Abstract of the book "Fracture"
After a great catastrophe, their world has shrunk to the Dome. Here everything is perfect: the air is clean, order is flawless, and every day is ruled by the system’s regulations. But sometimes cracks appear between these rules. And through them, a truth begins to seep—one no one was ever meant to see. Arden, Lyra, and Kai are just three among hundreds. They should be preparing for their “Graduation,” but instead they discover traces of something that should not exist in their world: system failures, distorted records, shadows behind the glass. The deeper they search for answers, the more it seems that reality itself is a trap—carefully constructed by someone unseen. And when the system turns against them, one question becomes impossible to ignore: is the world they live in truly safe?
27 comments
dronoslav-zavalnii10.02.2026, 13:14Hello. It turned out great. You took the overused theme of "closed dome + total control" and didn’t just retell the clichés, but made it atmospheric, tense, and with solid psychological depth. Arden, Lyra, and Kai feel alive, not like cardboard characters; their doubts and fear are genuinely palpable. I especially liked how you showed that the system isn’t just "evil," but rather soullessly efficient, which makes it even creepier. I’ve subscribed. I’d appreciate a subscription in return.
tetiana-kostyshyn06.02.2026, 14:47I couldn't tear myself away from the book until I finished reading it. It has everything a book needs. I just really want a continuation!!! What awaits them on Earth...? And will they find their place and home...? But most importantly, the realization comes that the time is approaching when either people will control AI, or AI will control people...
aleks-korn06.02.2026, 19:32Tetiana Kostyshyn, Yes, you are 100% right, it resonates with a movie I watched a long time ago where robots started ruling the world. I'm glad you liked the book! Thank you for staying with the characters until the end)
stas-volvac03.02.2026, 00:31A captivating and unsettling story that’s hard to put down. The atmosphere of the perfect world under the Dome gradually cracks, and the tension builds with every page. The idea of doubting reality itself and choosing between a safe illusion and a dangerous truth is very gripping. After reading, you keep thinking for a long time: what if our world isn’t what it seems either? I’ve supported and subscribed, and if you’re interested, I invite you to visit my page as well.
aleks-korn03.02.2026, 10:47Stas Volvach, Thank you for the feedback! I'm glad the book sparked so many thoughts.
viki-ian02.02.2026, 10:15Congratulations on the new release! ♥️ Like and subscription!
aleks-korn02.02.2026, 23:03Viki Yan, Thank you!) You can also check out another work that is currently being updated.)
svetlana-sagadina01.02.2026, 13:36Good book, but I would like a link to the continuation.
aleks-korn02.02.2026, 23:01Svetlana Sagadina, Thank you! Accepted)
ari-iagen28.01.2026, 00:42This is my first time reading sci-fi with artificial intelligence, and I’m amazed. It’s written very engagingly, with a well-thought-out plot and active development—there wasn’t a single moment where I got distracted by my own thoughts. I would have liked to get to know the characters better before the events started, because at some points I felt like I didn’t understand their logic and emotions, but with a bit more detailed backstory, that feeling would disappear, I think. I both love and hate open endings at the same time, because I’m so curious about what’s happening on Earth. Was the virus 100% a lie, or will they end up in another form of slavery? Who sent them into space, and for what real purpose? These questions will haunt me for a long time now, I need a sequel! Thank you to the author for an awesome story that I read practically in one breath. And inspiration for future works!
aleks-korn28.01.2026, 23:07Ari Yagen, Thank you for such a sincere and detailed feedback! The support of readers is the greatest reward for me, thank you!)
tetiana13.01.2026, 22:20Finished reading )) Really cool! To everyone who doubts - give it a chance, a lot will surprise you! The plot and details are very well thought out, and it's beautifully written. Inspiration to the author for new work! p.s. - And there's also a small wish for a continuation, like what happened to them 10 years later )
aleks-korn14.01.2026, 21:37Tetyana, I am endlessly grateful to you for supporting the characters! Thank you for your wishes)
olena-levickina10.01.2026, 03:22Sincerely, sincerely THANK YOU for your work!!! I started reading at 11:00 PM and finished at 3:20 AM. This is absolutely a masterpiece!!! The adventures keep you hooked until the end because you no longer know what to expect....
aleks-korn10.01.2026, 21:04Olena Levychkina, I’m very pleased! Thank you for such an inspiring review of the book! I invite you to check out my new book, which I’m currently working on. It combines romance and artificial intelligence, as I decided to try my hand at this mix of genres. If you enjoy such genres, I’d be happy to see you there!
- tetiana08.01.2026, 22:23
Very intense... even too much, you keep waiting for the main characters to get out of trouble, but they face new and more difficulties. But that's exactly why I keep reading. It still holds me.
aleks-korn09.01.2026, 13:55Tetyana, Thank you very much! Arden, Lyra, and Kai will move towards their goal until they achieve it!
- tetiana04.01.2026, 23:14
I’ve read a few chapters, it’s very interesting and well-written. I would even say it’s a breath of fresh air. I’ve been wanting to read something in this style for a long time.
aleks-korn06.01.2026, 16:48Tetyana, Thank you) See you in the next book!
tetiana-melnik05.01.2026, 13:21Hello! Captivating story! I had many associations with our events—both modern and historical. I'm very curious to know what’s happening on Earth) I’m looking forward to the continuation) I have one remark: the phrase "lost his mind" is a literal translation from Russian, like "can’t bear this hellish torment anymore")) In Ukrainian, you could say: "went off the rails," "went crazy," "lost it," or "crossed the line.")
aleks-korn05.01.2026, 20:17Tetyana Melnyk, Thank you for your feedback! I will make corrections) I'm currently working on another story, but I might decide to continue this one a bit later)
oleg04.01.2026, 17:35Very interesting
aleks-korn05.01.2026, 20:11Oleg, Thank you!
- irina-garina02.01.2026, 20:18
Sincere thanks to the Author! I read the book in one breath!
aleks-korn03.01.2026, 21:00Iryna Garyna, Thank you very much!
- ianakov-kirilo01.01.2026, 17:35
Chapter 2 intrigued me even more than the first one. I can't wait to read Chapter 3!
aleks-korn02.01.2026, 12:51Yanakiv Kyrylo, I'm sure the plot development will pleasantly surprise you!)
madam-bamba31.12.2025, 22:52A true pleasure to read! It's like an endless quest! You know how to keep the plot dynamic.
aleks-korn02.01.2026, 12:50Madam Bamba, Sincerely thank you!!
Fracture
About the book
After a great catastrophe, their world has shrunk to the Dome. Here everything is perfect: the air is clean, order is flawless, and every day is ruled by the system’s regulations. But sometimes cracks appear between these rules. And through them, a truth begins to seep—one no one was ever meant to see. Arden, Lyra, and Kai are just three among hundreds. They should be preparing for their “Graduation,” but instead they discover traces of something that should not exist in their world: system failures, distorted records, shadows behind the glass. The deeper they search for answers, the more it seems that reality itself is a trap—carefully constructed by someone unseen. And when the system turns against them, one question becomes impossible to ignore: is the world they live in truly safe?
27 comments
- dronoslav-zavalnii10.02.2026, 13:14
Hello. It turned out great. You took the overused theme of "closed dome + total control" and didn’t just retell the clichés, but made it atmospheric, tense, and with solid psychological depth. Arden, Lyra, and Kai feel alive, not like cardboard characters; their doubts and fear are genuinely palpable. I especially liked how you showed that the system isn’t just "evil," but rather soullessly efficient, which makes it even creepier. I’ve subscribed. I’d appreciate a subscription in return.
- tetiana-kostyshyn06.02.2026, 14:47
I couldn't tear myself away from the book until I finished reading it. It has everything a book needs. I just really want a continuation!!! What awaits them on Earth...? And will they find their place and home...? But most importantly, the realization comes that the time is approaching when either people will control AI, or AI will control people...
aleks-korn06.02.2026, 19:32Tetiana Kostyshyn, Yes, you are 100% right, it resonates with a movie I watched a long time ago where robots started ruling the world. I'm glad you liked the book! Thank you for staying with the characters until the end)
- stas-volvac03.02.2026, 00:31
A captivating and unsettling story that’s hard to put down. The atmosphere of the perfect world under the Dome gradually cracks, and the tension builds with every page. The idea of doubting reality itself and choosing between a safe illusion and a dangerous truth is very gripping. After reading, you keep thinking for a long time: what if our world isn’t what it seems either? I’ve supported and subscribed, and if you’re interested, I invite you to visit my page as well.
aleks-korn03.02.2026, 10:47Stas Volvach, Thank you for the feedback! I'm glad the book sparked so many thoughts.
- viki-ian02.02.2026, 10:15
Congratulations on the new release! ♥️ Like and subscription!
aleks-korn02.02.2026, 23:03Viki Yan, Thank you!) You can also check out another work that is currently being updated.)
- svetlana-sagadina01.02.2026, 13:36
Good book, but I would like a link to the continuation.
aleks-korn02.02.2026, 23:01Svetlana Sagadina, Thank you! Accepted)
- ari-iagen28.01.2026, 00:42
This is my first time reading sci-fi with artificial intelligence, and I’m amazed. It’s written very engagingly, with a well-thought-out plot and active development—there wasn’t a single moment where I got distracted by my own thoughts. I would have liked to get to know the characters better before the events started, because at some points I felt like I didn’t understand their logic and emotions, but with a bit more detailed backstory, that feeling would disappear, I think. I both love and hate open endings at the same time, because I’m so curious about what’s happening on Earth. Was the virus 100% a lie, or will they end up in another form of slavery? Who sent them into space, and for what real purpose? These questions will haunt me for a long time now, I need a sequel! Thank you to the author for an awesome story that I read practically in one breath. And inspiration for future works!
aleks-korn28.01.2026, 23:07Ari Yagen, Thank you for such a sincere and detailed feedback! The support of readers is the greatest reward for me, thank you!)
- tetiana13.01.2026, 22:20
Finished reading )) Really cool! To everyone who doubts - give it a chance, a lot will surprise you! The plot and details are very well thought out, and it's beautifully written. Inspiration to the author for new work! p.s. - And there's also a small wish for a continuation, like what happened to them 10 years later )
aleks-korn14.01.2026, 21:37Tetyana, I am endlessly grateful to you for supporting the characters! Thank you for your wishes)
- olena-levickina10.01.2026, 03:22
Sincerely, sincerely THANK YOU for your work!!! I started reading at 11:00 PM and finished at 3:20 AM. This is absolutely a masterpiece!!! The adventures keep you hooked until the end because you no longer know what to expect....
aleks-korn10.01.2026, 21:04Olena Levychkina, I’m very pleased! Thank you for such an inspiring review of the book! I invite you to check out my new book, which I’m currently working on. It combines romance and artificial intelligence, as I decided to try my hand at this mix of genres. If you enjoy such genres, I’d be happy to see you there!
- tetiana08.01.2026, 22:23
Very intense... even too much, you keep waiting for the main characters to get out of trouble, but they face new and more difficulties. But that's exactly why I keep reading. It still holds me.
aleks-korn09.01.2026, 13:55Tetyana, Thank you very much! Arden, Lyra, and Kai will move towards their goal until they achieve it!
- tetiana04.01.2026, 23:14
I’ve read a few chapters, it’s very interesting and well-written. I would even say it’s a breath of fresh air. I’ve been wanting to read something in this style for a long time.
aleks-korn06.01.2026, 16:48Tetyana, Thank you) See you in the next book!
- tetiana-melnik05.01.2026, 13:21
Hello! Captivating story! I had many associations with our events—both modern and historical. I'm very curious to know what’s happening on Earth) I’m looking forward to the continuation) I have one remark: the phrase "lost his mind" is a literal translation from Russian, like "can’t bear this hellish torment anymore")) In Ukrainian, you could say: "went off the rails," "went crazy," "lost it," or "crossed the line.")
aleks-korn05.01.2026, 20:17Tetyana Melnyk, Thank you for your feedback! I will make corrections) I'm currently working on another story, but I might decide to continue this one a bit later)
- oleg04.01.2026, 17:35
Very interesting
aleks-korn05.01.2026, 20:11Oleg, Thank you!
- irina-garina02.01.2026, 20:18
Sincere thanks to the Author! I read the book in one breath!
aleks-korn03.01.2026, 21:00Iryna Garyna, Thank you very much!
- ianakov-kirilo01.01.2026, 17:35
Chapter 2 intrigued me even more than the first one. I can't wait to read Chapter 3!
aleks-korn02.01.2026, 12:51Yanakiv Kyrylo, I'm sure the plot development will pleasantly surprise you!)
- madam-bamba31.12.2025, 22:52
A true pleasure to read! It's like an endless quest! You know how to keep the plot dynamic.
aleks-korn02.01.2026, 12:50Madam Bamba, Sincerely thank you!!