angelina-kotias

13.03.2026, 15:07

And where can I read Max's story, what is it called?

valentina-pribytok

05.12.2025, 21:38

Sincerely thank you for the meaningful story of creating a happy family. I received a lot of positive emotions. Wishing you inspiration and creative success.

anastasiia

17.11.2025, 18:02

I got interested in a snippet of the book on TikTok and made a point to read the whole story. A piece of advice to the author: when writing a romantic storyline, pay attention to its logic. The book is short, but you skimped on words to make the story seem believable. Suddenly there are kisses, and then some kind of "swan-like fidelity," all with a blurry, illogical plot. This isn’t a love line, it’s a love dotted line, and the characters are very flat. When writing the main female character, you turned her into a naive, shortsighted, frightened angel, but this isn’t fantasy where a variety of traits is inherent to living people, is it? And the main male character with his fits of rage? There was such a buildup to his dark side, and such a result. Before writing, it would have been good to familiarize yourself with concepts like trauma, PTSD, or excessive aggression and describe it emotionally and realistically. There’s little action in the book, and sorry, but you constantly repeat the same phrase in the text. I counted it 7 times, and my eyes hurt. Our language is so rich and diverse, please use that.

uliana-pasAuthor

17.11.2025, 18:24

Anastasia, Thank you for your opinion

ira-ivanys

02.11.2025, 19:05

Wonderful book from the first page. Thank you

uliana-pasAuthor

02.11.2025, 20:00

Ira Ivanys, Thank you♥️

liza

18.09.2025, 07:34

Thank you for such a wonderful book! I'm glad that Daniil and Diana were able to be together despite all the difficulties!

uliana-pasAuthor

02.11.2025, 19:59

Liza, Thank you♥️

natalia-iakovleva

29.08.2025, 00:17

A wonderful romantic love story, wishing you inspiration in writing other stories.❤️❤️❤️

uliana-pasAuthor

02.11.2025, 19:59

Natalia Yakovleva, Sincerely thank you♥️

tania-mak

27.09.2025, 12:14

Thank you for the wonderful love story

adriana-adriana

07.04.2025, 08:55

I really liked this story ♥️♥️♥️♥️ Is there another story about Max and Karina?

uliana-pasAuthor

07.04.2025, 21:53

Adriana Adriana, Sincerely thank you ❤️ No, there isn't.

vita

01.04.2025, 22:11

Thank you for the wonderful story! ❤️❤️❤️

uliana-pasAuthor

07.04.2025, 21:52

Vita, Thank you ❤️

iuliia-zolud

23.03.2025, 22:46

Thank you for this incredible story❤️❤️❤️

uliana-pasAuthor

07.04.2025, 21:52

Yuliya Zholud, Thank you for reading ❤️

lanachak

18.03.2025, 21:13

Sincerely thank you, dear author, for the opportunity to read this wonderful book. Wishing you creative inspiration and a light pen)))

uliana-pasAuthor

18.03.2025, 21:19

lanachak, Enjoy your reading❤️ Thank you❤️

anasteisa-kuin

14.03.2025, 19:18

Good evening, there is a mistake in the text in chapter 3. Paragraph "Daniil switches to phone conversations"

uliana-pasAuthor

14.03.2025, 19:54

Anastasia Queen, Thank you for your attention. I will correct it.

sveta-ovcarenko

06.11.2024, 00:15

The book is simply incredible) thank you)

uliana-pasAuthor

14.03.2025, 19:54

Sveta Ovcharenko, Sincerely thank you for the kind words❤️

lesia-gruseckaia

01.09.2024, 00:45

The chapters are mixed up

uliana-pasAuthor

01.09.2024, 08:25

Lesya Hrushetska, Which ones exactly?

liubov-troximcuk

26.05.2024, 23:36

Thank you for such a wonderful book. While reading, my emotions were overwhelming. Very touching, tender, emotional. And, as always, love triumphs! Thank you. Wishing you, Ulyana, success, creative inspiration, and grateful readers like us! Victory to us ALL!

uliana-pasAuthor

01.07.2024, 15:13

Liubov Trokhymchuk, Sincerely thank you for your kind words❤️