a great idea by Jimena Paez - (18+)
a great idea by Jimena Paez - (18+)

a great idea

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About the book

They grew up together, and in high school, she decided to confess her love in front of the entire school, but all she received was ridicule and rejection from all the students. That love turned into hatred, and they were enemies ever since. To get rid of her parents, and with the great idea of ​​her friend, they decide to pretend to be a couple, but their lie is discovered, and as punishment, they are abandoned on an island. Until she conceives, they will not be able to regain their freedom. My story, partial or complete copying is prohibited. Free story.


163 comments

  • jake-dylan avatar
    jake-dylan
    16.12.2025, 22:24

    Your dedication to the world and its lore is genuinely inspiring; every detail feels intentional and adds to the richness of the setting. I feel like I could spend hours just exploring the environment you've built. I want to give a huge shoutout for the brilliant chapter you just published: it was everything I hoped for and much more. You have a true talent for storytelling. Bravo!

  • kasalong avatar
    kasalong
    08.09.2024, 05:39

    Very nice, thank you :)

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    aleksa-sanaia
    06.08.2025, 17:30

    Yeliena MarchenkoI am sincerely grateful to you for such feedback)) There's a small issue, I write slower than you read, I need to activate turbo mode)) I am very glad that you are my reader, I appreciate it, thank you, and I will try not to disappoint, but only to delight with new interesting stories. ♥

  • claudia-germosen-vasquez avatar
    claudia-germosen-vasquez
    15.06.2025, 07:42

    Beautiful story, I liked it a lot, thank you for sharing it.

  • irma-gonzalez avatar
    irma-gonzalez
    20.04.2025, 21:34

    Beautiful story with a happy ending.

  • ana-maria-fabrizi avatar
    ana-maria-fabrizi
    08.04.2025, 04:28

    WOOO. Spectacular story, very good. Thanks for sharing it. SUCCESS.

  • mercedes-zarandon avatar
    mercedes-zarandon
    11.03.2025, 01:54

    Very nice story, I wish you much success. Personally, I can't buy, but I read the free ones and recommend them to anyone who can buy. I don't have any social media other than WhatsApp.

  • leisamorillo avatar
    leisamorillo
    15.11.2024, 02:29

    I loved this beautiful story so much.❤️❤️ It hooked me from the first chapter; the two make a lovely couple.❤️

  • purificacion-carnerero avatar
    purificacion-carnerero
    10.11.2024, 01:13

    I loved it so much

  • nillered-vela-lozano avatar
    nillered-vela-lozano
    24.09.2024, 02:22

    Congratulations, excellent

  • isabel-sotelo avatar
    isabel-sotelo
    14.08.2024, 05:48

    Wow.. stories that hook you from the start.. congratulations!!

  • roxana avatar
    roxana
    14.05.2024, 22:38

    Hello, at the beginning I felt embarrassed, I was worried about Vivian's situation on the island, but in the end, a happy ending.

  • angela-corredor-de-quintana avatar
    angela-corredor-de-quintana
    02.05.2024, 17:16

    I loved it, thank you

  • adriana-maria-vergara-giraldo avatar
    adriana-maria-vergara-giraldo
    10.04.2024, 16:37

    very funny I liked it a lot thank you congratulations

  • nayare-pis avatar
    nayare-pis
    06.04.2024, 21:17

    Beautiful story, I loved that crazy family and that long-lasting love, thank you for creating also for those of us who can't buy.

  • tere-mendoza avatar
    tere-mendoza
    04.04.2024, 21:26

    I loved it!

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