Valentyna Lyzun, That's for sure))

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  viktoriia-kovtun

  15.04.2025, 15:31

  An interesting and captivating story. It's impossible to tear yourself away. Of course, it's a pity how things turned out in the end between Yan and Kira, but perhaps it's for the best for Kira. Well, if she had gone with him, what would have awaited her there? She would have been stuck within four walls, without personal growth or self-realization, just listening to the successes of her beloved Yan. And how long would she have lasted? Love alone eventually becomes not enough. I hope that in the second part, they will discuss everything and resolve things for the better. After all, true love doesn't just fade away))) Thank you for the wonderful book.

  

  melaniia-artAuthor

  16.04.2025, 00:58

  Victoria Kovtun, Completely agree) If Kira had still left, everything could have only gotten worse. Although it's sad that they had to part ways, it was necessary for both of them to understand what they truly want from life) Sincerely grateful for the feedback❤️

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  nina-mixailovska-spicak

  15.04.2025, 14:04

  I'm reading this incredibly interesting story of adventures, relationships, and love of the main characters. Thank you.

  

  melaniia-artAuthor

  15.04.2025, 14:44

  Nina Mykhailivska-Spychak, Thank you for the feedback!))

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  liubov-ivanivna

  02.03.2025, 12:51

  I really liked the story of Yan and his girlfriend, I will gladly read the continuation.

  

  melaniia-artAuthor

  02.03.2025, 19:19

  Liubov Ivanivna, Thank you for your feedback!)) I'm glad you liked it) The continuation is already being published on my page)

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  tania

  28.02.2025, 09:31

  Good afternoon, when will the second part be released?

  

  melaniia-artAuthor

  28.02.2025, 10:51

  Tanya, Hello) It's already being published under the title "Don't Remind Me Why You") Check it out on my page)

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  xelena-vlasenko

  08.02.2025, 20:17

  I really got into the story! The atmosphere of the narrative is exactly what I wanted: pleasant and balanced))) The characters are logical, genuine, and likable. I believed in their actions, thoughts, views, and deeds. Yan seemed to me like a bit of a dreamer, full of enthusiasm and life energy, while Kira is more grounded and calm. A great pair. And though I’m really sad about the ending, it’s logical. Kira did everything right, just like Yan. Unfortunately, it couldn’t have been any other way((

  

  melaniia-artAuthor

  09.02.2025, 15:41

  Helena Vlasenko, Thank you for the feedback)) I'm glad you liked it)) And regarding the characterization of the characters - I agree with you here) Perhaps, Kira is more down-to-earth, as she faced some not very pleasant events in the past that knocked the rose-colored glasses off her. As for Yan, everything turned out a bit... Well, easier - not quite the right word, but still without major problems. Although, in the new country, things won't be very sweet for him either, but more on that later.

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  oksana-morus

  07.02.2025, 20:08

  Thank you for the book. It's interesting, emotionally intense... I feel sorry for Kira. It seems like she’s experiencing déjà vu. She’s once again left alone to deal with everything that’s fallen on her shoulders. Yan has completely immersed himself in his new job. New friends, a girlfriend (oh, she’s just helping him adapt). The time difference, which Yan doesn’t take into account... And Kira couldn’t handle it. She fully dove into their love... She gave her all... And what did she get: a spit in the soul from Stas, a complaint. She didn’t tell Yan anything so the brothers wouldn’t fight. Support? Zero. And she’s left in turmoil. ༎ຶ⁠‿⁠༎ຶ༎ຶ⁠‿⁠༎ຶ༎ຶ⁠‿⁠༎ຶ

  

  melaniia-artAuthor

  07.02.2025, 20:30

  Oksana Morus, Thank you for your feedback!) Yes, indeed, the situation turned out not in the best way, but perhaps Kira needed this push to finally find herself) And Yan didn’t have everything so "smooth" either, but more about that later in the second part)

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  anna

  28.01.2025, 21:45

  I really liked the book! It felt like watching a movie) I'm rushing to read the sequel!!!)) Thank you!!!!!!

  

  melaniia-artAuthor

  28.01.2025, 22:18

  Anna, Sincerely grateful for the feedback❤️ Glad you liked it))

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  nadya

  13.01.2025, 15:24

  Thank you for the interesting emotional book and I wish you inspiration

  

  melaniia-artAuthor

  13.01.2025, 17:20

  Nadya, Thank you for the feedback!)