liubava-oliinik

15.03.2026, 13:30

Congratulations on finishing the book

bogdana-reiderAuthor

15.03.2026, 15:10

Lyubava Oliynyk, Thank you

natalia

07.11.2025, 11:58

Wonderful book! So many emotions. So many feelings! Dynamics, excitement, depth! Thank you! This book is completely different from the ones I’ve read before! Sincerely thank you for your creativity!

bogdana-reiderAuthor

07.11.2025, 12:02

Natalia, Thank you

vislon-veimer

21.08.2025, 13:42

An absolutely cinematic episode. The tension holds until the very last line—everything breathes darkness, rain, threat, but also hope. The story of Zak and Karina is shown from two perspectives, both characters are vivid, alive, acting not like template heroes, but like real people—intelligent, strong-willed, scared, but unbroken. Eric's introduction—cold, repulsive, charismatic antagonist—perfectly amplifies the drama. And the moment with Astar is the explosion the reader has been waiting for from the very beginning. This is a scene, this is a blow, this is emotion. Very powerful.

vislon-veimer

14.08.2025, 16:40

The scene completely captivates. It is filled with tension, a well-structured rhythm, and precise emotional focus. The atmosphere is dark, like a night storm—rain, screams, stone, betrayal. Zak acts like a true shadow hero—every move is calculated, his logic of actions clear, without unnecessary pathos. Karin is emotionally exposed, vulnerable, but not broken. Erik is a repulsively cold antagonist; his appearance creates a sharp sense of threat. Astar is thunder that cuts through the sky, like an answer to a prayer. The entire scene is an example of well-directed tension buildup with a powerful final explosion. Written strongly.

vislon-veimer

29.07.2025, 10:42

Oh, this scene... It breathes with a silence that holds an entire Universe. The weary tenderness of Artar, the quiet stubbornness of Karin, embraces that weigh more than hundreds of solemn vows. Here is Karin sitting on the floor — like a child still, but in his posture, you can already feel that core, born in moments of great choice. And Artar... His fingers glide through Karin’s hair so carefully, as if touching the scars on his own heart. His voice — soft, but in every word, there is a depth of experience that can only be gained through loss. When he says that a true rider is more than a warrior, those words carry everything: a fatherly hope, fear for the child, and the acknowledgment that the sky always claims its debts. But at the same time, there is also faith in Karin, a faith that turns fear into a shield, not chains. And then this small detail — when Karin, as if by accident, boldly mentions Pres — it’s so alive, so teasing and warm. In that phrase lies his childish protest against the overly serious world of adults. And at the same time, it’s his way of telling Artar: “I know you’re my dragon, but I won’t let you become my shadow. I want you to be my friend, not my jailer.”

vislon-veimer

21.07.2025, 16:49

I don’t know where to start because this chapter knocked the ground out from under me. When I read the first paragraphs, my heart melted: Karin, berries, a sunlit forest, children’s laughter—such rare happiness in this harsh world. And perhaps that’s why it hurt so much when everything changed so abruptly. The author captured that moment when nature freezes perfectly. When every cell in your body feels that something is wrong. I literally felt the forest breathing—and how it stopped breathing. The appearance of the hunters isn’t just danger. It’s an invasion of a cruel world into a space of innocence. They aren’t just antagonists—they are those who trade in lives. And in this context, Karin’s heroic gesture—small, yet so immense—brings tears to my eyes. He’s scared, but he stands. He doesn’t hide. He doesn’t run. Because he was taught to be worthy. Taught by Zak. And then comes the psychological storm that tears the soul apart. The scene with Artar… I could barely breathe. The pain awakening in Alpha is conveyed so physically that I felt my hands trembling. His transformation isn’t just turning into a dragon; it’s a metaphor for losing control, when anger consumes you, and love becomes the driving force of destruction.

bogdana-reiderAuthor

21.07.2025, 17:49

Vislon Veymer, thank you

dijez-algo

16.07.2025, 11:38

Oh, this is a series. Which book is the first one? Are they independent?

dijez-algo

16.07.2025, 19:46

Bogdana reider, Understood)

dijez-algo

16.07.2025, 11:35

Something interesting)) Added to my library - will wait for the completion

vislon-veimer

03.06.2025, 11:34

Oh, how unexpectedly tender the blade of this chapter turned out to be. "Instinct or Bond" is like a drop of ink in silver water: something unsettling, something pure, something that dissolves but does not disappear. This is not just a page — it is a door that opens on its own, as if under Astar's step. The work does not retreat into the shadow of banality — on the contrary, it carefully leads the reader to where a predatory gaze meets the invisible threads of fate. The dialogue between the brothers... it’s not about words, but about scars. In every line, you hear not just the essence, but the sediment of experience, the echo of a shared past, and the silence of the unspoken. Artar and Astar are not just characters, but two embodiments of will and doubt. One is silent because he believes. The other speaks because he cannot help but burn. Zak, though... Oh, Zak. He is like water that remembers who it was as steam. His awakening is not an act of pride, but a return. Not with triumph, but with silence. For the first time in a long while, a character from exile returns not to someone, but to himself. And that is why the mirror scene is the purest, most powerful moment of the chapter. There is no drama there — only truth. And truth, when spoken without fear, sounds louder than a scream.

bogdana-reiderAuthor

03.06.2025, 11:48

Vislon Veymer, Thank you

sergiel-krael

31.05.2025, 19:50

Added to the library. Wishing you success in writing.

bogdana-reiderAuthor

01.06.2025, 08:53

Serhiel Krael, I hope you like it

anastella-kalliadi

21.05.2025, 19:21

✨ Congratulations on the new release! May this book find its grateful reader. Wishing you success and inspiration!

bogdana-reiderAuthor

21.05.2025, 20:03

Anastella Calliadi, Thank you

ruslan-barkalov

21.05.2025, 12:37

Congratulations on the new release!