olga-lein

14.02.2026, 15:08

What an incredible book! I'm not sure if you'll read my comment, but it's just fire from the first pages, like any other of your books!❤️ Thank you, dear❤️

svetlana-tkac

06.12.2025, 11:54

Interesting, the plot is intriguing

steisi-veister

08.11.2024, 15:32

The book is very interesting))) The plot twists are heart-stopping))) You're doing great, mistakes can be dealt with, but it takes time, as I get such remarks myself))

ksiu-badbAuthor

08.11.2024, 20:40

Stacey Vester, thank you for the support) I try to fight the mistakes, but especially when I write on the go, I might miss some.

anastasiia-iasna

23.09.2024, 13:04

Not a bad story, but it's more geared towards girls aged 16-18. It feels like the author hasn't been writing books for very long. The main characters are not fully developed as personalities. There’s a lack of depth in emotions and well-thought-out plot twists.

ksiu-badbAuthor

23.09.2024, 13:38

Anastasia Yasna, this is the first book of the trilogy, so I think the characters will be revealed more in the future. Thank you for your comment, it helps me become better.

dijez-algo

18.09.2024, 15:31

Just started reading. Noticed a mistake - "неначе" should be written as one word. Third paragraph from the bottom on the first page.

ksiu-badbAuthor

18.09.2024, 15:40

Iryna Zastavna, there are a few mistakes because some chapters were written on the go, etc. I might have missed something. Thank you for pointing it out, but unfortunately, I can't edit it since the book is commercial.

alina-maslei

18.08.2024, 23:16

Will there be a continuation of the book?

ksiu-badbAuthor

19.08.2024, 19:04

Alina Maslei, it updates every day)

ksiu-badbAuthor

17.08.2024, 17:10

Access to the book has been restored!

vika-luckianchuck

15.08.2024, 08:58

Is there anywhere else I can read this book? I can’t stand waiting for the whole book to be available, and not just 12 chapters...

ksiu-badbAuthor

15.08.2024, 10:40

Vika Luckianchuck, good morning. Unfortunately, it’s only here. Tech support promises to resolve this issue by the end of the week.

vika-luckianchuck

12.08.2024, 23:47

How can I open the entire book, not just a fragment? I can't see anything beyond chapter 12... and the second book is already out... is that the continuation???

ksiu-badbAuthor

12.08.2024, 23:56

Vika Luckianchuck, the second part is just a prologue) Due to some technical nuances, the book is under moderation, in 1-2 days the full text will be available (with additional chapters). The second part will not be published until then.

alina-kostyk

12.08.2024, 00:26

I wish the technical issues would end soon, I can't sleep, waiting for the continuation)

ksiu-badbAuthor

12.08.2024, 13:21

Alina Kostyk, I hope this gets resolved quickly)

vika-luckianchuck

10.08.2024, 17:54

Will there be more than 12 chapters???

ksiu-badbAuthor

10.08.2024, 20:06

Vika Luckianchuck, yes, much better) part of it is under moderation)

iuliia-podcas

10.08.2024, 00:07

Is that all???? I don't agree with you((( please I urgently need the continuation((((( I'm really waiting?

ksiu-badbAuthor

10.08.2024, 00:35

Yulia Podchas, If you have read the additional chapters) then tomorrow the first chapter of part 2 will be out)

alina-liaxivnenko

06.08.2024, 21:34

I liked the book, I want to read the whole thing.

ksiu-badbAuthor

06.08.2024, 22:30

Alina Lyakhivnenko, I hope tomorrow we will resolve the technical issues and you will have that opportunity)

ksiu-badbAuthor

06.08.2024, 19:51

The continuation of the book is coming! The book is not finished! Some technical issues.

iuliia-podcas

06.08.2024, 14:20

So, that's the end?

ksiu-badbAuthor

06.08.2024, 15:50

Yulia Podchas, it's not the end, there was a technical glitch (if everything is fine in the evening, there will be a continuation).