yany-gatitos

02.04.2026, 22:57

The story was going well, but what the hell is up with writing stories where the man is old enough to be the father or grandfather? I don’t understand what the goal is with this. To romanticize or normalize a relationship that in reality would never work? Because come on, scientifically, that man only has a couple of shots left in his gun, and she’s in the prime of her youth. A 10 or even 12-year age difference is acceptable, but 30 is disgusting. The story is good, and I already bought it because I didn’t know about this detail. I’ll keep reading it, but please (this is for everyone who writes these kinds of stories), don’t promote these practices. It seems like a justification for those who marry underage girls in Middle Eastern countries. I’ve read other stories of yours and loved them, but this age difference bothers me, even if it’s just a story.

ibe-al-sharif

18.06.2025, 20:53

Ciarán is going to wait for Alice and Dom's baby

liia-tanAuthor

24.03.2026, 09:12

Anton Moskaluk, Endlessly grateful!♥️♥️♥️

ibe-al-sharif

18.06.2025, 21:16

Everything was done by their parents

anatolii-luzeneckiiAuthor

20.03.2026, 13:35

Vitaliy Irklienko, Wonderful

yeleny-vargas-de-romero

26.06.2025, 18:02

The best dark book by far. Fascinating.

iuliia-ignatova

07.03.2026, 00:08

Natalia Romashko, I disagree. You probably haven't read the other sequels. There's soul invested here.

elizabeth-oporto

25.06.2025, 14:23

I absolutely loved everything being peaceful between them with no wars for now, and a happy ending for the 3 of them.

olga-xristiiancukAuthor

05.03.2026, 17:28

Natalia Rusanova, It's still unclear what his motives are.

nereida-duran-salinas

20.06.2025, 00:27

That's right, Alice, you will prepare everything against the Nordic-Italian.

uliana-pasAuthor

02.03.2026, 21:40

Lesya, He is 32. As for the wife - her name is Leila. Other names are typos. I will correct them.

mariel-silva-c

14.02.2026, 17:17

Very good story, thank you for sharing it, and I'm continuing with the second part. Congratulations!

lucy-gomez

21.05.2025, 19:54

Oh, how cuteeee!!! Everyone tamed, starting with the owner haha

xristina-pogranicna

09.02.2026, 19:02

Iren Arli, thank you)

adriana-santiago

14.05.2025, 20:07

This girl doesn't understand that the baby needs to eat, there will be time for the rest later, I can't wait to see his girl in action.

oresta-matviicukAuthor

05.02.2026, 00:18

Iryna Skrypnyk, Thank you. This was incredibly motivating)

audy-rebeca-tijerino

27.03.2025, 19:07

Finally, I'm up to date and I was able to get it, saving is important for reading.

sofiia-caikaAuthor

08.01.2026, 00:34

Ira, ❤️❤️❤️

karina-ponce-alvarado

28.03.2025, 04:47

If I were Alice, I'd leave haha, so whimsical

anna-liashhenkoAuthor

06.01.2026, 21:57

Valyya Valyya, Thank you!

nereida-duran-salinas

22.03.2025, 00:30

Hum! Dom is upset because he knows that his little girl was being killed with those pills.

sofiia-caikaAuthor

06.01.2026, 00:13

Natalia Dizhurko, thank you, Natalia!)

elizabeth

20.03.2025, 17:23

The crazy one rules, bye Gambino...haha

sofiia-caikaAuthor

04.01.2026, 00:25

Nadya, please, Nadiya!)

rebecca-aguilera

01.03.2025, 21:43

Why does it say 11 pages if I only see 9?

alia-moreinoAuthor

22.12.2025, 23:56

Mariia Poplavska, Thank you. Exactly. This time my hero is more or less positive)))

edilenny-reinoso

17.02.2025, 06:43

omg

valentina-brodskaAuthor

22.12.2025, 15:54

Natalia Farina, Thank you as well, such comments are truly inspiring! ❤️ I invite you to check out the new release❤️