iuliia-pjelt

08.02.2026, 17:07

Interesting bonus. Thank you

milena-foksAuthor

08.02.2026, 17:22

Yuliya Pelt, Thank you ☺️

veter-veterovich

01.12.2025, 20:20

Wow, what a dragon. I want one like that))

milena-foksAuthor

01.12.2025, 21:37

veter Veterovich, I'm not against it either)) it's a pity that he only exists in the book

anna

24.09.2025, 21:32

A very interesting story in a beautifully described universe. It's pleasant to immerse oneself in a completely new atmosphere. Airi is so multifaceted, not only in terms of abilities but also in emotions and actions. Reygar is a wonderful man who treats others with complete respect. I would really love to read more about Rey, their communication with Airi. Overall, the characters have become dear to me while reading the book. Thank you, dear author, for your creativity! And also for the opportunity to read books for free. I will definitely read your other works (though perhaps a bit later). I have a comment: maybe move the "dictionaries" to the beginning of the book or chapter? Or provide explanations in parentheses right away.

iurii-karlas

14.05.2025, 06:02

Thanks for the interesting book, but with my pension, I can’t afford to buy books.

lesia

12.04.2025, 23:22

Thank you for the incredible book!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️

nincik

06.04.2025, 17:15

Thank you, thank you, thank you! It was incredibly exciting and endlessly interesting! Thank you again and I wish inspiration to the Author!

amfira

02.04.2025, 02:44

Good day. The book is simply amazing, the storyline is clear, the characters, scenes, emotions, magic, and even the history are well described. My praise as a reader. But as you know, there are no stones in this world that you don’t stumble over. In your case, it’s not a big one. In my opinion, it’s the frequent repetition of scenes or emotions between two active characters. I’m not against showing things from different perspectives, but here it feels excessive. Towards the end of the book, you improved and started repeating less. So, I really hope that in the new book, you will reduce such repetitions. Overall, I liked the book, the adventures are very captivating, and the true love is touching. Great praise for your creativity and for coming up with something new. Thank you for the emotions you’ve given. Wishing you an easy pen, an ocean of inspiration, and a universe of imagination. Your fan, Amphira Vayson.

tetiana-ovcinnikova

30.03.2025, 23:58

How nice it is sometimes to see nothing and do nothing, just to listen ':-) So, I’ve finished reading) And what can I say... This is just - WOW!))) I’m completely thrilled! I was surprised right at the beginning when the heroine didn’t start fussing but calmly accepted the information about the true one. And in general, a million likes for sensible characters whom you don’t want to smack after every sentence ':-) I don’t know who felt something was missing, for me, the book was a complete treat))) And that nickname "Caramelka"! Mmm, such a delight))) Thank you for the pleasure!❤️❤️❤️

valeriia-kusnarenko

17.03.2025, 10:03

Your book gave me an incredible sense of lightness and immersed me in an atmosphere of warmth and sincere emotions. I especially liked how naturally and harmoniously the relationships between the characters develop – without unnecessary drama, contrived conflicts, or unnatural obstacles. Their feelings unfold smoothly, the emotions are genuine, and the dialogues are lively and effortless. This makes the story not just pleasant to read, but also one that inspires trust and resonates in the heart. I also want to highlight the light narrative style, which allows the reader to fully dive into the plot and enjoy every page. The characters are real, their actions are logical, and their journey is interesting and captivating. Your book leaves a pleasant aftertaste, and that is probably the best thing a good story can offer. Thank you for this literary gift! I look forward to your new works!

tatiana-koiliak

11.03.2025, 10:34

Wonderful debut! Wishing you inspiration and creative energy! I will be looking forward to new stories.

kara-dzeners

25.02.2025, 09:56

Thank you for the interesting book!

angelina-laktionova

23.01.2025, 22:47

Thank you for such a wonderful book

dianka-bondarcuk

09.01.2025, 18:54

A very beautiful, emotional, and tender story, thank you for such a book.

cizskaia-dasa

09.01.2025, 08:41

Will there be a second part? I want a continuation of this amazing story.

ira-ivanys

07.01.2025, 22:25

I read it in one breath, with pleasure. It's written very tenderly and romantically. Thank you