Cruel Deception
About the book
Everyone told me to get over it. That time heals everything. That I should be grateful to be alive. But they weren’t there when I lost him. They didn’t see how a single sentence ripped my soul apart. They weren’t swallowed by the silence. For a year, I’ve been walking through the ruins of what we were. Pretending to breathe. Trying to forget. Until a laugh then a face forces me to look at what I never wanted to see. And I realize that the truth doesn’t just hurt more than loss… It can change everything.
Abstract of the book "Cruel Deception"
Everyone told me to get over it. That time heals everything. That I should be grateful to be alive. But they weren’t there when I lost him. They didn’t see how a single sentence ripped my soul apart. They weren’t swallowed by the silence. For a year, I’ve been walking through the ruins of what we were. Pretending to breathe. Trying to forget. Until a laugh then a face forces me to look at what I never wanted to see. And I realize that the truth doesn’t just hurt more than loss… It can change everything.
747 comments
marlene-kobernick13.04.2026, 15:25Beautiful story, captivating from the first chapter.... I wish I had a Thorne in my life haha... that ending was beautiful with a fulfilled Sloane as a woman, artist, mother, and wife.
yazmin-espinoza11.04.2026, 16:00Wonderful story from beginning to end, thank you for sharing it. Who wouldn't want a Thorne in their life? And Sloane, that's about getting up from every fall and overcoming every obstacle in her life.
- yazmin-espinoza10.04.2026, 20:50
Chapter 25, who wouldn't want a Thorne like that? Nothing is too big for him when it comes to protecting his Red.
- yazmin-espinoza10.04.2026, 20:19
Wow, what an original marriage proposal in chapter 23, let's go for more, Thorne, you're the best, and his Red isn't far behind.
paulina-pacheco13.03.2026, 00:21What a beautiful ending
- delia-valdes09.03.2026, 06:46
Thank you, Writer, excellent story, I loved it. Thank you, love triumphed.
anama-anama12.12.2025, 14:23I liked the story, but WATCH OUT with the descriptions at the beginning. Sloane had green eyes that were the same as her mother's, and then they turned to hazel and identical to her father's. Other than that, excellent story, congratulations.
ivelis-colon19.02.2026, 07:37Anama Anama, hehe
ferchu16.02.2026, 02:05As always, the best ending for every story, and this one was no exception!! I loved it from start to finish!! Congratulations, Yari!!
- ferchu16.02.2026, 00:16
God, I almost had a heart attack, I thought he shot her and she didn’t even notice, I thought that’s why she fell to the ground.
caroli-soranyi-novas-reyes12.02.2026, 12:50I like it, the only thing is there are too many details, even down to how the shirt is, the buttons, and even the brand of the shoes, for God's sake.
- ferchu06.02.2026, 00:53
At least Kenneth did something good and went with Thorne. God, that woman is seriously sick.
- ferchu05.02.2026, 22:52
Chapter 27.. I want a Thorne in my life haha to give me that haha like a drawer that doesn't close..
- anyela04.02.2026, 20:28
Thanks for sharing it
maria-alvarez03.02.2026, 23:14I loved it, exciting, different. It was worth buying. Congratulations on your writing, wishing you more success.
nenag15.01.2026, 03:43Finally, I was able to finish reading it, and another one of your stories that I loved. Thorne and his red one are so beautiful that they inspire...