yany-gatitos

02.04.2026, 22:57

The story was going well, but what the hell is up with writing stories where the man is old enough to be the father or grandfather? I don’t understand what the goal is with this. To romanticize or normalize a relationship that in reality would never work? Because come on, scientifically, that man only has a couple of shots left in his gun, and she’s in the prime of her youth. A 10 or even 12-year age difference is acceptable, but 30 is disgusting. The story is good, and I already bought it because I didn’t know about this detail. I’ll keep reading it, but please (this is for everyone who writes these kinds of stories), don’t promote these practices. It seems like a justification for those who marry underage girls in Middle Eastern countries. I’ve read other stories of yours and loved them, but this age difference bothers me, even if it’s just a story.

ibe-al-sharif

18.06.2025, 20:53

Ciarán is going to wait for Alice and Dom's baby

liia-tanAuthor

24.03.2026, 09:12

Anton Moskaluk, Endlessly grateful!♥️♥️♥️

ibe-al-sharif

18.06.2025, 21:16

Everything was done by their parents

anatolii-luzeneckiiAuthor

20.03.2026, 13:35

Vitaliy Irklienko, Wonderful

yeleny-vargas-de-romero

26.06.2025, 18:02

The best dark book by far. Fascinating.

iuliia-ignatova

07.03.2026, 00:08

Natalia Romashko, I disagree. You probably haven't read the other sequels. There's soul invested here.

elizabeth-oporto

25.06.2025, 14:23

I absolutely loved everything being peaceful between them with no wars for now, and a happy ending for the 3 of them.

olga-xristiiancukAuthor

05.03.2026, 17:28

Natalia Rusanova, It's still unclear what his motives are.

nereida-duran-salinas

20.06.2025, 00:27

That's right, Alice, you will prepare everything against the Nordic-Italian.

uliana-pasAuthor

02.03.2026, 21:40

Lesya, He is 32. As for the wife - her name is Leila. Other names are typos. I will correct them.

mariel-silva-c

14.02.2026, 17:17

Very good story, thank you for sharing it, and I'm continuing with the second part. Congratulations!

lucy-gomez

21.05.2025, 19:54

Oh, how cuteeee!!! Everyone tamed, starting with the owner haha

xristina-pogranicna

09.02.2026, 19:02

Iren Arli, thank you)

adriana-santiago

14.05.2025, 20:07

This girl doesn't understand that the baby needs to eat, there will be time for the rest later, I can't wait to see his girl in action.

oresta-matviicukAuthor

05.02.2026, 00:18

Iryna Skrypnyk, Thank you. This was incredibly motivating)

karina-ponce-alvarado

28.03.2025, 04:47

If I were Alice, I'd leave haha, so whimsical

anna-liashhenkoAuthor

06.01.2026, 21:57

Valyya Valyya, Thank you!

edilenny-reinoso

17.02.2025, 06:43

omg

valentina-brodskaAuthor

22.12.2025, 15:54

Natalia Farina, Thank you as well, such comments are truly inspiring! ❤️ I invite you to check out the new release❤️

evee-starling

13.12.2025, 21:39

Tus palabras tienen peso pero nunca se sienten pesadas. El ritmo, la emoción, los pequeños momentos humanos, todo es tan naturalmente real. Seguía pensando que esto se vería increíble en pantalla. Solo la atmósfera podría atrapar a cualquiera. Es el tipo de obra que podría traducirse maravillosamente a un medio visual.

roxana-alvarez-rodriguez

24.10.2025, 13:21

My favorite so far ??

edith-ramirez

21.10.2025, 14:50

Stop with the crazy toxic characters, I loved them, as always. You keep getting better and better. With your stories, all different but you end up loving each protagonist for their essence.

heilyn

23.09.2025, 19:26

I already bought the book, but the chapters are not unlocking.