Abstract of the book "Magic Calling"
Excess weight, bullying and persecution from classmates, father's indifference – this is what accompanied Vira throughout her conscious life. She eats sweets to cope with grief, but it doesn't help. Hatred accumulates in the teenager's soul… The young heroine doesn't know yet that changes are near. Changes that will allow her to take life into her own hands. And magic will be indispensable here. A cat sat on moss-covered stones. Enormous in size, black as night, with large yellow eyes and thick white whiskers. A classic of the feline genre, only bigger. Squinting, he looked kindly at Vira…
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diana-kozlovska10.02.2024, 13:00Chapter 4) I feel a breath of mysticism) I see a similarity between the deceased grandmother and Vira. Both are treated with disdain, they are lonely. Vira, as a child, feels nothing towards the deceased Sofia, but I think she will change this attitude. Something tells me so) There is a mystery with all the women of the paternal lineage. I think it’s connected to magic (a curse? perhaps). It’s very immersive) I would bury that Elvira in the backyard, not send her to Goa at someone else’s expense! Let her go work and take herself wherever she wants)
diana-kozlovska10.02.2024, 12:50Chapter 3) I don’t understand: why is a 32-year-old man so blind and dumb? Usually, girls like Elvira are just for the bedroom. He’s not a millionaire to afford such a toy. He allows her to treat the child like that. Probably, he treats Vira a bit differently. Like, she’s his equal. So, the fact that she cooks or interferes in matters is taken for granted because he thinks she’s mature enough. Maybe. As an option. I think that starting from the grandmother’s death, the plot will involve magic) Just a hunch) I’ll devour one more chapter (4), and then I’ll have to return to reality :(
diana-kozlovska10.02.2024, 12:39The second part is so painful) I think I’ll comment on each part separately!) It’s been a long time since I’ve read something so captivating) I really hate injustice, and there’s so much of it here, you could shovel it up) Poor child, but in some ways, I understand her. Of course, she’s not like me as a child, but I feel something in common. Probably, I also grew up with a father who didn’t really understand me and expected only the best results from me. This loneliness. The desire to have a pet that wasn’t allowed (I dragged a lot of things home from the street). But then my father gave in and bought me a cat :) I so want to tell the heroine: scream if it hurts, don’t endure it, curse with all your might, grab by the hair! I always resorted to aggression as a child because, due to one sad incident, I realized: it’s either you or them. I really like everything! Even the fact that I despise the characters, but that’s what the author intended))
diana-kozlovska09.02.2024, 15:17I’ll be commenting often :) The first part impressed me, as it’s been a while since something evoked emotions in me. Firstly, it’s the girl’s patience. Inside, everything is raging, but she constantly restrains herself. At her age, I used to lose it completely over injustice. Secondly, the storyline with the father. Mine is also a dentist :) And he openly neglected me, just like the heroine, though he didn’t have such dumb mistresses; he was afraid to introduce me to anyone at all. In this story, the main character’s father is very indifferent. For now, I don’t understand the reasons, so I can’t comment objectively. With the father’s mistress, there’s clearly hostility. They’re fighting for attention: one for the father’s, the other for the husband’s. The mistress is indeed a very foolish girl, or woman, though probably still a girl. Because competing and openly insulting a child in front of the father means she’s missing a few screws. Still, I’ll follow her motives as well. Money is money, but insulting a child... there must be something in her past that hurt her. I really like it :) I hope I won’t be annoying if I comment often, because otherwise I’ll forget my thoughts :)
alina-kruglecka28.01.2024, 15:33An interesting book, unconventional. It would be worth writing a sequel. About the heroine in adulthood, there’s probably a lot to say. In any case, I would read a sequel with pleasure.
ariia-vest04.01.2024, 13:49I enjoyed this book. It touches on important themes such as bullying, self-esteem, the struggle with oneself, and family relationships, especially when one of the family members feels completely alien to you. A great message and pleasant text, I devoured the book in one go! The main character is a very interesting personality, and very smart for her age)
irina-velicko02.05.2023, 23:39An unusual book. Yes, it might not be written perfectly. But... It has its own "highlight." The plot is interesting. The story is instructive, even though it's not educational material. It gives you something to think about. For the "particularly dissatisfied": - firstly, this is young adult fiction. For young adult fiction, it is quite interesting and clearly written. - secondly, who is forcing you to read it? It’s your personal choice to read or not. If you don’t like it, don’t read it. Move on. Everyone has different tastes. Personally, I enjoyed reading the book. I won’t say I’ll want to reread it 10 more times, but the book is interesting. Thank you for your creativity. Wishing you inspiration.
inna-turianska15.08.2022, 10:29A wonderful piece. Your main character is so brave, a girl with some spice.) I understand her so well with her craving for food, especially sweets, because I'm the same. I'm glad that in the end, she decided to take control of herself. It's a bit sad that the girl still signed that contract. After all, being a witch is bad, at least from my perspective on life. I understand that she did it to help Anton and not only, but still. What I liked the most was the phrase: "I’ll drink black coffee. Black as my soul." Well, you’ve already figured out that I liked it since I read it to the end. But personally, I think the girl is way too smart for 13 years old. Well, maybe it’s because of her witch roots.) And I would also like there to be more live communication, but that’s just my personal opinion; it’s easier for me to read that way. Thank you for your work. A continuation would definitely not hurt.) Good luck.
lara-rosa10.08.2022, 17:23Congratulations on the marathon! I planned to read two chapters but ended up devouring everything)) Wonderfully written! The emotions are vivid and real. I myself wanted to tear apart those scoundrels who attacked the poor girl, or knock some sense into her father. The plot is captivating, the intrigue holds: you keep wondering what she will choose. The smart girl found a compromise)) It reads easily, as I already said: in one go. The characters are alive, not stereotypical, especially the main heroine. I would love to see a continuation of Vira's adventures. Wishing you success!
valentina-zaxarcenko30.07.2022, 21:50Thank you for the book, I would like a continuation about how she managed the power passed down to her by her great-grandmother, and how her life turned out later on....
nadezda-muzyka02.08.2021, 20:17Thank you for the book. I was worried about Vira, what will she do? I am thrilled with your book.
angelnik15.04.2021, 11:39Truly an unexpected twist! At least I somehow didn’t guess who the mysterious woman from the forest depths could turn out to be. Interesting idea with the key! I would also like to highlight the moment where the main character sits by the window, gazing at the rain. It might just be one paragraph, but to me, it felt very atmospheric, as if I could smell the air during a downpour. The scene where Anton gives Vera the first flower is touching and sincere! In my opinion, you do a great job of conveying the feelings and mood of the main character, which makes her feel like a real person to the reader. Thank you for the interesting continuation!
angelnik13.04.2021, 20:25An interesting continuation! In my opinion, there’s nothing unnecessary—just a journey through the plot, and that’s great! The village where the main character arrives is vividly drawn in my imagination. The news about the great-grandmother immediately creates a sense of mystery and caution, hinting that mystical events are inevitable. The image of the mysterious woman Sofia is intriguing; something tells me she might turn out to be a negative character, though of course, I could be wrong. The cat Zephyr is very clearly imagined and, in my opinion, is a wonderful participant in the story. While reading the book, it doesn’t feel like a fairy tale; as a reader, I believe in the events that are happening. The guy Vera meets in the village seems like a positive character, at least at first glance. For now, I’ve stopped at the moment where Vera is about to visit the forest house for the second time. Overall, there’s a feeling that something is brewing, one way or another. I’m eager to keep reading and, together with the main character, uncover the veil of mysteries. Thank you for the captivating plot!
angelnik11.04.2021, 21:52I started reading your story, and I really liked the beginning! It reads easily and immediately immerses me in the plot. In my opinion, you do a great job of conveying the inner world and emotions that the main character experiences to the reader. Moreover, the theme is truly important. Vira comes across as a kind person, despite not being the typical quiet, gray mouse. She can stand up for herself, and there’s a genuine sincerity in her. The character feels like a real person from our present day, someone who inspires trust and a desire to empathize with her feelings and concerns. From the description of Elvira, I perfectly understand Vira’s attitude. If there were an ordinary, empathetic, and decent woman by Dmytro’s side, I’m sure the relationship between the daughter and the future mother would have turned out completely different. So far, I’ve only read the first three chapters, but I read them not out of obligation, but because the story really draws me in effortlessly! I’ll continue reading whenever possible and share my impressions. Thank you for the interesting plot!
kristina-asecka03.04.2021, 16:00Cats indeed brought us together, and I read your book. I immediately noticed that you portrayed Vera beautifully, avoiding clichés and not making her an ideal girl with a perfect character and good looks. The character feels alive. I liked how you subtly touched on the topic of bullying; I wish there was less cruelty in the real world. I'm glad the heroine accepted her destiny and chose the light side. A special thanks for Zefir, he's my love. Thank you for an interesting story!
Magic Calling
About the book
Excess weight, bullying and persecution from classmates, father's indifference – this is what accompanied Vira throughout her conscious life. She eats sweets to cope with grief, but it doesn't help. Hatred accumulates in the teenager's soul… The young heroine doesn't know yet that changes are near. Changes that will allow her to take life into her own hands. And magic will be indispensable here. A cat sat on moss-covered stones. Enormous in size, black as night, with large yellow eyes and thick white whiskers. A classic of the feline genre, only bigger. Squinting, he looked kindly at Vira…
37 comments
- diana-kozlovska10.02.2024, 13:00
Chapter 4) I feel a breath of mysticism) I see a similarity between the deceased grandmother and Vira. Both are treated with disdain, they are lonely. Vira, as a child, feels nothing towards the deceased Sofia, but I think she will change this attitude. Something tells me so) There is a mystery with all the women of the paternal lineage. I think it’s connected to magic (a curse? perhaps). It’s very immersive) I would bury that Elvira in the backyard, not send her to Goa at someone else’s expense! Let her go work and take herself wherever she wants)
- diana-kozlovska10.02.2024, 12:50
Chapter 3) I don’t understand: why is a 32-year-old man so blind and dumb? Usually, girls like Elvira are just for the bedroom. He’s not a millionaire to afford such a toy. He allows her to treat the child like that. Probably, he treats Vira a bit differently. Like, she’s his equal. So, the fact that she cooks or interferes in matters is taken for granted because he thinks she’s mature enough. Maybe. As an option. I think that starting from the grandmother’s death, the plot will involve magic) Just a hunch) I’ll devour one more chapter (4), and then I’ll have to return to reality :(
- diana-kozlovska10.02.2024, 12:39
The second part is so painful) I think I’ll comment on each part separately!) It’s been a long time since I’ve read something so captivating) I really hate injustice, and there’s so much of it here, you could shovel it up) Poor child, but in some ways, I understand her. Of course, she’s not like me as a child, but I feel something in common. Probably, I also grew up with a father who didn’t really understand me and expected only the best results from me. This loneliness. The desire to have a pet that wasn’t allowed (I dragged a lot of things home from the street). But then my father gave in and bought me a cat :) I so want to tell the heroine: scream if it hurts, don’t endure it, curse with all your might, grab by the hair! I always resorted to aggression as a child because, due to one sad incident, I realized: it’s either you or them. I really like everything! Even the fact that I despise the characters, but that’s what the author intended))
- diana-kozlovska09.02.2024, 15:17
I’ll be commenting often :) The first part impressed me, as it’s been a while since something evoked emotions in me. Firstly, it’s the girl’s patience. Inside, everything is raging, but she constantly restrains herself. At her age, I used to lose it completely over injustice. Secondly, the storyline with the father. Mine is also a dentist :) And he openly neglected me, just like the heroine, though he didn’t have such dumb mistresses; he was afraid to introduce me to anyone at all. In this story, the main character’s father is very indifferent. For now, I don’t understand the reasons, so I can’t comment objectively. With the father’s mistress, there’s clearly hostility. They’re fighting for attention: one for the father’s, the other for the husband’s. The mistress is indeed a very foolish girl, or woman, though probably still a girl. Because competing and openly insulting a child in front of the father means she’s missing a few screws. Still, I’ll follow her motives as well. Money is money, but insulting a child... there must be something in her past that hurt her. I really like it :) I hope I won’t be annoying if I comment often, because otherwise I’ll forget my thoughts :)
- alina-kruglecka28.01.2024, 15:33
An interesting book, unconventional. It would be worth writing a sequel. About the heroine in adulthood, there’s probably a lot to say. In any case, I would read a sequel with pleasure.
- ariia-vest04.01.2024, 13:49
I enjoyed this book. It touches on important themes such as bullying, self-esteem, the struggle with oneself, and family relationships, especially when one of the family members feels completely alien to you. A great message and pleasant text, I devoured the book in one go! The main character is a very interesting personality, and very smart for her age)
- irina-velicko02.05.2023, 23:39
An unusual book. Yes, it might not be written perfectly. But... It has its own "highlight." The plot is interesting. The story is instructive, even though it's not educational material. It gives you something to think about. For the "particularly dissatisfied": - firstly, this is young adult fiction. For young adult fiction, it is quite interesting and clearly written. - secondly, who is forcing you to read it? It’s your personal choice to read or not. If you don’t like it, don’t read it. Move on. Everyone has different tastes. Personally, I enjoyed reading the book. I won’t say I’ll want to reread it 10 more times, but the book is interesting. Thank you for your creativity. Wishing you inspiration.
- inna-turianska15.08.2022, 10:29
A wonderful piece. Your main character is so brave, a girl with some spice.) I understand her so well with her craving for food, especially sweets, because I'm the same. I'm glad that in the end, she decided to take control of herself. It's a bit sad that the girl still signed that contract. After all, being a witch is bad, at least from my perspective on life. I understand that she did it to help Anton and not only, but still. What I liked the most was the phrase: "I’ll drink black coffee. Black as my soul." Well, you’ve already figured out that I liked it since I read it to the end. But personally, I think the girl is way too smart for 13 years old. Well, maybe it’s because of her witch roots.) And I would also like there to be more live communication, but that’s just my personal opinion; it’s easier for me to read that way. Thank you for your work. A continuation would definitely not hurt.) Good luck.
- lara-rosa10.08.2022, 17:23
Congratulations on the marathon! I planned to read two chapters but ended up devouring everything)) Wonderfully written! The emotions are vivid and real. I myself wanted to tear apart those scoundrels who attacked the poor girl, or knock some sense into her father. The plot is captivating, the intrigue holds: you keep wondering what she will choose. The smart girl found a compromise)) It reads easily, as I already said: in one go. The characters are alive, not stereotypical, especially the main heroine. I would love to see a continuation of Vira's adventures. Wishing you success!
- valentina-zaxarcenko30.07.2022, 21:50
Thank you for the book, I would like a continuation about how she managed the power passed down to her by her great-grandmother, and how her life turned out later on....
- nadezda-muzyka02.08.2021, 20:17
Thank you for the book. I was worried about Vira, what will she do? I am thrilled with your book.
- angelnik15.04.2021, 11:39
Truly an unexpected twist! At least I somehow didn’t guess who the mysterious woman from the forest depths could turn out to be. Interesting idea with the key! I would also like to highlight the moment where the main character sits by the window, gazing at the rain. It might just be one paragraph, but to me, it felt very atmospheric, as if I could smell the air during a downpour. The scene where Anton gives Vera the first flower is touching and sincere! In my opinion, you do a great job of conveying the feelings and mood of the main character, which makes her feel like a real person to the reader. Thank you for the interesting continuation!
- angelnik13.04.2021, 20:25
An interesting continuation! In my opinion, there’s nothing unnecessary—just a journey through the plot, and that’s great! The village where the main character arrives is vividly drawn in my imagination. The news about the great-grandmother immediately creates a sense of mystery and caution, hinting that mystical events are inevitable. The image of the mysterious woman Sofia is intriguing; something tells me she might turn out to be a negative character, though of course, I could be wrong. The cat Zephyr is very clearly imagined and, in my opinion, is a wonderful participant in the story. While reading the book, it doesn’t feel like a fairy tale; as a reader, I believe in the events that are happening. The guy Vera meets in the village seems like a positive character, at least at first glance. For now, I’ve stopped at the moment where Vera is about to visit the forest house for the second time. Overall, there’s a feeling that something is brewing, one way or another. I’m eager to keep reading and, together with the main character, uncover the veil of mysteries. Thank you for the captivating plot!
- angelnik11.04.2021, 21:52
I started reading your story, and I really liked the beginning! It reads easily and immediately immerses me in the plot. In my opinion, you do a great job of conveying the inner world and emotions that the main character experiences to the reader. Moreover, the theme is truly important. Vira comes across as a kind person, despite not being the typical quiet, gray mouse. She can stand up for herself, and there’s a genuine sincerity in her. The character feels like a real person from our present day, someone who inspires trust and a desire to empathize with her feelings and concerns. From the description of Elvira, I perfectly understand Vira’s attitude. If there were an ordinary, empathetic, and decent woman by Dmytro’s side, I’m sure the relationship between the daughter and the future mother would have turned out completely different. So far, I’ve only read the first three chapters, but I read them not out of obligation, but because the story really draws me in effortlessly! I’ll continue reading whenever possible and share my impressions. Thank you for the interesting plot!
- kristina-asecka03.04.2021, 16:00
Cats indeed brought us together, and I read your book. I immediately noticed that you portrayed Vera beautifully, avoiding clichés and not making her an ideal girl with a perfect character and good looks. The character feels alive. I liked how you subtly touched on the topic of bullying; I wish there was less cruelty in the real world. I'm glad the heroine accepted her destiny and chose the light side. A special thanks for Zefir, he's my love. Thank you for an interesting story!