Abstract of the book "Brenna: Finding Herself"
All my life, I lived in a remote, forgotten village on the edge of the kingdom, but a twist of fate turns everything upside down. Now, in the capital, I’m studying magic under an insufferable master, unraveling the mystery of my birth, searching for my mother, and caught in a whirlwind of intrigue. And amidst all this chaos, love sneaks up on me, unbidden and relentless.
195 comments
xanna-trunova17.10.2025, 20:01Well, there you go again! You wrote a story that I devoured in one go! Probably that's why I wait for them to be finished, so I don't read slowly, but all at once...)) Heh...))) I really liked the characters getting closer. That mix of bickering and tenderness... You know I love that kind of thing...)) The Magister is quite a thorn in the side, but by the end, he softened up, just a sweetheart. Though, to be honest, I was a bit worried about Berna, because when he's drunk... It's a pity that her first kiss happened when he was in that intoxicated state((( And I also have some guesses about Brenna's mom. I suspect it's the one the Magister was involved with. You didn't mention her for no reason, I think, not just to show Brenna's jealousy... Anyway, soon (but don't check every day, because I'm a lazy snail) there will be a little surprise from me for not commenting on all the chapters and for the fact that I really loved this story =)))
tetiana-ovcinnikova23.10.2025, 10:00Hanna Trunova, Yes, I've already read it))) Thank you!
- xanna-trunova16.10.2025, 21:13
2. A "hot" meeting. That magister is not happy with Brenna, his character is just nasty! Probably, something happened in his life that turned him into a complete thorn. And also this "completely burned out." Why? It hasn’t been 100 years, and I’m back to reading, hehe)
xanna-trunova17.10.2025, 11:27Tetyana Ovchinnikova, you'll catch up someday)
- xanna-trunova16.10.2025, 22:59
7. Brenna, the little housewife...))) And who could have tidied up, huh?) Where was such a handsome master heading?)
tetiana-ovcinnikova17.10.2025, 10:30Hanna Trunova, Haha, can't sit still while the men are wandering who knows where)))
- xanna-trunova16.10.2025, 22:49
6. Indeed, she needs to be very cautious, a letter could come from just about anyone... And Tern's letter brought such a sense of comfort. He's a good friend, Tern)))
tetiana-ovcinnikova17.10.2025, 10:29Hanna Trunova, Yes, very good) They even suggested him to me as a main character here)))
- xanna-trunova16.10.2025, 21:49
5. With such sparks between them, no magic is needed! I feel like the whole house will burn down soon;)
tetiana-ovcinnikova17.10.2025, 10:29Hanna Trunova, Well, it won't burn, but it will definitely smoke)))
- xanna-trunova16.10.2025, 21:26
3.4. Indeed, Brenna is a true gem if her mom did such things to her... It's not something you can just understand...
tetiana-ovcinnikova16.10.2025, 21:29Hanna Trunova, Yeah, it gets even more interesting with Brenna's past)
olga-skoba15.10.2025, 09:14Very interestingly written. I read it with great pleasure in one breath. Thank you to the author. Wishing you inspiration and success.
tetiana-ovcinnikova15.10.2025, 11:54Olga Skoba, thank you for responding) I'm very pleased!
iuliia-pjelt15.10.2025, 00:06Oh. Finally, it happened — they kissed.
tetiana-ovcinnikova15.10.2025, 00:10Yuliya Pelt, It hasn't even been thirty chapters)))
mister-x14.10.2025, 09:49Seducer)) Won't he regret his actions in such a state?) Going to read the new release!)
tetiana-ovcinnikova15.10.2025, 00:10Mister X, I'm trying to keep the balance)))
lydmila14.10.2025, 20:31Well, look at that, that's what alcohol does, he went and said nasty things to the girl, and then tried to kiss her. Of course, Brenna was stunned, but she didn't push him away. I'm curious how Aiden will behave in the morning. ❤️❤️
tetiana-ovcinnikova14.10.2025, 22:43Lydmila, Well, he was offended that Trena was chosen. So he snapped) And it won’t be any different, he’ll cool off, as always)
tetiana-xudia14.10.2025, 10:49If only this kiss had happened when Aiden wasn't drunk, because who knows if he'll remember it when he sobers up.))
tetiana-ovcinnikova14.10.2025, 11:22Tetyana Khudya, Well, they haven't gotten closer yet, even though both of them want it) And yes, both are a bit quirky)))
anna-vovik14.10.2025, 08:59Oh, Aiden has said so much nonsense. At least he came to his senses in the end. Finally! I want to say, something has shifted from a standstill for them. I'm off to the second book. Thank you!
tetiana-ovcinnikova14.10.2025, 09:49Anna Vovik, Naive...))) I think you've already seen that nothing has moved))) And a huge thank you to you ❤️❤️❤️
nata-bond14.10.2025, 08:50Thank you! I really liked the book!❤️ Now diving into the second one))
tetiana-ovcinnikova14.10.2025, 09:48Nata Bond, Thank you for your support!))) And happy reading!)
anna-potii14.10.2025, 06:54Well, what a jealous guy he is!))) But it's good that they understood each other. And finally, a kiss. At the end of the book. Awesome!)) Congratulations on finishing. The new cover is nice, although I liked the previous one too, it had a certain atmosphere. On this one, I’d like the title to be a bit lower.
tetiana-ovcinnikova14.10.2025, 09:47Anna Potiy, Haha, she's quite jealous!))) And you've already seen that the kiss didn't do much good ':-) In my defense, I'll say that I won't keep them waiting for too long))) Or are they the ones keeping me waiting?) The previous cover didn't really attract much attention. As for the title - I had to cover the heroine's hands with it because the AI just wouldn't do it ':-) I'll try to tinker with it later.)
- mister-x12.10.2025, 10:38
And the Master is jealous, jealous, jealous He thinks that Tren is kissing her, kissing, kissing How can one not be jealous, not be jealous, When the heart forces him to love Brenna. Oh, unbearable Master, Master, Master Why have you taken up all the free space? In my heart, which has fallen in love, Why did it come so easily to you??.. My dear Brenna, my enchantress, Why have you sunk so deeply into my heart?.. I secretly sigh for you here, I’m angry at my friend, because I love you. Where were you wandering last night? You damned rogue, I even want to strike you, For not staying with me when I so wanted it, Because when you’re near, my body feels warm. (Updated version, there will be no continuation)
mister-x13.10.2025, 12:16Tetyana Ovchinnikova, hahaha, exactly about her))
Brenna: Finding Herself
About the book
All my life, I lived in a remote, forgotten village on the edge of the kingdom, but a twist of fate turns everything upside down. Now, in the capital, I’m studying magic under an insufferable master, unraveling the mystery of my birth, searching for my mother, and caught in a whirlwind of intrigue. And amidst all this chaos, love sneaks up on me, unbidden and relentless.
195 comments
- xanna-trunova17.10.2025, 20:01
Well, there you go again! You wrote a story that I devoured in one go! Probably that's why I wait for them to be finished, so I don't read slowly, but all at once...)) Heh...))) I really liked the characters getting closer. That mix of bickering and tenderness... You know I love that kind of thing...)) The Magister is quite a thorn in the side, but by the end, he softened up, just a sweetheart. Though, to be honest, I was a bit worried about Berna, because when he's drunk... It's a pity that her first kiss happened when he was in that intoxicated state((( And I also have some guesses about Brenna's mom. I suspect it's the one the Magister was involved with. You didn't mention her for no reason, I think, not just to show Brenna's jealousy... Anyway, soon (but don't check every day, because I'm a lazy snail) there will be a little surprise from me for not commenting on all the chapters and for the fact that I really loved this story =)))
tetiana-ovcinnikova23.10.2025, 10:00Hanna Trunova, Yes, I've already read it))) Thank you!
- xanna-trunova16.10.2025, 21:13
2. A "hot" meeting. That magister is not happy with Brenna, his character is just nasty! Probably, something happened in his life that turned him into a complete thorn. And also this "completely burned out." Why? It hasn’t been 100 years, and I’m back to reading, hehe)
xanna-trunova17.10.2025, 11:27Tetyana Ovchinnikova, you'll catch up someday)
- xanna-trunova16.10.2025, 22:59
7. Brenna, the little housewife...))) And who could have tidied up, huh?) Where was such a handsome master heading?)
tetiana-ovcinnikova17.10.2025, 10:30Hanna Trunova, Haha, can't sit still while the men are wandering who knows where)))
- xanna-trunova16.10.2025, 22:49
6. Indeed, she needs to be very cautious, a letter could come from just about anyone... And Tern's letter brought such a sense of comfort. He's a good friend, Tern)))
tetiana-ovcinnikova17.10.2025, 10:29Hanna Trunova, Yes, very good) They even suggested him to me as a main character here)))
- xanna-trunova16.10.2025, 21:49
5. With such sparks between them, no magic is needed! I feel like the whole house will burn down soon;)
tetiana-ovcinnikova17.10.2025, 10:29Hanna Trunova, Well, it won't burn, but it will definitely smoke)))
- xanna-trunova16.10.2025, 21:26
3.4. Indeed, Brenna is a true gem if her mom did such things to her... It's not something you can just understand...
tetiana-ovcinnikova16.10.2025, 21:29Hanna Trunova, Yeah, it gets even more interesting with Brenna's past)
- olga-skoba15.10.2025, 09:14
Very interestingly written. I read it with great pleasure in one breath. Thank you to the author. Wishing you inspiration and success.
tetiana-ovcinnikova15.10.2025, 11:54Olga Skoba, thank you for responding) I'm very pleased!
- iuliia-pjelt15.10.2025, 00:06
Oh. Finally, it happened — they kissed.
tetiana-ovcinnikova15.10.2025, 00:10Yuliya Pelt, It hasn't even been thirty chapters)))
- mister-x14.10.2025, 09:49
Seducer)) Won't he regret his actions in such a state?) Going to read the new release!)
tetiana-ovcinnikova15.10.2025, 00:10Mister X, I'm trying to keep the balance)))
- lydmila14.10.2025, 20:31
Well, look at that, that's what alcohol does, he went and said nasty things to the girl, and then tried to kiss her. Of course, Brenna was stunned, but she didn't push him away. I'm curious how Aiden will behave in the morning. ❤️❤️
tetiana-ovcinnikova14.10.2025, 22:43Lydmila, Well, he was offended that Trena was chosen. So he snapped) And it won’t be any different, he’ll cool off, as always)
- tetiana-xudia14.10.2025, 10:49
If only this kiss had happened when Aiden wasn't drunk, because who knows if he'll remember it when he sobers up.))
tetiana-ovcinnikova14.10.2025, 11:22Tetyana Khudya, Well, they haven't gotten closer yet, even though both of them want it) And yes, both are a bit quirky)))
- anna-vovik14.10.2025, 08:59
Oh, Aiden has said so much nonsense. At least he came to his senses in the end. Finally! I want to say, something has shifted from a standstill for them. I'm off to the second book. Thank you!
tetiana-ovcinnikova14.10.2025, 09:49Anna Vovik, Naive...))) I think you've already seen that nothing has moved))) And a huge thank you to you ❤️❤️❤️
- nata-bond14.10.2025, 08:50
Thank you! I really liked the book!❤️ Now diving into the second one))
tetiana-ovcinnikova14.10.2025, 09:48Nata Bond, Thank you for your support!))) And happy reading!)
- anna-potii14.10.2025, 06:54
Well, what a jealous guy he is!))) But it's good that they understood each other. And finally, a kiss. At the end of the book. Awesome!)) Congratulations on finishing. The new cover is nice, although I liked the previous one too, it had a certain atmosphere. On this one, I’d like the title to be a bit lower.
tetiana-ovcinnikova14.10.2025, 09:47Anna Potiy, Haha, she's quite jealous!))) And you've already seen that the kiss didn't do much good ':-) In my defense, I'll say that I won't keep them waiting for too long))) Or are they the ones keeping me waiting?) The previous cover didn't really attract much attention. As for the title - I had to cover the heroine's hands with it because the AI just wouldn't do it ':-) I'll try to tinker with it later.)
- mister-x12.10.2025, 10:38
And the Master is jealous, jealous, jealous He thinks that Tren is kissing her, kissing, kissing How can one not be jealous, not be jealous, When the heart forces him to love Brenna. Oh, unbearable Master, Master, Master Why have you taken up all the free space? In my heart, which has fallen in love, Why did it come so easily to you??.. My dear Brenna, my enchantress, Why have you sunk so deeply into my heart?.. I secretly sigh for you here, I’m angry at my friend, because I love you. Where were you wandering last night? You damned rogue, I even want to strike you, For not staying with me when I so wanted it, Because when you’re near, my body feels warm. (Updated version, there will be no continuation)
mister-x13.10.2025, 12:16Tetyana Ovchinnikova, hahaha, exactly about her))