liubov-kozlova

17.09.2025, 14:11

I felt that the relationships between dominants and riders reminded me of veiled abusive relationships. And it's not about trust. It's about the impossibility of free choice. It's good that they managed to understand each other. But I wouldn't want such a choice. Regarding the text. In every chapter, the same episodes are repeated twice in a row. At first, I even thought I had gone back. But this happens in almost all chapters and not just once. Maybe it's some kind of artistic technique, but somehow it interferes with reading. The transformation of a man into a woman during pregnancy is something else. I think our men wouldn't like it. Your spectrum of fantasy is wide. I will read your other works. I'm curious to see what else you will come up with. Honestly, I don't like Slash. Sorry, but I don't accept such relationships. Although I don't judge. Everyone has the right to a free, conscious choice. Wishing you success in your creativity. ❤️

liubov-kozlova

17.09.2025, 20:44

Bogdana reider, It's never too late to learn something new, and perhaps something useful. Wishing you success.❤️

vislon-veimer

16.03.2025, 10:33

This scene literally vibrates with tension and emotions — it masterfully showcases the complex game between the characters, where every move, every word carries weight. Daniela’s development is particularly striking. Her internal conflict — between the desire for freedom and the inevitable pull toward Haron — wonderfully conveys the depth of her character. She’s not just stubborn or brave; she’s learning, adapting, and starting to play by new rules. Her request to Karin is not only a challenge to Haron but also a challenge to herself: she decides to become not a subordinate, but an equal in this struggle. Haron, in turn, impresses with his restrained fury. Accustomed to controlling everything and everyone, he suddenly loses that control — and it drives him to madness, though outwardly he remains unshaken. His words "She will return" are not just confidence; they’re almost a prayer. He can’t force her to stay, but he’s not ready to lose her either. I also want to highlight Karin — his role as a master of cunning adds a special flavor to this story. He’s not just a father who wants to protect his daughter; he sees her potential and teaches her to play as an equal. His game at dinner is subtle manipulation, where he seems to do nothing, yet everyone understands: he’s in control of the situation.

bogdana-reiderAuthor

16.03.2025, 11:29

Vislon Veymer, Thank you

vislon-veimer

17.02.2025, 10:16

This story is filled not only with magic and war but also with the struggle for personal dignity and the search for truth amidst tangled intrigues and bloody politics. Daniela is strong and stubborn, ready to fight for her beliefs, while Charon, though a ruler, cannot escape the influence of what he lost due to his pride. Their clash is not just a battle of two hearts; it is a deep exploration of how war and personal ambitions can overshadow even the strongest relationships. The game between them is not only a matter of power but also of passion, which was neglected due to arrogance and misunderstanding. Their relationship has become a brutal battlefield where every step could be the last. This is a story about choices that determine not only the fate of the characters but also the course of history. Can love, which was meant to be a true partnership, become their strength rather than their weakness in a world where everything burns in the battle for power? The answer to this question unfolds in their complex journey, full of pain, hope, and the fight for their place in this cruel world.

bogdana-reiderAuthor

17.02.2025, 14:21

Vislon Veymer, thank you for the annotation