A surprise baby? Never! by Karoline AP
A surprise baby? Never! by Karoline AP

A surprise baby? Never!

Completed
 · 152 p. · Romantic Comedy

About the book

One night of fun can change everything. The sweet, quiet, and responsible girl everyone knew vanished the moment she had one drink too many. In a single lapse of judgment, she walked away with a "prize" she’ll have to carry for nine months—and more importantly, for the rest of her life. Her main problem isn't just becoming a mother, though. It's the headache of figuring out: Who is the father? Is it her boss, or her boss's best friend? With two potential suspects, she’s about to be swept up in a funny, emotional, and romantic journey. Will she solve this riddle of love? Can she handle such a massive responsibility? That remains to be seen. For now, all she can do is look in the mirror and tell herself: A surprise baby? Never!


34 comments

  • ev avatar
    ev
    06.02.2026, 23:23

    Your story has a beautiful balance between emotion, imagination, and expression. Each scene is powerful in its own way and leaves a lasting impression on the reader. The writing is so immersive that its feeling lingers long after finishing the story. A truly heartfelt work. I’m an artist, and if this story were adapted into a visual format, it would look absolutely incredible. My contact: D¡sc0rd: eve_verse_ | ¡nst@gram: eve_verse_

  • mercedes-brisco avatar
    mercedes-brisco
    13.12.2025, 02:41

    Congratulations, a beautiful story. Big kisses from Argentina

  • myriam avatar
    myriam
    05.09.2025, 02:55

    15: Let's see what happens next

  • myriam avatar
    myriam
    05.09.2025, 02:48

    14: I think that asking for that help was not the best decision.

  • myriam avatar
    myriam
    18.08.2025, 02:51

    She needs to resolve her internal issues, focus on her goals regarding her pregnancy and baby, before seeking a man's love. Hugs

  • myriam avatar
    myriam
    18.08.2025, 02:40

    12: And here we go again with those damned ones, doing evil things!

  • angieluz avatar
    angieluz
    18.08.2025, 01:25

    I think this time Beatriz goes too far

  • myriam avatar
    myriam
    16.08.2025, 01:49

    Situations that are not clear at all! Hugs

  • myriam avatar
    myriam
    16.08.2025, 01:41

    10: The gossip is going to spill the beans now!

  • anny-de-hoyos avatar
    anny-de-hoyos
    16.08.2025, 00:34

    How beautiful they are, I hope she stays with both and has twins, one from each.

  • angieluz avatar
    angieluz
    15.08.2025, 20:02

    Oh God, we need to know who the real father is, what a thing

  • myriam avatar
    myriam
    12.08.2025, 22:59

    Bad attitude from the boss, without first reviewing the evidence. Hugs

  • angieluz avatar
    angieluz
    12.08.2025, 22:37

    Walter, seriously? 0 points for you, she was the one who was attacked, it's unfair.

  • anny-de-hoyos avatar
    anny-de-hoyos
    12.08.2025, 17:18

    I hope Alizée makes the mistake of believing that the baby is his. And I hope those witches recorded what they did to her.

  • myriam avatar
    myriam
    10.08.2025, 01:19

    I hope she stands firm and rejects the supposed father of her child. Hugs