Abstract of the book "Fated to Trouble"
What do you do when your life is a magnet for trouble? Fix it, obviously. And maybe, just maybe, accidentally fall in love with the most powerful mage in the land. Oh, and before you judge, he's the one who proposed! (Sort of)
69 comments
marina-bot03.01.2026, 09:29I read it once, but I forgot some parts. It was interesting to refresh my memory and sometimes have a laugh.
sofiia-viterec03.01.2026, 17:13Marina Bot, I was glad to meet again on the pages)) I invite you to come back❤️ I sometimes return to this story myself to relax a bit)
olly-ka08.05.2024, 13:18It's a bit disappointing when you come across another moment that feels like something should have happened before it, but nope. And the phrase "my humble self" is used too often. But, overall, there's a chance I'll finish reading it)
sofiia-viterec08.05.2024, 20:05Olly Ka, I agree - I could have stretched this into several books, but I wanted to tell everything at once)) In "Queen Against Her Will," I'm already making amends))
liudasik-tkacenko01.02.2024, 11:26And didn't Daris know that he was corresponding with Rosalie at all??? And not with Dana? Or did the younger sister not write her name? Some kind of déjà vu, not a book, it feels like I've read something similar before.
sofiia-viterec01.02.2024, 14:41Lyudasyk Tkachenko, Well, actually, it wasn’t Daris who was corresponding with Rosali, but his friend)) And they both decided not to clarify who was writing to whom) It wasn’t the main thing for them. After all, the conversation itself warmed the soul, and until the arrival of the commission, the girl pushed aside her feelings, believing that it wasn’t worth crossing that, let’s say, "stage") Maybe it’s really déjà vu, since the book is almost two years old, and you might have come across it before))) But I can assure you that this is entirely my own imagination and humor, with which I tried to cheer us up in difficult times)
olesia28.01.2024, 09:45So, she broke the rules again and sent a letter by magic even after the commission arrived?
sofiia-viterec28.01.2024, 10:01Olesya, well, this was already with the permission of the lady from the commission and under their supervision) A small exception to the rules)
galina-malanii16.11.2023, 21:26captivating and emotional
sofiia-viterec16.11.2023, 21:53Halyna Malaniy, Thank you very much❤️
inna-turianska16.01.2023, 23:47Congratulations on the completion)), it's great that the kingdoms have reconciled and even united)) It's nice that everyone is happy and still loves each other. Inspiration for new books)
inna-turianska08.11.2023, 23:49Sofia Viterets, ❤❤
ida-noks27.10.2023, 21:24On one hand, it's an interesting concept. On the other hand, my brain was melting while trying to understand what was happening. Thank you for your work, but I couldn't finish reading it.
sofiia-viterec08.11.2023, 23:45Anna, Sorry for only noticing your reply now) Thank you very much for your response))) I will definitely take this into account when writing future stories!))) And also, thank you sincerely for the kind words)))
nina-vivtonenko03.08.2023, 22:11You know, the book is wonderful, written lightly and sincerely :) It evokes a variety of emotions. It reads quickly and with pleasure :) Thank you sincerely :)
sofiia-viterec03.08.2023, 23:35Nina Vivtonenko, I am very grateful to you as well❤️❤️❤️
- nina-vivtonenko03.08.2023, 22:09
It's unclear what kind of relationship exists between Daris and Dayana. Umm, and just like that, she becomes a queen without an announcement or coronation? Daris accused her of some kind of magical imprints. What even is that? And why didn’t he sort out this issue? That’s also unclear. Why didn’t he warn her that he was going to make her queen? And why were they able to kidnap her, and what happened to her brother and the guards? Ahhh, I didn’t understand anything about the ritual! The first time it was done with a girl (to save her), the second time there were three of them (to pass the throne or something, but what does Daya have to do with it?), the third time there were two (what were they doing and why?). What kind of ritual is this anyway??? Umm... become friends with Neyra? Ugh... out of boredom, she just became friends... If the husband doesn’t tell her anything, she can find out from a mistress. But how can she befriend this traitor who so easily accepts her husband’s decisions about conquest and blackmail? And no one even told Dayana about the prophecies, and they didn’t come up with the name themselves—it was decided for them. Um... and didn’t she correspond with Bel? Wow, some friend, not communicating for over 3 years... Um... then I didn’t understand this marriage thing. If the sister was corresponding with a friend, then what does Dar have to do with it?
sofiia-viterec03.08.2023, 23:33Nina Vivtonenko, Neyra kept her distance from everything related to ruling. Her husband didn’t want her to see his cruelty, so he didn’t show or tell her many things. And for Dayana to befriend someone even under such circumstances—why not))) She has unconventional thinking))) Prophecies weren’t something Dayana believed in. That’s more of Daris’s thing. Medinka is a name the parents came up with themselves. It’s close in meaning to “child of prophecy.” And it’s also very beautiful and suits their family well) They didn’t correspond with Bel because the academy rules forbid communication with the outside world. And Bel, unlike Dayana, wasn’t expelled from the academy. The sister thought she was corresponding with Daris, but in reality, only the magical address matched. She just assumed it was Daris, so the letter was sent in his name, and he showed up to Dayana after the commission arrived. Only later did Rosalia find out who she was actually communicating with, although from the very first seconds of talking to Daris, she realized it wasn’t him. That’s all for now) If there are any other questions, I’ll be happy to answer)))
- nina-vivtonenko03.08.2023, 18:41
Um... so the sister knows it's a fake marriage, so why did they sleep together? Some moments are missing. The dragon guy isn't fully revealed, like who he is. What about the attackers, who are they and where did they come from? Did the girl talk to the man about the nightmares she has, about the beloved he couldn't let go of, where he was running off to, why he hid that he’s the king's brother, why he married her so hastily? Why was he thinking about someone else at his own wedding? It was supposed to be a fake marriage, so why did he change his mind? Did the girl only fall in love with the man but couldn’t talk to him? It’s still unclear if she told him about the dragon (I’ve read up to chapter 30), and it feels like a lot of moments are just skipped :( I hope there will be at least one answer to these questions later on.
nina-vivtonenko03.08.2023, 23:29Sofia Viterets, thank you for the answers, now it's clearer :)
buiana-irrai23.06.2023, 11:54Phew! Finished reading) That was quick! An interesting story with unique authorial imagination. Quite a lot of adventures happened to the main character, but I'm glad the ending turned out... so sweet))) Also, for some reason, I thought that the heroes' children would be cheerful troublemakers too, so I'm surprised by the result along with their mom)))
sofiia-viterec23.06.2023, 13:36Buyana Irray, Well, what can you do, takes after daddy))) And he’s clearly calmer than the restless mommy))) Thank you so much for such warm words❤️❤️❤️
tatiana-tkacenko22.06.2023, 19:19'. P.
sofiia-viterec22.06.2023, 23:14Tatiana Tkachenko, ❤️
lada-astra05.06.2023, 18:37Hello from mutual reading)) Today, I’ve been periodically returning to your book all day. For me, that’s already a big plus for the story. When you don’t notice how the chapters fly by and you completely immerse yourself in a fascinating, well-crafted world. The first thing I want to highlight as a positive is the descriptions. This is a sore spot for me)) And I consider it a remarkable skill of the author when they can present descriptions of anything in such an interesting and effortless way. Your descriptions draw me in and resonate very atmospherically in the reader’s imagination. The second thing is the main character herself—from the very first lines, you understand that she has a complex personality. And quite a troublemaker)) Personally, I can see why she was kicked out of the academy; it’s readable between the lines))) she must have really annoyed everyone there)) I also want to note the unusual magical world. I’ve never come across this kind of limitation before. Usually, magic solves everything everywhere, but in your story, magic feels more grounded and even realistic because when there are clear rules, it’s easier to believe in the reality of what’s written. I’ll gladly continue reading your story and wish you inspiration to keep creating such unique and interesting books)))
sofiia-viterec05.06.2023, 19:33Lada Astra, Oh, thank you sincerely❤️❤️❤️ It's incredibly nice to read such words from a colleague))))
alena-elonova03.04.2023, 15:05Thank you! I found a small mistake: chapter 10 "I will give in to feelings"
sofiia-viterec03.04.2023, 17:08Alena Elonova, And I didn’t even notice) So much slips by) Thank you))) I was just planning a major edit of the entire book soon)
oksana-kazimirova29.03.2023, 21:39Nice! Wishing you success and peace.
sofiia-viterec29.03.2023, 22:45Oksana Kazymyrova, Sincerely thank you❤️
Fated to Trouble
About the book
What do you do when your life is a magnet for trouble? Fix it, obviously. And maybe, just maybe, accidentally fall in love with the most powerful mage in the land. Oh, and before you judge, he's the one who proposed! (Sort of)
69 comments
- marina-bot03.01.2026, 09:29
I read it once, but I forgot some parts. It was interesting to refresh my memory and sometimes have a laugh.
sofiia-viterec03.01.2026, 17:13Marina Bot, I was glad to meet again on the pages)) I invite you to come back❤️ I sometimes return to this story myself to relax a bit)
- olly-ka08.05.2024, 13:18
It's a bit disappointing when you come across another moment that feels like something should have happened before it, but nope. And the phrase "my humble self" is used too often. But, overall, there's a chance I'll finish reading it)
sofiia-viterec08.05.2024, 20:05Olly Ka, I agree - I could have stretched this into several books, but I wanted to tell everything at once)) In "Queen Against Her Will," I'm already making amends))
- liudasik-tkacenko01.02.2024, 11:26
And didn't Daris know that he was corresponding with Rosalie at all??? And not with Dana? Or did the younger sister not write her name? Some kind of déjà vu, not a book, it feels like I've read something similar before.
sofiia-viterec01.02.2024, 14:41Lyudasyk Tkachenko, Well, actually, it wasn’t Daris who was corresponding with Rosali, but his friend)) And they both decided not to clarify who was writing to whom) It wasn’t the main thing for them. After all, the conversation itself warmed the soul, and until the arrival of the commission, the girl pushed aside her feelings, believing that it wasn’t worth crossing that, let’s say, "stage") Maybe it’s really déjà vu, since the book is almost two years old, and you might have come across it before))) But I can assure you that this is entirely my own imagination and humor, with which I tried to cheer us up in difficult times)
- olesia28.01.2024, 09:45
So, she broke the rules again and sent a letter by magic even after the commission arrived?
sofiia-viterec28.01.2024, 10:01Olesya, well, this was already with the permission of the lady from the commission and under their supervision) A small exception to the rules)
- galina-malanii16.11.2023, 21:26
captivating and emotional
sofiia-viterec16.11.2023, 21:53Halyna Malaniy, Thank you very much❤️
- inna-turianska16.01.2023, 23:47
Congratulations on the completion)), it's great that the kingdoms have reconciled and even united)) It's nice that everyone is happy and still loves each other. Inspiration for new books)
inna-turianska08.11.2023, 23:49Sofia Viterets, ❤❤
- ida-noks27.10.2023, 21:24
On one hand, it's an interesting concept. On the other hand, my brain was melting while trying to understand what was happening. Thank you for your work, but I couldn't finish reading it.
sofiia-viterec08.11.2023, 23:45Anna, Sorry for only noticing your reply now) Thank you very much for your response))) I will definitely take this into account when writing future stories!))) And also, thank you sincerely for the kind words)))
- nina-vivtonenko03.08.2023, 22:11
You know, the book is wonderful, written lightly and sincerely :) It evokes a variety of emotions. It reads quickly and with pleasure :) Thank you sincerely :)
sofiia-viterec03.08.2023, 23:35Nina Vivtonenko, I am very grateful to you as well❤️❤️❤️
- nina-vivtonenko03.08.2023, 22:09
It's unclear what kind of relationship exists between Daris and Dayana. Umm, and just like that, she becomes a queen without an announcement or coronation? Daris accused her of some kind of magical imprints. What even is that? And why didn’t he sort out this issue? That’s also unclear. Why didn’t he warn her that he was going to make her queen? And why were they able to kidnap her, and what happened to her brother and the guards? Ahhh, I didn’t understand anything about the ritual! The first time it was done with a girl (to save her), the second time there were three of them (to pass the throne or something, but what does Daya have to do with it?), the third time there were two (what were they doing and why?). What kind of ritual is this anyway??? Umm... become friends with Neyra? Ugh... out of boredom, she just became friends... If the husband doesn’t tell her anything, she can find out from a mistress. But how can she befriend this traitor who so easily accepts her husband’s decisions about conquest and blackmail? And no one even told Dayana about the prophecies, and they didn’t come up with the name themselves—it was decided for them. Um... and didn’t she correspond with Bel? Wow, some friend, not communicating for over 3 years... Um... then I didn’t understand this marriage thing. If the sister was corresponding with a friend, then what does Dar have to do with it?
sofiia-viterec03.08.2023, 23:33Nina Vivtonenko, Neyra kept her distance from everything related to ruling. Her husband didn’t want her to see his cruelty, so he didn’t show or tell her many things. And for Dayana to befriend someone even under such circumstances—why not))) She has unconventional thinking))) Prophecies weren’t something Dayana believed in. That’s more of Daris’s thing. Medinka is a name the parents came up with themselves. It’s close in meaning to “child of prophecy.” And it’s also very beautiful and suits their family well) They didn’t correspond with Bel because the academy rules forbid communication with the outside world. And Bel, unlike Dayana, wasn’t expelled from the academy. The sister thought she was corresponding with Daris, but in reality, only the magical address matched. She just assumed it was Daris, so the letter was sent in his name, and he showed up to Dayana after the commission arrived. Only later did Rosalia find out who she was actually communicating with, although from the very first seconds of talking to Daris, she realized it wasn’t him. That’s all for now) If there are any other questions, I’ll be happy to answer)))
- nina-vivtonenko03.08.2023, 18:41
Um... so the sister knows it's a fake marriage, so why did they sleep together? Some moments are missing. The dragon guy isn't fully revealed, like who he is. What about the attackers, who are they and where did they come from? Did the girl talk to the man about the nightmares she has, about the beloved he couldn't let go of, where he was running off to, why he hid that he’s the king's brother, why he married her so hastily? Why was he thinking about someone else at his own wedding? It was supposed to be a fake marriage, so why did he change his mind? Did the girl only fall in love with the man but couldn’t talk to him? It’s still unclear if she told him about the dragon (I’ve read up to chapter 30), and it feels like a lot of moments are just skipped :( I hope there will be at least one answer to these questions later on.
nina-vivtonenko03.08.2023, 23:29Sofia Viterets, thank you for the answers, now it's clearer :)
- buiana-irrai23.06.2023, 11:54
Phew! Finished reading) That was quick! An interesting story with unique authorial imagination. Quite a lot of adventures happened to the main character, but I'm glad the ending turned out... so sweet))) Also, for some reason, I thought that the heroes' children would be cheerful troublemakers too, so I'm surprised by the result along with their mom)))
sofiia-viterec23.06.2023, 13:36Buyana Irray, Well, what can you do, takes after daddy))) And he’s clearly calmer than the restless mommy))) Thank you so much for such warm words❤️❤️❤️
- tatiana-tkacenko22.06.2023, 19:19
'. P.
sofiia-viterec22.06.2023, 23:14Tatiana Tkachenko, ❤️
- lada-astra05.06.2023, 18:37
Hello from mutual reading)) Today, I’ve been periodically returning to your book all day. For me, that’s already a big plus for the story. When you don’t notice how the chapters fly by and you completely immerse yourself in a fascinating, well-crafted world. The first thing I want to highlight as a positive is the descriptions. This is a sore spot for me)) And I consider it a remarkable skill of the author when they can present descriptions of anything in such an interesting and effortless way. Your descriptions draw me in and resonate very atmospherically in the reader’s imagination. The second thing is the main character herself—from the very first lines, you understand that she has a complex personality. And quite a troublemaker)) Personally, I can see why she was kicked out of the academy; it’s readable between the lines))) she must have really annoyed everyone there)) I also want to note the unusual magical world. I’ve never come across this kind of limitation before. Usually, magic solves everything everywhere, but in your story, magic feels more grounded and even realistic because when there are clear rules, it’s easier to believe in the reality of what’s written. I’ll gladly continue reading your story and wish you inspiration to keep creating such unique and interesting books)))
sofiia-viterec05.06.2023, 19:33Lada Astra, Oh, thank you sincerely❤️❤️❤️ It's incredibly nice to read such words from a colleague))))
- alena-elonova03.04.2023, 15:05
Thank you! I found a small mistake: chapter 10 "I will give in to feelings"
sofiia-viterec03.04.2023, 17:08Alena Elonova, And I didn’t even notice) So much slips by) Thank you))) I was just planning a major edit of the entire book soon)
- oksana-kazimirova29.03.2023, 21:39
Nice! Wishing you success and peace.
sofiia-viterec29.03.2023, 22:45Oksana Kazymyrova, Sincerely thank you❤️