manuela-br

02.04.2026, 22:19

I liked the story, external beauty often hides the worst evil.

mnm

13.03.2026, 21:17

Very good story, by polishing some details, mainly spelling, you would achieve excellent results! Please continue. Blessings! Thank you!!

evee-storm

09.01.2026, 21:53

This story doesn't just flow, it moves. Every moment feels alive, like watching how light changes on a canvas. The characters breathe, the silences speak. It's rare to find writing that feels both like poetry and truth. Honestly, I can already imagine it as a short film or an animated piece; it has that kind of quiet beauty that stays with you.

siham-jousef

07.10.2025, 19:19

Very beautiful story, I loved it, short, but absolutely beautiful

justkarma

02.08.2025, 18:28

very nice, ❤️

graciela-kummer

29.03.2025, 17:28

Beautiful story!!!!!!

raquel-quero

03.10.2024, 06:22

Beautiful short story!! Keep writing

angela

16.09.2024, 20:56

Very beautiful and tender story. PURA VIDA FROM COSTA RICA

isabel-sotelo

18.08.2024, 16:05

Wow.. I loved it.. even though it's a children's story, I really liked it.. congratulations

isabel-sotelo

18.08.2024, 16:05

Wow.. I loved it.. even though it's a children's story, I really liked it.. congratulations

yuder-guti

01.08.2024, 03:41

I absolutely loved your novels hahaha yes, yours, because I'm almost done reading all of them hahahaha I say it again, they're going to kick me out of my house

magalis-sotomayor-guerra

09.06.2024, 22:21

Very good story, I loved it, don't stop writing fantasies, you do it very well, blessings

jimena-paezAuthor

10.06.2024, 03:33

Magalis Sotomayor Guerra, thank you

karyncel

19.01.2024, 17:05

Lovely story...

yadira-reyes-cruz

07.10.2023, 02:47

I liked it, it's a very nice story

irene-dome

28.08.2023, 18:05

Beautiful story, short but beautiful. Congratulations and thank you for sharing it!